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如何為博士研究生涯選擇正確的科系 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 8/31/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何為博士研究生涯選擇正確的科系 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(581) Case study report writing
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (12/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (89) (上)
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如何為博士研究生涯選擇正確的科系 (PART B)

對相關的科系要提出的問題如下:

*研究生如何被對待?

*研究生對他們的研究顧問滿意嗎?

*你想合作的教授的學生對其老師的滿意度如何?

*科系內的研究生整體滿意度是如何?

*科系為學生提供何種設備和辦公研究空間?

Source: Applying to Ph.D. Programs in Computer Science (scribd)

學術英文投稿教學影片(581) Case study report writing
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代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (12/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Besides their method relying on the existence of MLEs, it does not consider the variability of control factors.

10. Inventory replenishment policies are considered for deteriorating items in a declining market under a continuous price increase. They lead to a differential equation that describes the system’s inventory dynamics.

11. Driving a car and talking on a cellular phone at the same time is dangerous; this could cause an accident.

12. When different approaches employ variables to implement the procedure, they encounter several obstacles.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Loại bỏ các vấn đề về chỉnh sửa (8/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo
chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (202): Searching library catalogs
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (28) (phần
1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (89) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our most recent project focused on how to avoid high costs of adopting a rotation cycle policy in product inventory. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Inventory refers to the stock of any organizational-related item or resource. All firms maintaining an inventory supply can satisfy demand with respect to product variation. However, a large inventory may incur long product cycle times. Additionally, the proportion of inventory and setup costs of a production line to the total operational fund in a company is extremely high, highlighting the importance of developing a more economic inventory order model to satisfy production requirements. 介紹管理問題 The economic production quantity (EPQ) model derives an optimal production lot size that minimizes overall inventory costs for a single item. However, a situation in which multiple items are scheduled on a single facility does not ensure a feasible EPQ solution for each individual item in order to prevent stock depletion during the production cycle. The rotation cycle policy assumes that exactly one setup is available for each product during each cycle. Additionally, all products are manufactured in the same sequence during each production cycle. Despite its feasibility, the rotation cycle approach is not optimal in terms of minimizing overall production costs. For instance, for product m1 with a production time twice that of m2, the rotation cycle obtains a feasible solution. Both products are manufactured once in a single cycle, with the total cost significantly higher than the sum of two single optimal solutions. However, using a diagrammatic explanation, a solution can be easily found that produces m1 once and produces m2 twice during each cycle. The latter method is obviously better than the former is. The rotation cycle policy is developed to adjust EPQ when multiple items are scheduled on a single facility, as well as to adjust the production time of all products to the same frequency. Doing so can lead to the establishment of a simple and accessible formula. However, when products vary too widely in terms of manufacturing time, adopting the rotation cycle policy creates a feasible solution, but not optimal one, leading to a markedly higher cost as well.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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如何閱讀學術教科書 – 密西根大學資訊學院 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/15/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何閱讀學術教科書 – 密西根大學資訊學院
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (481) Writing in the Sciences 4.5 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 14/5/2015
* 避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (7/9)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (40) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何閱讀學術教科書 – 密西根大學資訊學院

* 閱讀整個事件

* 決定你會花多少時間

* 有一個目的和策略

*閱讀積極

* 讀三次

* 專注於訊息含量高的部分

* 請在文本頁緣標示出重點

* 閱讀有關作者和組織的資訊

*了解您正在閱讀材料的理論和實際意義。

* 使用你的潛意識來吸收這本書的內容

Source: How to Read a Book University of Michigan School of Information (umich)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (481) Writing in the Sciences 4.5 – Stanford University Online
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 14/5/2015:

* Đưa ra các động từ có ý nghĩa mạnh (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (8/12)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (69): How to predict interview questions

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (10) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (7/9)

避完不必要的句中轉換.

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Communicators must share a common language or protocol so that we can easily understand each other.

