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成功的學術作者應有的習慣 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/24/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 成功的學術作者應有的習慣
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (490) Writing in the Sciences 6.2 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 23/5/2015:
* 精確寫作 (英文編修訓練) (1/6)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (43) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

成功的學術作者應有的習慣

* 當你第一次規劃寫作時即考慮最後的定稿,:寫作應該引導研究,而不是僅是行政工作。在計劃開始時建立科技論證並以論文研
究背景考慮以下因素:A)第一部分:背景: 一)工作提案建構;二)工作問題;三)問題的量化四)的問題的中心,B)第二部
分:行動: 一)工作目標;二)達成目標的方法 三)希望的結果; 四)領域的貢獻*小心選擇你的期刊:研究期刊出版的文章來
決定是否合適投稿。

* 不要延後發表數據:請不要為了取悅主審延後發表數據 – 包括您第一次提交的數據。

* 寫連帶信件:這讓你解釋你研究的重要性。*講故事,但避免過於誇張:表明您的調查結果和建議,但不誇張

* 對主審意見徹底作出回應:確保您對主審提出的每一個點回應。您有不同意的意見,請清楚地逐點反駁。

* 被拒絕時的良好回應:如果你的研究論文被拒絕,不要在同一期刋用不同題目再投稿。應試圖理解更大的結構性問題並以主審的
建議為基礎再改寫。

Source: Writing a paper: habits of successful authors (nature)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (490) Writing in the Sciences 6.2 – Stanford University Online
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* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (78): How can academics use Word Press to spread their research on social media?

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (12) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

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精確寫作 (英文編修訓練) (1/6)

忙碌的專家們是沒有時間去逐字的閱讀冗長的報告文件,因此很多科技作者的文稿被拒絕或延遲發表,就是因為他們無法精短的表達文章意念。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. All inputs are combined by engineers to create a product.

2. Three phases of analysis are included in their approach.

3. A statistical comparison is made of the proposed procedures with Taguchi’s two-step procedure.

4. A more efficient combination among the factor levels is achieved when the control factor is
continuous.

5. Factors causing saturation include temperature, volume and weight.

Answers

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (43) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our working group has become increasingly intrigued with how to utilize time division multiplexing passive optical network (TDM PON) more efficiently to lower packet delay and enhance jitter performance. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Time division multiplexing passive optical network (TDM PON) is a promising solution to remove the bottleneck of bandwidth provisioning in current mass-deployed access networks. In TDM PON, traffic is carried by a single wavelength in each division, in which users share the bandwidth in time domain. 介紹管理問題 Given the increasing availability of bandwidth-intensive and high-quality services such as HDTV and VoIP, the capacity of current TDM systems will eventually become exhausted. Wavelength division multiplexing (WDM) PON is a promising means of upgrading the capacity and performance of current TDM systems. However, given the importance of a competitive component price for end-users in order for PON to prevail, whether to widely deploy high-priced devices in the user houses and the distant field remains questionable. Whether to use an expensive DWDM transmitter for a single user is also unknown. Besides, for services requiring high reliability, e.g., emergency call, a protection scheme is desirable for the PON system.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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應避免的七種類型的學術會議簡報 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/23/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 應避免的七種類型的學術會議簡報
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (489) Writing in the Sciences 6.1 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 22/5/2015
* 結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (6 / 6)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (42) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

應避免的七種類型的學術會議簡報

* 主講人是如此熱愛他們的話題,他們對觀眾提供過多的細節,整體表現缺乏紀律,最後所有訊息資料整合失敗。

* 主講人只有鬆散的相互關係,有沒有結構性的順序點。

* 該演示展示了許多完整的數據透明膠片。雖然表示出組織性,但是沉悶和缺乏證據:沒有故事,案例研究,代言,隱喻或類比。

* 主講人告訴許多故事,奇聞軼事,笑話,令人震驚的統計數字,與隱喻。但資料不足提出證明。

* 主講人沒有預先排練,也沒有足夠的時間來介紹計劃涵蓋的所有關鍵點。所以主講人用以下方式快速講完,“我只是快速講
過”,“如果我有足夠的時間,我會讓你知道關於X”,“我希望我有更多的時間來告訴你關於這個事件。

* 主講人並沒有事先透露,直到最後才講出最重要的點 – 就像是一個謎小說。它通常意味著,主持人沒想到觀眾的需求,只是跟
著自己的思維,導致最後的結論。

* 主講人花費那麼多時間研究背景,方法論,但主講人,很少有時間提交數據,以支持他論點。觀眾認為簡報是不完整的,因為沒
有達到真正的結論。

Source: Seven Types of Presentations to Avoid (speakingaboutpresenting)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (489) Writing in the Sciences 6.1 – Stanford University Online
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* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (11) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

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結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (6 / 6)

科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. There is a necessity for a compromise on the proposal by both parties.

