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撰寫商業計劃書的建議 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 8/17/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 撰寫商業計劃書的建議
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (567) Writing scientific articles (Part 8 of 18)
* 主詞及動詞必須前後呼應 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (82) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

撰寫商業計劃書的建議

*外觀:商業計劃書的圖形藝術封面,整個顏色主題,您的組織徽標,圖形表格的顏色
都很重要

*佈局陳列:

i。首頁信:介紹公司或組織的關鍵人員; 並最後有主管的簽名

ii。商業計劃書的標題

iii。賣點:你的組織代表的意義,並希望實現商業計劃書裡的那些計劃?您的組織如
何在社區發揮重要作用?為什麼你的組織的商業計劃書最有可能被採用?

iv。基礎:編寫建議:你需要收集數據,進行市場調查研究,收集所有的事實,你將需
要找出哪些數據是必要的,這樣可以提供一套完整的建議。預算案:研究你的預算要
求,使其合乎現實情形。

*專業性:使用適當的語言。小心拼寫和語法。一旦你已經完成了商業計劃書,請別人
校對你的作品。

*溝通:提交商業計劃書後,定期與該組織保持聯絡,以確保如果組織需要進一步的信
息或問題可以找到你回覆。
Source: Write a Business Proposal – Four Tips You Can Use Right Now (technicalcommunicationcenter)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (567) Writing scientific articles (Part 8 of 18)
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主詞及動詞必須前後呼應 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)

如果主詞的單複數與動詞不能配合,不僅讀者感到困惑,同時句子的邏輯也會發生問題。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Genetics ( has , have ) drawn increasing interest in recent years.

2. A statistical Taguchi approach in addition to a backpropagation neural network model ( is, are ) developed in this study.

3. Neither conventional models nor previous literature (address , addresses ) the backpropagation delay problem in this structure.

4. Unknown variables or time significantly ( influence , influences ) the product quality when the machine parts are in close proximity to each other.

Answer
科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym* Cấu trúc câu đều phải có sự nhất quán (6/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết
văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (184): How to Publish in a Top Journal (11/11)
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Y khoa đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (28) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Radiotechnology)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (82) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our most recent project focused on how to resolve disputes in the construction industry. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Inflated steel costs in Taiwan over the past two years have led to increased construction costs and lower industrial profits. 介紹管理問題 Subsequent delays in steel bridge construction projects have made it impossible for the CEC to forecast the launching of a project, posing a high risk to new construction efforts. For instance, the CEC authorized a contractor to undertake a steel bridge project, which the owner subsequently rejected. The owner claimed that the contractor made a breach of contract and insisted on confiscating the performance bond of the steel bridge project, compensating for the difference in the re-bidding fee and publicizing this transgression in a government procurement bulletin to prevent CEC from bidding on projects for a year. The Public Construction Commission of the Executive Yuan served as a mediator to avert pending litigation. The lack of an effective remediation method makes it impossible for the CEC to resolve disputes in the construction industry efficiently.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

我怎樣才能準確地把以前的文獻分段釋義為我的研究論文提供信息? / 我怎樣才能總結以往文獻為我的研究論文提供信息? : 研究生英文投稿日報 5/14/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*我怎樣才能準確地把以前的文獻分段釋義為我的研究論文提供信息?

*我怎樣才能總結以往文獻為我的研究論文提供信息?

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (115) : A Good Scientific Paper

*國外專家訪問之確認: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

*商用英文假設描述 (46) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

我怎樣才能準確地把以前的文獻分段釋義為我的研究論文提供信息?

*研究以往文獻原始信息直到你徹底了解內容。

*重寫相關文獻部分的原始信息。

*當重寫信息時請使用完整的句子,片段,或列表。但不集中太多資訊以致往後無法理解。

*創建信息標題,以便可以在將來立即識別它。

*標題應包括文獻中轉述資料作者的態度或方法。

*包括作者的姓氏,文章或書籍的簡稱,和原來的研究論文或書籍的頁碼。

*您稍後將需要此信息來引用你研究論文的文獻來源。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 663 )

我怎樣才能總結以往文獻為我的研究論文提供信息?