2. A computer mouse needs some available workspace and even the beginning user can operate them with
very little difficulty.

3. Execute the program commands and the iteration steps must be repeated.

4. The supervisor asked her employees if the assignment was ready and could it be handed in tomorrow.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (40) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we created a selection model for medical information system outsourcing to evaluate the reliability of potential contractors. The proposed model can integrate various evaluation criteria suitable for the medical sector, thus ensuring excellent software quality that complies with National Health Insurance regulation. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The nominal group technique of Delbec and Van de Ven was adopted to accumulate the results of interviews and experts in the field and, then, those results were applied for use in the evaluation criteria. Two evaluation methods were then used to compare the processes for selecting potential vendors. Next, analytic hierarchy process (AHP) was used to establish evaluation criteria for the proposed framework. Additionally, using the AHP model, a survey was designed using a two-pair comparison in order to respond to HIS outsourcing demand scores for each item. Moreover, fuzzy set theory was combined with AHP to calculate the weights and optimum scheme. 管理方案主要成果總結Our results indicated that the proposed selection model for medical information system outsourcing can facilitate clinicians in decision making and assist with the HIS outsourcing selection. The evaluation results can provide hospital administrators with a decision-making and evaluation criteria that actively encourages the medical sector outsource to information technology contractors. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 In addition to avoiding unnecessary risks and reducing overhead costs, the proposed selection model incorporates an AHP evaluation model and several evaluation criteria for large-scale hospitals outsourcing their technological needs. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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如何撰寫教學理念聲明 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 4/25/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何撰寫教學理念聲明
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (461) Writing in the Sciences 1.3 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 24/4/2015:
* 去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (11 / 12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (35) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何撰寫教學理念聲明

* 不要只是從您的履歷複製資料。

* 不要含糊或無意義的說明教學目標或理念。應提供實際的例子或證據。

* 盡量簡短。使您的文字簡潔,且盡可能明確。避免過度使用陳述例如“,” I run a student-centered classroom.“

* 詳細說明你的教學理念如何配合研究原則

* 盡可能謙虛,不誇大你的成就。

* 請記住,教學的主角是學生,而不是教師可以如何使自己得到私人利益

* 專注於你的教學,但也說明你的研究如何影響授課。

* 說明你的教學理論方法和如何使用在課堂作業的指定上。

Source: How to Write a Statement of Teaching Philosophy (chronicle)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (461) Writing in the Sciences 1.3 – Stanford University Online
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 24/4/2015

* Mời Loa và tư vấn (Truyền thông trực tuyến hiệu quả)

– Mời một diễn giả

– Mô tả mục đích của bài giảng

– Giải thích chi tiết của bài giảng

– Mô tả giao thông vận tải và chỗ ở chi tiết

– Hướng dẫn người nói những gì để chuẩn bị trước khi chuyến thăm

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (49) : ‘What is an academic interview like?’

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (9) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Business Management)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (11 / 12)

修飾語必須放在所要修飾的字之旁。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. Before moving into the student dormitory, full payment for the semester was required by the school.

6. As a computer instructor, students must be closely monitored.

7. To excel in academics, concentration skills must be developed.

8. To compensate the invited speaker for his participation, hotel accommodations and roundtrip airfare
were provided by the conference committee.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (35) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we applied various combinations of stock prices, strategies of service level and optimized model decision system to strengthen the effective management of stock, dynamic simulation and analysis of an enterprise’s performance. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The stock policy, stock cost, service level and lack of goods strategy were analyzed using a dynamic model. A criterion to assess the operational performance of enterprises was then designed based on interviews with experts in the field. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that, once established, a stock administrative decision system can calculate effectively the most economic amount for purchase, the optimal purchase opportunity and optimal stock policy. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed stock administrative decision system can identify the most economical purchase quantity, optimal purchase opportunity and optimal stock policy, thus enabling administrators to make the best decisions and enhance the performance of operations. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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在學科教學中的第一年:應有什麼期望和應避免事項 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 4/15/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 在學科教學中的第一年:應有什麼期望和應避免事項
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (451) Web of Science: All Databases Search
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 14/4/2015
* 去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (1 / 12)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (33) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