10. There is no need for implementation of the environmental awareness program to be the sole
responsibility of the organizing committee.

11. The committee is in a position to make sure that the program is capable of being promulgated
successfully.

12. It is our opinion that the current system is deficient of an initial prototype.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (42) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we devised an optimal operating model, capable of selecting an effective monitor to adequately implement an internal marketing model in hospital marketing practices, subsequently providing admissions directors or hospital administrators with the most effective strategic policy to promote marketing efforts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 Statistical variables of various populations among patients and hospital staff that provide healthcare services such as training, orientation and promotion were identified using multivariate statistical analysis, i.e. one way ANOVA test and the Karl Pearson test (NOTE: Add 2-3 sentences to describe the methodology more completely). 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed optimal operating model can provide staff with a more productive working environment by adopting statistical analysis to demonstrate the effectiveness of various services, including training, orientation and promotion, enabling hospitals to understand which areas require improvement to achieve quality healthcare services. Enhanced quality of healthcare services is an indirect means of promotion, by which satisfied patients and their relatives relay their positive experiences to others, ultimately improving the image of the institution. Moreover, the proposed operating model confirms the effectiveness of internal marketing, in which organizations train and motivate their employees to provide quality healthcare services. Such an approach must precede conventional marketing practices if a hospital is to maintain its competitiveness. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻Importantly, the proposed optimal operating model can provide expectations by and of the staff, motivating them to continuously improve in their profession. Additionally, the proposed method contains an optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data for engineers. While an internal marketing program within a hospital must focus on training and career advancement for hospital staff, the proposed model can encourage training and continuous on-the-job learning through daily interaction with peers and supervisors. Furthermore, the optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data can provide a valuable reference for engineers as well.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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研究生涯自傳聲明寫作 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/22/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 研究生涯自傳聲明寫作
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (488) Writing in the Sciences 5.6 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 21/5/2015
* 結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (5 / 6)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (42) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

研究生涯自傳聲明寫作

* 一開始用開放性的句子,以得到讀者的興趣,通過描述一個有趣的現象,一個眾所周知的問題,或在你的領域的著名人士,這
給了觀眾一個你來自哪裡的想法。

* 為你的研究生涯提供了一個概述,重點是你的開場白。

* 指出你正在研究一個更廣大問題的部份內容。

* 指出你迄今已取得的成就或希望實現的結果。

* 說明你的研究經驗如何適合讀者的興趣,來確保對讀者產生最大的影響和提升其理解度。

* 舉一例說明在你的研究課題和領域下熱情研究所展示的成果。

Source: Elevating Yourself (postgraduatetoolbox)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (488) Writing in the Sciences 5.6 – Stanford University Online
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 21/5/2015

* Giải thích khó khăn trong phát triển một sản phẩm hoặc dịch vụ (Anh Viết tại nơi làm việc)

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– Giới thiệu các vấn đề chính (s) mà các nhà quản lý phải đối mặt trong việc phát triển sản phẩm hoặc
dịch vụ

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* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (76): Should academics share their ideas online? What are the
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* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (11) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

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結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (5 / 6)
科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. A significant decline in the investment return occurred.

6. Significant enhancement of conventional procedures by the proposed scheme is possible through
the close monitoring of current conditions.