*仔細瀏覽文獻幾次。

*關鍵概念下劃線:找標題的主要觀點,標題,主題句,過渡段和結束段。

*結合關鍵思想:學習你已劃線的句子。釋譯劃線的想法。

*檢查你的草稿和相對原始文獻來源的準確性和重點。

– 檢查您是否已記錄正確數據和名稱,你的概念是否準確地代表了原始概念。

*仔細記錄書目信息。

*即使一個總結包含所有你自己的想法,你還是必須引用它,因為主要的想法是別人的。

*如果你沒有電子格式的書目信息,則把它們寫在筆記卡上。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 664)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (115) : A Good Scientific Paper
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國外專家訪問之確認: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

I am pleased to inform you that your application to visit the Humidity Laboratory has been approved. Accommodations and living expenses from November 5 to 18 will be covered. As previously mentioned, your own organization is expected to cover your airfare expenses. I feel confident that your visit would be a continuation of the successful collaboration efforts between our two organizations. I look forward to hearing from you.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文假設描述 (46) (下)

*商用目標 : 商用提案的目標 ?

*達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

*希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

*領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關商用領域的貢獻?

商用英文假設描述:

商用計劃目標 A novel assessment model can be developed to identify the utility rate of resources in the medical sector for enhancing hospital operations. More specifically, the proposed model can incorporate a novel set of management strategies that emphasize allotting resources within the medical sector to strengthen a hospital’s competitiveness in order to comply with the Global Budget System. 商用目標的方法 To do so, the DEA model can be used to determine the operational efficiency of each hospital and identify an improved direction for allocating resources. AHP can the be revised based on the weight of the DEA model. Next, questionnaires can be sent to administrators regarding the significance of assessing hospital performance. Additionally, pertinent literature can be reviewed to confirm the reliability of variables in the database. Finally, the performances of different hospital types can be compared using the Kruskal-wallis test. 希望的結果 As anticipated, analysis results can indicate the feasibility of adopting the proposed assessment model to design and implement precautionary measures towards the utility rate of resources in related field. In addition to providing the medical sector with more accurate guidelines on allocating and planning operations, the proposed model can greatly facilitate hospitals in allocating resources effectively, ultimately increasing their operating capital. Moreover, the proposed model can contribute to efforts to effectively utilize resources in the highly competitive medical market sector, as well as provide a valuable reference for policymakers in enhancing the effective allocation of resources. 領域的貢獻 Importantly, the proposed resources allocation strategy can reduce the operational costs of hospitals and increase the resources utility rate. Increasing the resource allocation effectively would not only increase subsidized revenues from the National Health Insurance scheme, but also distinguish between the performance efficiency of the hospitals considered and the difference among hospitals with respect to effectiveness change. Doing so would ultimately increase the competitiveness of the intensely competitive medical sector.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

我怎樣才能快速獲得研究論文的主要思路? / 我怎樣才能迅速得到一本教科書的主要思路? : 研究生英文投稿日報 5/13/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*我怎樣才能快速獲得研究論文的主要思路?

*我怎樣才能迅速得到一本教科書的主要思路?

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (114) : Scientific Writing

*特約人員之申請: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 (下)

*商用英文問題描述 (46) (上)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

我怎樣才能快速獲得研究論文的主要思路?

*閱讀研究論文報告的摘要:通過確定研究問題,研究目的,研究方法,主要結果和對特定領域的貢獻以明白文章內容概述

*閱讀研究論文報告的介紹:了解研究論文目的,主要思想和組織

*閱讀研究論文報告結尾的註釋和參考文獻:理解作者研究的性質和廣度

*閱讀研究論文報告的標題和幾個段落:理解文章的組織和信息的質量和相關性

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 660)

我怎樣才能迅速得到一本教科書的主要思路?