在學科教學中的第一年:應有什麼期望和應避免事項

* 管理您的期望

* 確定適當的教材量以涵蓋一個學期的課程

* 確定需要多少時間,回答學生的問題,並澄清在每個類開始和結束的信息。

* 用最新的方法和理論來更新課程。

* 準備教學課程,並尋找一個全職或兼職的位置,如果你並不是在一個永久的教學崗位。

* 找到支持你教學的方法 – 無論是技術還是一種新的管理時間的方法。

Source: The First Year in Academia: What to Expect, What to Avoid, and How to Make it Through in One Piece (tufts.edu)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (451) Web of Science: All Databases Search
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 14/4/2015

* Sử dụng động từ thay vì danh từ (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo
chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh) (5/10)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (38): Will my age count against me an
academic job interview?

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Y khoa đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (6) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Radiotechnology)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (1 / 12)

修飾語必須放在所要修飾的字之旁。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. To succeed in the laboratory, diligence is essential due to the fact that
many experiments are necessary.

2. Before submitting a graduate school application, the institution should be
selected.

3. Pressing the start button prior to operations, the machine turned on.

4. When simulating the environment, the outcome yielded some surprising
results.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (33) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事
項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽
涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a planning and navigational system for brain surgery based on 3D computer graphics and an infrared ray tracking device. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 2D CT images were reconstructed to 3D models and any cross-section can be displayed immediately on a monitor. A tracking device was then installed on the surgical instrument to monitor its position and direction during surgery. Next, the transformation matrix of the reconstructed 3D model and instrument’s coordinate systems were calculated automatically based on the reference points of the patient’s face. Additionally, the instrument was displayed in the 3D reconstructed image exactly. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed system can enable surgeons to diagnose maladies and plan the surgery easily and precisely. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Besides enabling surgeons to identify the target properly and simplify operational procedures, the proposed system can reduce errors of the estimated target to less than 1 cm, thus minimizing complications and patient trauma. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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“我在研究論文中被點名感謝,但我應該是一個作家”(PART A) (研究出版倫理)研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 4/8/2015

Adams The Tetons and the Snake River

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* “我在研究論文中被點名感謝,但我應該是一個作家”(PART A) (研究出版倫理)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (444) Peer review in 3 minutes
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 7/4/2015
* 句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (6/12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (31) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

“我在研究論文中被點名感謝,但我應該是一個作家”(PART A) (研究出版倫理)(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 一個在手稿上被點名感謝的人寫信給編輯,並聲稱他應該被命名為一個作家,由於他的分析和解釋數據。

* 目前已明確雙方有一些研究報告之間的數據交換。

* 在一個點上,第一作者起先提供給投訴人作者署名權。然而在手稿被提交給期刊後,第一作者堅稱他們沒有使用投訴人的任何
分析或解釋,但他們起先是願意提供作者署名權。

* 投訴人拒絕了因為作者沒有考慮他值得署名權的貢獻。

* 不過,投訴人沒有看到提交給期刊最新版本的手稿。

* 主要作者可能已經使用了投訴人的想法,因為發表的論文確實使用了投訴人曾建議作出的解釋。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 8-07 )

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* Sử dụng thường xuyên thì chủ động (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn
bản tiếng anh) (11/12)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (32): Global Academic Careers: Exploring International
Opportunities

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (6) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

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句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (6/12)

科技英文寫作中,句子的建構必須有一致性。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. The proposed optimization procedure is made up of the following steps:
Step 1: Transform the relative importance of each response into a fuzzy number.
Step 2: Crisp scores must be assigned to the selected conversion scale.
Step 3: The quality loss is computed.
Step 4: Determine the TOPSIS value for each trial.
Step 5: The optimal factor/level combination must be determined.
Step 6: The confirmation experiment is conducted.