7. The investigator made the suggestion that there is a close relation between the two conditions.

8. The committee came to the conclusion that it is crucial to perform an on-line assessment.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (42) (上)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our recent project addressed how to enhance the internal marketing strategies of Taiwanese hospitals. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境 Admissions directors or hospital administrators must enhance the quality of offered products and services by understanding customer preferences, necessitating the importance of developing effective marketing strategies. 介紹管理問題However, conventional marketing strategies over rely on advertising strategies aimed at the exterior customer demand while neglecting the internal customer demand, in which an organization trains and motivates its employees to provide better products and services. For instance, while Kotler (1994) asserted that internal marketing must precede external marketing, according to The Journal of International Marketing Research, 87% of all unsuccessful enterprises lack internal marketing strategies. Therefore, strategies may neglect the importance of quality in products and services.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

如何檢示學術期刊的文章 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/21/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何檢示學術期刊的文章
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (487) Writing in the Sciences 5.5 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 20/5/2015
* 結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (4 / 6)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (42) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何檢示學術期刊的文章

* 重視文章,並試圖了解筆者寫的內容。

* 幫助筆者了解什麼是良好的內容並如何改進它,而不是負面地撕毀文章。

* 強調回饋的重要性,以提高期刋上文章質量。

* 提供一個平衡的積極回饋和建設性的批評和建議。

* 幫助作者了解理論和實踐對特定研究領域的貢獻

* 根據問題的重要性,組織您的評論

* 幫助作者了解相關研究課題中讀者的興趣。

* 幫助筆者了解研究結果對研究領域的重要性。

* 評估文章的理論論證,提出問題,比如“文章已經被充分和公平審查嗎?”“是缺少
相關的參考文獻嗎?“關鍵概念有被清楚地發展嗎?”“作者的理論論證有被符合邏輯
地架構嗎或有重要的問題沒有被解決嗎? “作者的理論和實踐對文獻明確的貢獻有被
清楚說明嗎?”

Source: The Editors Speak: What Makes a Good Journal Paper Review? (orgtheory.net)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (487) Writing in the Sciences 5.5 – Stanford University Online
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 20/5/2015

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* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (75): What are the benefits of blogging (& how to handle
negative feedback

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (10) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (4 / 6)

科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. The message is received by the user that subscription to the on-line service must be made by the
account holder.

2. Confirmation of the data accuracy is required by the quality engineer so that customer
satisfaction is ensured.

3. The production manager receives information from headquarters that evaluation of the finished
products must be made by the quality inspector.

4. Adjustment of the parameters is unnecessary by the control engineer.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (42) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a novel intelligent architecture, capable of increasing the efficiency of mobile commerce. The proposed architecture can integrate the applications of several environments, i.e. home, mini markets, shopping malls and banks. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 An intelligent info-filtering mechanism for tags reading was established. The status-management mechanism of daily commodities was then presented. Next, a secure settlement and payment mechanism were developed as well. Additionally, a practical info-interchange method was constructed. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed architecture can integrate RFID and context awareness technologies in a ubiquitous environment to increase the efficiency of mobile commerce. In addition to contributing to research efforts in digital life, the proposed architecture can also enhance the potential of mobile commerce and increase profits from the digital life market by up to 30% of that from the entire 3C market. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed architecture can provide a valuable reference for business models, ultimately providing opportunities for 3C manufacturers to consume value-added products. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

學術研究就業申請資料準備 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/20/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術研究就業申請資料準備
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (486) Writing in the Sciences 5.4 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 19/5/2015
* 結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (3 / 6)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (42) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術研究就業申請資料準備

* 儘早提交申請資料。

* 找到許多可能的潛在評審,你可以向他們發送您的簡歷,並請求他們作為你的評審。

* 在一個簡單的網站上放您的申請資料。

* 刪除任何一個尷尬的信息,或任何直言不諱的圖像。

* 給一個細目,說明已投稿,接受,或在會議上發表出版物的數量。

* 請你領域之外的人,讀你的資料以給予客觀評語。

* 如果你被要求在面試時發表言論,應確保你事先已充分練習。

Source: Preparing academic applications (postgraduatetoolbox)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (486) Writing in the Sciences 5.4 – Stanford University Online
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 19/5/2015

* Mô tả nhu cầu của tổ chức hoặc kỹ thuật (Anh Viết tại nơi làm việc)

– Một thời gian ngắn giới thiệu một lĩnh vực công nghệ hoặc phân khúc thị trường

– Mô tả một yếu tố bên ngoài hay nội bộ ảnh hưởng đến khu vực đó hoặc thích hợp

– Giới thiệu một vấn đề cụ thể (s) gây cản trở sự phát triển của khu vực đó hoặc thích hợp

– Nêu rõ các yêu cầu kỹ thuật, tiếp thị phải được giải quyết để giải quyết vấn đề này

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (74): How to use social media to access established
institutions/people

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (10) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (3 / 6)

科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. There is no need for the assessment of the production capacity of the factory floor to be undertaken by the foreman.

10. Carpooling can be arranged by means of a designated driver if conditions are such that commuters to the same workplace live in close proximity to each other.

11. A definite decision about future plans should not be made until a major breakthrough in product development occurs.

12. It is well known that telecommunications technologies happen to be expanding rapidly for the purpose of satisfying the growing consumer demand.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (42) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent effort investigated how to expand the market share of digital life-related products. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Constructing and applying intelligent environments have received considerable interest in industrial and academic circles. Digital life has also received much interest in recent years, with identification technology playing a critical role in intelligent environment research. Many IT manufacturers design and produce various handheld 3C products to gain a foothold in the emerging digital life market. 介紹管理問題 However, given its focus on home care, home learning, and home entertainment, digital life applications are limited to the home. Additionally, radio frequency identification (RFID), i.e. conventionally adopted critical identification technology, is seldom adopted in digital life studies, thus restricting the creation of R&D efforts in digital life. The above fact not only reflects the inability to integrate various intelligent environments, but also indicates that only 10% of all 3C products can be used as expected as their prime scenario due to an unsound intelligent environment. Therefore, the promotional efforts in mobile commerce are not well defined. Moreover, profits from the digital life market account for only 10% of the entire 3C market.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

如何回答最艱難的10個面試問題 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/19/2015

C-141 Starlifter contrail

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何回答最艱難的10個面試問題
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (485) Writing in the Sciences 5.3 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 18/5/2015
* 結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (2 / 6)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (41) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何回答最艱難的10個面試問題

* 為何在你的工作經歷上有差距或不連接的情形?

* 你能想到最近的一個問題,用舊的解決方案是行不通的?

* 在這世界上最不喜歡你的人會說你什麼?

* 你曾經採取的最大的風險是什麼?

* 你曾經有上司質疑你的行為?你如何管理的呢?

* 說明何時你的計劃不被整個團隊同意…..

* 如果你可以改變你的上一份工作的一件事,那會是什麼呢?

* 用三句話向你8歲的侄子解釋數據資料庫。

* 告訴我有關你自己的事…

* 為什麼我們應該僱用你呢?

Source: The 10 toughest job interview questions answered

學術英文投稿教學影片 (485) Writing in the Sciences 5.3 – Stanford University Online
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿力
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 18/5/2015

* Đưa ra các động từ có ý nghĩa mạnh (10/12) (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (73): Why do academics blog? How can social media amplify
your work?

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (12) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Finance)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (2 / 6)

科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

4. Contributing factors to rainforest depletion include overpopulation.

5. Awareness of external factors that contribute to industrial pollution
must be known by the urban planner.

6. No significant variation between the two temperatures occurred.

7. It is impossible to forecast all potential workplace hazards.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (41) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an optimal operating model, capable of selecting an effective monitor to adequately implement a long-term care model in healthcare organizations, subsequently providing admissions directors or hospital administrators with the most effective strategic policy to promote marketing efforts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 Statistical variables of various populations among patients and hospital staff that provide healthcare services such as training, orientation and promotion were identified using multivariate statistical analysis, i.e. one way ANOVA test and the t test, based on use of the PZB model. The T test was then performed to determine actual circumstances of patients and the discrepancy between offered medical services and receptiveness of patients towards them. Next, the discrepancy between actual circumstances of patients’ reality and their anticipated quality of services was determined, in which T- value is a minus and P- value denotes the areas in which patients are discontent with medical services, thus informing healthcare organizations of the areas in which service quality must be improved. Meanwhile, as for the discrepancy between attitudes of the patients and those of the healthcare staff in terms of the quality of medical services, T- value is a plus and P- value indicates that working satisfaction level among staff is low. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed optimal operating model can provide healthcare staff with a statistical analysis-based approach to demonstrate the effectiveness of various services, including environmental quality, attitude and service efficiency, thus enabling healthcare organizations to identify areas requiring improvement in healthcare services. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed optimal operating model can provide expectations by and of the staff, motivating them to continuously improve in their profession. Additionally, the proposed method contains an optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data for engineers. Moreover, the proposed model can enable healthcare organizations to identify areas to enhance the staff’s working environment, encourage training and continuous on-the-job learning as well as promote career opportunities.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