10. Wee [11] made a further extension of the conventional model to allow for shortages and assuming that the demand rate would decrease exponentially.

11. The relative closeness computed in TOPSIS can be used to assess the performance measurement and optimizing multi-response problems in the Taguchi method.

12. The experiment focused on determination of how process parameters affect the silicon nitride deposition process and to satisfy the industrial requirements.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (31) (上)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our group has thoroughly explored the difficulty in reducing the amount of human resources involved in handling insurer and claimant errors. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境 Complex administrative procedures within Taiwan’s National Health Insurance (NHI) scheme have led to errors in insurance claims and much inefficiency. For instance, adhering to all NHI regulations would require filling out nearly thirty forms, depending on various commercial demands, e.g., insurance claims, salary readjustment, and modification of insurer’s/claimant’s name. 介紹管理問題 With subsequent errors made over confusion in filling out appropriate forms, the NHI staff spends much time in handling errors and then requesting insurers and claimants to amend erroneous information. Despite the enormous amount of administrative time and costs involved in handling these errors, this growing concern and its larger implications have not been addressed in previous literature. The inability to gradually reduce the amount of human resources involved in handling insurer and claimant errors and simplify administrative procedures as well as NHI forms will lead not only to higher operational costs at NHI but eventually higher insurance premiums.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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期刊如何處理發表的論文是由另一位作者出版的另一篇論文的完整副本? (PART A)(研究出版倫理) 3/31/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 期刊如何處理發表的論文是由另一位作者出版的另一篇論文的完整副本? (PART A)(研究出版倫理)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (436) Writing a research proposal
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 3/30/2015
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (29) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

期刊如何處理發表的論文是由另一位作者出版的另一篇論文的完整副本? (PART A)(研究出版倫理)(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 同一作者參與了可能不端行為兩起案件:一是在審查過程中被確定的,一個在文件出版之後。

* 審稿人提醒,該文件是一個已經發表文章的完整副本。

* 期刊意識到作者和相同的研究生在一年前已經發表了一篇論文,期刊檢視這篇文章有沒有侵犯任何知識產權的問題。

* 我們的期刊然後寫信給作者,通知他們並要求作出解釋,道歉或收回。

* 筆者還獲悉,該期刊可以聯繫他們的機構針對他們的不道德行為。

* 通訊作者撤回了論文審查,但沒有對指控作出回應。該期刊後來發現作者是機構的大學校長。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 9-01)

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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 3/30/2015 :

* Sử dụng thường xuyên thì chủ động (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn
bản tiếng anh) (6/12)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (24): Writing a compelling research proposal

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (5) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)

代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. It is our opinion that, when a decision reaches the final stage, it must be implemented
promptly.

2. No adjustment factors exist if (C1) is violated, which means that the transformation approach can
be carried out.

3. Taguchi [4] treated censoring times as actual failures, which may lead to serious deficiencies.
This arises because the unobserved failure and censoring times may significantly differ.

4. A number of studies have examined how inflation affects an inventory policy, which also considered the time value of money and different inflation rates.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (29) (上)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our project addressed how to increase the effectiveness of hospitals in promoting medical treatment and services. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境 Governmental policy over Taiwan’s National Health Insurance (NHI) scheme continuously changes, especially in light of increasing medical costs and premiums as well as concern over the potential lowering of health care quality offered. Hospitals must thus emphasize marketing practices to attract patients through public relations. 介紹管理問題 Although the role of public relations in business marketing has received considerable attention, its role in hospital marketing practices has seldom been addressed. (NOTE: You need to quantify the problem that needs to be solved) The inability of a hospital to adopt public relations in its marketing practices will make it less competitive in promoting medical treatment and services.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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學術期刊如何應對作者和共同作者間可能出現的不當行為? (PART B)(研究出版倫理) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 3/30/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術期刊如何應對作者和共同作者間可能出現的不當行為? (PART B)(研究出版倫理)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (435) Developing a research question
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 29/03/2015
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (9/12)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (29) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術期刊如何應對作者和共同作者間可能出現的不當行為? (PART B)(研究出版倫理)(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 作者提交了另外兩個文件給期刊,編輯請求書面確認所列出的合作者批准他們對稿件作者署名。