如何在研究生涯獲得成功 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/18/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何在研究生涯獲得成功
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (484) Writing in the Sciences 5.2 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 17/5/2015
* 結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (1 / 6)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (41) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何在研究生涯獲得成功

* 保持在激勵狀態:設置每天,每週,每月的目標;任何計劃分解成可實行的小塊,找到一個導師

* 找到一個顧問:詢問未來可能的顧問,如“平均博士生花費多少時間以完成他們的學位?“”學生的輟學率是多少?“”他們當教
師多久了?“

* 尋找論文題目:閱讀你感興趣的研究論文未來研究部分,選擇一個主題是因為你感興趣,並不是因為它是你導師的研究課題

* 寫論文:必須為你的論文發展科技論證而非只是模仿其他論文結構和寫作風格

* 得到回饋:學習如何接受建設性的批評,不要視為個人攻擊

* 獲取資金來源:搜索研究獎學金以資助研究;要求教師提供獲取資金相關來源訊息

* 出席會議:用實例和圖片說明和澄清想法, 通過觀察學習:嘗試模仿你喜歡的會談質感,並避免重蹈其他發言者做的不讓人喜歡
的事情,只要你有機會, 儘可能非正式地談談你的想法,所以下次在你的口頭報告上,你會說話更自然; 確保您的幻燈片是可讀
的,並且盡可能簡單。

* 發表論文

Source: How to Succeed in Graduate School: A Guide for Students and Advisors by Marie des Jardins

學術英文投稿教學影片 (484) Writing in the Sciences 5.2 – Stanford University Online
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿力
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 17/5/2015
* Mô tả nhu cầu của tổ chức hoặc kỹ thuật (Anh Viết tại nơi làm việc)
– Một thời gian ngắn giới thiệu một lĩnh vực công nghệ hoặc phân khúc thị trường
– Mô tả một yếu tố bên ngoài hay nội bộ ảnh hưởng đến khu vực đó hoặc thích hợp
– Giới thiệu một vấn đề cụ thể (s) gây cản trở sự phát triển của khu vực đó hoặc thích hợp
– Nêu rõ các yêu cầu kỹ thuật, tiếp thị phải được giải quyết để giải quyết vấn đề này
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (72): Are academics who don’t use social media at a disadvantage?
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (12) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Finance)
http://owl.lhu.edu.vn/mo-ta-nhu-cau-cua-to-chuc-hoac-ky-thuat-anh-viet-tai-noi-lam-viec/
結合“精確寫作”及“明白寫作” (英文編修訓練) (1 / 6)

科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Modification of environmental technologies transferred from abroad for the local industrial sector is
performed by the research institute.

2. Accurate prediction of the boundary parameters by mathematicians is of heavy emphasis.

3. An outline of how to install the software program is made in the following section.

4. A thorough description of the environmental impact on the ozone layer was made by Smith (1985).

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (41) (上)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our working group has become increasingly intrigued with how to enhance the service quality of medical treatment in Taiwan. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境 Advances in medical science and elevated living standards have contributed to a growing elderly population in Taiwan, necessitating the importance of long-term care. 介紹管理問題However, conventional long-term care approaches overemphasize supplying physicians and nurses to fulfill patient demand while neglecting the ability of personnel to provide quality patient care. For instance, according to the Journal of Hospital Management Research, 82% of all unsuccessful healthcare organizations neglect the demands of patients, while 80% of all patients are discontented with the service quality of healthcare organizations. While neglecting the importance of service quality in medical treatment, long-term healthcare strategies must strive to satisfy patient demand.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

面試後應做的10件事 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/17/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 面試後應做的10件事
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (483) Writing in the Sciences 5.1 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 16/5/2015
* 避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (9 / 9)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (41) (下)
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面試後應做的10件事

* 顯示你仍然對該公司感興趣的態度

* 設置進一步接觸

* 對所有約會準時

* 知道何時應該坐直

* 發送即時感謝信

* 每個面試官發送個性化,強大的後續聯絡信函

* 明述該公司的需求,並說明自己如何可以填補這一需要

* 保持對該公司學習的態度*和可能影響招聘或知道面試官的人保持聯絡

* 有風度地接受被拒絕的事實

Source: 10 Things to Do After a Job Interview (cnn)

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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 16/5/2015:

* Đưa ra các động từ có ý nghĩa mạnh (9/12) (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (71): 5 top tips to be a successful digital academic

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (11) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (9 / 9)

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. The company decided to update the operating systems on the engineering department computers so they can more easily access the mainframe.

10. The lecturer indicated that the role of telecommunications was increasingly common in daily life.

11. The new cartridges are large and should last a long time, making it more attractive than the older ones.

12. The college will purchase more computers in the near future so that you can communicate with your teachers on-line.

13. Space is needed to allow movement since a mouse is needed to move to perform their functions.

14. Netscape Navigator allows the e-mail user to access their accounts from anywhere around the world.
避完不必要的句中轉換.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (41) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an efficient SDS scheme that incorporates user diversity and an evolutionary model to adapt to various conversational contexts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述A fine-grained user model was derived to accurately represent a user’s situation; the user model comprises a skill level for the system, knowledge level on the target domain and degree of hastiness. The adaptation of SDS was then achieved using a reinforced learning approach. (NOTE: Add 1-2 more sentence to describe the methodology more thoroughl) 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed SDS scheme can increase the response accuracy of air travel-related problems and response system by 15%. Additionally, the proposed scheme can contribute to efforts to further enhance HCI with robustness by facilitating natural speech dialogic communication with computers. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, given the large discrepancy in individual behavior or conversation, the proposed spoken dialogue scheme can also provide a valuable reference for efforts underway to model the divergence of users. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

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大多數學生從來沒有想過有關研究生涯的問題 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/16/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
*大多數學生從來沒有想過有關研究生涯的問題
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (482) Writing in the Sciences 4.6 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 15/5/2015
*避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (8/9)
*非正式工程英文技術報告 (41) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

大多數學生從來沒有想過有關研究生涯的問題

* 撥款:你如何不會背負太多的債務?有什麼獎學金,助教或校園的有薪職位是可利用的?

* 顧問的選擇:雖然你對一個特定的計劃感興趣,請記住,人比計劃本身更重要。找到一個可以工作的顧問,是遠遠比找到一
個“完美”的計劃更重要。

* 您的顧問會議:與您的顧問定期舉行會議,將有助於讓你在正確的研究方向前進和減少浪費的時間。

* 研究實驗室的合作夥伴:花更多的時間和喜歡給予和接受建設性的反饋意見研究實驗室合夥人討論。

* 工業合作:工業合作夥伴提供什麼額外的資金,以及設備?工業合作夥伴指導你的研究或只是像一個經理,要求大量的時間
嗎?論文發表上是否有來自工業合作夥伴的任何限制?

* 自我懷疑和毅力:自我懷疑的思想是最常見的:“難道我真的應該到這裡來”“大家都這麼多比我聰明”!

* 吸取經驗教訓的方式:名片是重要的,以建立專業聯繫。建立開始收集數據的格式,所以你不覺得數據太多,不堪重負。

* 出版刊物或學術會議論文集:問問你的顧問,甚至研究實驗室的合作夥伴對您的文章的內容發表意見。請在你的領域工作的
人,而不是在您的特定區域的人讀你的文件。對語言問題或與您文章結構的問題,向編輯尋求專業幫助。

* 寫論文,論文是已發表會議論文或期刊文章的積累?

Source: Stuff Most Students Never Ask About Graduate School (ucla)

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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 15/5/2015

* Suy luận từ thống kê (Anh Viết tại nơi làm việc)

– Một thời gian ngắn giới thiệu một xu hướng thị trường

– Sử dụng số liệu thống kê phản ánh xu hướng thị trường và tác động của nó

– Tác động nhà nước của những số liệu thống kê

– Làm cho một đề nghị dựa trên những số liệu thống kê

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (70): What did you do on social media that attracted the most
positive reaction?