* 此外,其他四個刊物也懷疑同一作者是否已經收到了其他合著者的批准。

* 在回應期刊要求澄清上述問題,作者曾威脅要起訴該期刊。不過,該期刊感到有義務繼續調查。

* 調查上述情況,期刊將召集專家小組來查證並採取進一步的行動。不過,該期刊不知道該如何繼續。

* 建議:這是非常困難的編輯在著作權糾紛上的干預。

* 編輯應與作者機構聯繫,要求他們調查署名權糾紛。

* 編輯可以並提醒那些已發表了同一作者先前論文的期刊。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 9-04)

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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 29/03/2015

* Vấn đề phương diện học thuật (Phần 1)

– Thể hiện sự quan tâm đến lĩnh vực nghiên cứu

– Những kiến thức về lĩnh vực nghiên cứu đã từng có

– Mô tả bối cảnh của vấn đề nghiên cứu và thành tựu đã đạt được

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (23): Developing a research proposal

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (5) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)

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代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (9/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. In addition to the proposed procedure considering the variability of the control factors, it can
concurrently perform censored data analysis for replicated and unreplicated experiments.

10. They showed in an earlier investigation [4] that the turned parts on CNC lathes have continuous
forms.

11. They stated in their report the manner in which changes should be made.

12. The graduate student reported to the academic advisor that his experiments were almost finished.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (29) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a novel security protocol, capable of cooperating efficiently with other energy-conserving communication protocols. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 A complex WSN was constructed to function as the operating platform. The performance of three communication protocols was then evaluated when operating with several security protocols, including the proposed one. Next, the drained energy and timing cost was compared statistically to yield the simulation results. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the power consumption does not increase, and the overhead on connection delay is under 20%.管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed protocol can be adopted to establish the foundation of energy-efficient and dependable WSNs. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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學術期刊如何應對作者和共同作者間可能出現的不當行為? (PART A)(研究出版倫理)研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 3/29/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術期刊如何應對作者和共同作者間可能出現的不當行為? (PART A)(研究出版倫理)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (434) Research Question, Methodology, and Paradigm
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 28/03/2015
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (8/12)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (29) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術期刊如何應對作者和共同作者間可能出現的不當行為? (PART A)(研究出版倫理)(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 一個評審獲悉一個作者沒有其他作者的批准就提交了一份文件給期刊編輯。

* 被提交稿件的另外兩個作者證實,筆者並被授權使用他們的名字就投稿。

* 針對這種情況,第一作者聲稱,所有的合著者知情同意出版文件的事。

* 該期刊的編輯要求書面佐證合著者給了他們的許可。

*另一個評審提出了關於同一提交稿件的道德顧慮。 *對此,筆者指出,該工作是由該大學調查,且他收到了倫理委員會批准了研究。

* 該期刊編輯還要求該批准他的大學的書面確認。

* 筆者已離開了他先前進行研究的機構,但他列出了他目前的研究機構,但為不存在的機構。
由於這些問題和內容質量不足,該期刊的編輯告訴筆者,該文件是不可能被接受。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 9-04)

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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 28/03/2015

* Sử dụng thường xuyên thì chủ động (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn
bản tiếng anh) (5/12)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (22): Writing a research proposal

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (4) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Finance)

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代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (8/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. Increasing parameter k increases the optimal ordering quantity. This affects the total system cost
as well.