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (11) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (8/9)

避完不必要的句中轉換.

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The instructor made the class assignment and a follow up quiz was given by him.

6. For the user to clean the inside of a keyboard, you must remove the screws on the back of the
keyboard with a very small screwdriver.

7. The rewritable recorder is designed to use one CD over and over and cost approximately $400.

8. The consumer should know the pros and cons of a compact disk recorder when purchasing them.

9. The company decided to update the operating systems on the engineering department computers so they
can more easily access the mainframe.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (41) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our most recent project focused on how to ensure the development of speech applications in human computer interaction (HCI). 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 HCI has emulated certain aspect of human-human communication in the recent decade, opening possibilities for machines to converse with humans. However, speech recognition schemes have substantially improved in terms of implementing experimental spoken dialogue systems (SDS) that function within specific semantic domains. The dialogue management (DM) module can be used to control conversation between humans and computers, subsequently affecting the performance of SDS significantly. 介紹管理問題 However, in addition to only adopting finite state machine approaches to represent the states of dialogue and treating each user as a similar conversational behavior, this module can not learn from various conversational contexts. Moreover, SDS can not perform as humans do owing to the inability to exploit the discrepancies between users and a lack of automatic adaptation. Given the difficulty of evaluating SDS, many evaluation parameters have been used in previous research, i.e. the total time of utterances, the number of user/machine dialogue turns and the transaction success. In the travel domain, correct responses of SDS would be only around 80%. Despite enhancements, SDS accuracy falls below user requirements, thus restricting severely the development of speech applications, i.e. voice portal, and ultimately incurring a collapse of human-human communication in HCI.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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如何閱讀學術教科書 – 密西根大學資訊學院 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/15/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何閱讀學術教科書 – 密西根大學資訊學院
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (481) Writing in the Sciences 4.5 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 14/5/2015
* 避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (7/9)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (40) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何閱讀學術教科書 – 密西根大學資訊學院

* 閱讀整個事件

* 決定你會花多少時間

* 有一個目的和策略

*閱讀積極

* 讀三次

* 專注於訊息含量高的部分

* 請在文本頁緣標示出重點

* 閱讀有關作者和組織的資訊

*了解您正在閱讀材料的理論和實際意義。

* 使用你的潛意識來吸收這本書的內容

Source: How to Read a Book University of Michigan School of Information (umich)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (481) Writing in the Sciences 4.5 – Stanford University Online
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 14/5/2015:

* Đưa ra các động từ có ý nghĩa mạnh (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (8/12)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (69): How to predict interview questions

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (10) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

避完不必要的句中轉換 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (7/9)

避完不必要的句中轉換.

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Communicators must share a common language or protocol so that we can easily understand each other.

2. A computer mouse needs some available workspace and even the beginning user can operate them with
very little difficulty.

3. Execute the program commands and the iteration steps must be repeated.

4. The supervisor asked her employees if the assignment was ready and could it be handed in tomorrow.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (40) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we created a selection model for medical information system outsourcing to evaluate the reliability of potential contractors. The proposed model can integrate various evaluation criteria suitable for the medical sector, thus ensuring excellent software quality that complies with National Health Insurance regulation. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The nominal group technique of Delbec and Van de Ven was adopted to accumulate the results of interviews and experts in the field and, then, those results were applied for use in the evaluation criteria. Two evaluation methods were then used to compare the processes for selecting potential vendors. Next, analytic hierarchy process (AHP) was used to establish evaluation criteria for the proposed framework. Additionally, using the AHP model, a survey was designed using a two-pair comparison in order to respond to HIS outsourcing demand scores for each item. Moreover, fuzzy set theory was combined with AHP to calculate the weights and optimum scheme. 管理方案主要成果總結Our results indicated that the proposed selection model for medical information system outsourcing can facilitate clinicians in decision making and assist with the HIS outsourcing selection. The evaluation results can provide hospital administrators with a decision-making and evaluation criteria that actively encourages the medical sector outsource to information technology contractors. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 In addition to avoiding unnecessary risks and reducing overhead costs, the proposed selection model incorporates an AHP evaluation model and several evaluation criteria for large-scale hospitals outsourcing their technological needs. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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