6. The optimal ordering quantity increases, which increases the total system cost.

7. The conveyor belt transports the machine part to the assembly line, where it proceeds to the
workstation.

8. Taguchi’s two-step procedure can identify optimal settings of the design factors, which
minimizes the expected quadratic loss when the following conditions are met.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (29) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our project focused on ensuring reliable wireless sensor networks (WSNs). 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 WSNs have been extensively studied owing to the potential applications such as in military surveillance, elderly health care and house security. WSN devices largely operate under resource-limited conditions. Computing capability, energy, and communication bandwidth are the most precious resources. 介紹管理問題 However, a secure and energy-aware communication protocol on WSN is still unavailable for practical applications. Although the S-MAC protocol developed by We Ye et al. presents an example of specific research interests, the protocol addresses only energy conservation and self-configuration-related issues. Applying the S-MAC protocol to conjugate with other security protocols increases the connection delay of WSN by roughly 30-50%, making it impossible to establish a reliable and efficient WSN.

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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期刊審稿人和作者之間的接觸疑似導致審稿人的作者身份 (PART B) (研究出版倫理)研究生英文編修出版投稿日報: 3/28/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 期刊審稿人和作者之間的接觸疑似導致審稿人的作者身份 (PART B) (研究出版倫理)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (433) Ontology, Epistemology, and Methodology – Research Methodology
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 27/03/2015
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (7/12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (28) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

期刊審稿人和作者之間的接觸疑似導致審稿人的作者身份 (PART B) (研究出版倫理) (柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 問題:經過審稿人C推薦拒絕,因為它的內容,該期刊編輯決定拒絕文件。因為它應該被拒絕因其內容或因行為失當?

* 期刊應告知作者的機構和該不當行為的評審的機構?

* 由於審稿人A也是其他期刊的編輯委員會,期刊應通知那些期刊的編輯,並告知他們的整個情況?

* 建議:如果審稿人作出修改後的文件有重大貢獻,他可以合法地成為一個作者。

* 所以有可能是一個合法的理使審稿人作為一個作家之一和編輯需要聯繫評審,並澄清這種情況。

* 如果編輯認為該審稿人是一位作家,本文應重新審查,並發給另一個新的審稿人。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 9-05)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (433) Ontology, Epistemology, and Methodology – Research Methodology
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 27/03/2015

* Báo cáo Ứng dụng việc làm (phần 2)

– Mô tả trình độ học vấn và các thành tích có liên quan đến công việc.

– Giới thiệu các nghiên cứu và các công việc chuyên môn liên quan đến công việc.

– Mô tả các hoạt động ngoại khóa liên quan đến công việc.

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (21): What you need to know about choosing a journal

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (4) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Finance)

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代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (7/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. While the GA method searches along the contour of the optimized function, it makes no
assumption about the problem space.

2. The proposed technique is similar to industrial control charts, which makes it easily
understood by the practitioner.

3. Conventional approaches for analyzing censored data are computationally complicated and often
difficult to explain to practitioners. That explains why this work presents an effective procedure
based on the rank transformation of the responses.

4. In Taiwan’s semiconductor industry, they are applying state-of-the-art technologies in view of the
fact that the island has a highly skilled labor force.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (28) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we devised a customer ranking model by analyzing the dynamic purchasing behavior of customers and identifying the potential ones who can generate bank revenues. Those behavioral results can be used to devise diverse promotional strategies or customize products or services according to consumer needs, thus achieving market differentiation and effective management of customer relations. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 Based on numerous customer data available, a data mining method, i.e., CRISP-DM, was adopted, which combines the conventional means of data exploration with two mathematical calculations (decision tree and category nerve) to determine how various purchasing activities are related and how many factors can rank the value of a customer’s relationship. Among the factors identified included the types of products purchased, their quantity, their net interest of margin and their cost of acquisition and servicing. Factors associated with customer relations and customer life cycle were then combined to construct an enhanced management model. Next, factors of the ranking module for the proposed model were verified and adjusted to ensure that a company continuously provides quality services. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that, while the customer’s value in the customer relationship management can be determined, the proposed model significantly enhances the ability to attract new customers. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Furthermore, the proposed model is applicable to other business sectors in order to enhance the ability to identify, acquire and remain loyal and profitable customers. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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期刊審稿人和作者之間的接觸疑似導致審稿人的作者身份 (PART A) (研究出版倫理)研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 3/27/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 期刊審稿人和作者之間的接觸疑似導致審稿人的作者身份 (PART A) (研究出版倫理)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (432) Research methodology course
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 26/03/2015
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (6/12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (28) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

期刊審稿人和作者之間的接觸疑似導致審稿人的作者身份 (PART A) (研究出版倫理)(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 稿件提交到期刊,作者推薦了兩位審稿人(研究出版倫理)(包括審稿人A)。

* 經過審稿,審稿人A推薦大修訂後接受文件和評審B建議小修訂後接受文件。

* 當修改後的版本被送回到期刊,修訂後的版本現在有兩個作者,其中第二個名字是審稿人A.

* 確認後,作者證實,該修訂版合作者為作者本人和審稿人A.

* 期刊編輯認為是審稿人嚴重不當行為。

* 當被問及審稿人A如何成為共同作者,作者回答說,審稿人A提高了語法,提供了新的參考和分享實驗方法知識。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 9-05)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (432) Research methodology course
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿力
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 26/03/2015:

* Sử dụng thường xuyên thì chủ động (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn
bản tiếng anh) (4/12)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (20): How to Get Published

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Y khoa đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (3) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

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代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (6/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Only the first-order interaction effect is considered. This is since the second-order or
higher-order interaction effect can generally be ignored in industry.

10. You know that the Internet has significantly affected commercial activity worldwide.

11. It is the responsibility of the department chairman to handle all administrative matters.

12. On the shop floor, it is a standard safety precaution for workers to wear a safety helmet.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (28) (上)
強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。
* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。
* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。
* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應
* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。
* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。
* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our recent project addressed how to help banking institutions implement promotional strategies in order to draw in trustworthy customers. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境Both the increasing popularity of credit card use and growing number of Internet-based promotional activities in Taiwan has enabled banking institutions to acquire extensive customer data. In addition to helping banking institutions to execute customer management and service management efficiently, thoroughly analyzing such data can optimize marketing management practices. Corporate survival in the future hinges on the ability to know and treat customers well through analysis of pertinent data. 介紹管理問題 However, differentiated marketing practices in Taiwan are insufficient, with conventional methods of ranking customers normally based on the bank account balance for each accounting period. This basis alone does not provide a complete customer profile, and seldom incorporates strategies that analyze the commercial transaction data of customers. Insufficient information of unique customer characteristics can obviously not provide specialized services for individuals. Thus, the inability to interact compatibly with customers will cause companies to lose their focus on the product development and promotional strategies. For instance, conventional bank services fail to provide convenient services to customers efficiently. Namely, although the mail-order division of a company sends its promotional materials to its customers, only 10% of those customers subsequently purchased those advertised products. The inability to identify those 10% potential customers are in advance makes it impossible not only to save the remaining 90% overhead costs of the promotional materials, but also to prevent the sales division from concentrating on potential customers to enhance work productivity by providing upgraded products and services. Consequently, conventional customer ranking methods may cause decision makers to select inappropriate market strategies. Additionally, the lack of a differentiated marketing strategy will lead to inefficiency and high overhead costs. With an increasingly heterogeneous population in Taiwan and broadening sense of individualism island wide making it increasingly difficult to characterize the purchasing habits of consumers, banking institutions can not implement promotional strategies effectively owing to the inability not only to provide reliable services, but also to adopt differentiated marketing practices. Moreover, the inability to identify customer needs rapidly will lead to a high customer turnover rate and eventual loss of competitiveness.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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