*閱讀教科書的前言和引言:了解作家的寫作方式

*閱讀教科書的致謝部分:得知該領域其他專家對作者的好評。此外,了解作者所用的主要研究資源。

*閱讀教科書目錄:了解教材的範圍和組織

*閱讀在書章節或書末結尾註釋:理解作者研究的性質和程度

*閱讀教科書的索引:確定您所需要信息的覆蓋範圍

*瀏覽幾段教科書的不同部分:評估信息的質量和相關性

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 660)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (114) : Scientific Writing
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特約人員之申請: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 (下)

ABC is internationally renowned for its precision in measurement standards. Your division, the Mechanical and Optical Metrology Division, is also known as one of the best laboratories in this field.

I would like to apply to serve as a guest worker in your Division, during the months between December 1992 and June 1993.

I have already been allotted half a year to conduct research work at another institution. All related expenses would be covered by my institute, the Center for Measurement Standards.

The enclosed resume provides further information on my educational background in physics, and my recent professional experience in laser frequency stabilization and laser scanning microscopes. I am particularly interested in studying laser frequency stabilization at your laboratory. However, I am open to being assigned to any project which is relevant to my background experiences.

I look forward to our future cooperation and appreciate your thoughtful deliberation in considering this application.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文問題描述 (46) (上)

*商用提案建構 : 你商用提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭商用提案的內容嗎?

*商用問題 : 你的商用提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

*商用問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制 ?

*問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對商用提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

*商用計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?

商用英文問題描述:

商用提案建構 The extremely competitive medical market sector in Taiwan and budget deficits incurred from the island’s National Health Insurance scheme have led to the implementation of a Global Budget System. Whereas hospitals heavily prioritize allotting resources efficiently, the resources utility rate has received increasing attention. Thus, hospitals must concentrate their operational efforts on retaining current patients and increasing the utility rate of those resources that hospitals already possess. 商用問題 Of the relatively few studies examining the medical sector in this area, conventional approaches calculate the number of outpatients, inpatients and visits to emergency service without considering the payment policy in the Global Budget System. (NOTE : Add 2-4 sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用問題的量化 The inability to effectively address the utility rate of resources would make the statistical approaches used to determine the samples in resource policies inaccurate. 問題的中心 Incapable of determining the utility rate of resources, hospitals will expend considerable costs to maintain nullity of resources and reduce the amount of subsidized revenues from the National Health Insurance scheme, ultimately lowering their competitiveness. 商用計劃需求 Therefore, a novel assessment model must be developed to identify the utility rate of resources in the medical sector for enhancing hospital operations. More specifically, the proposed model must incorporate a novel set of management strategies that emphasize allotting resources within the medical sector to strengthen a hospital’s competitiveness in order to comply with the Global Budget System.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

如何應對口頭報告時的緊張 / 在口頭報告中使用圖形時重要的考慮因素 : 研究生英文投稿日報 5/4/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*如何應對口頭報告時的緊張

*在口頭報告中使用圖形時重要的考慮因素 (PART B)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (105) : Blended Learning

*洽商技術合作之出國計畫書: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

*商用英文假設描述 (45) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

如何應對口頭報告時的緊張

*你意識到自己的緊張比你的觀眾注意到你的緊張還要清楚。

*緊張感可以給你能量和熱情。

*幾分鐘後,你的緊張感就會消失。

*要知道你已有充分準備,因此,你不應該緊張。

*要知道你的觀眾目的是聽你演說,不是要評斷你。

*要知道你的觀眾也是人,在口頭報告時也會緊張。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 624 )

在口頭報告中使用圖形時重要的考慮因素 (PART B)

*大小和房間的佈局
在一個小型會議室使用的圖形與在一個500個座位的禮堂使用的有所不同。

*設備

– 有什麼樣的設備。

– 請求準備設備故障的備份。

– 也許帶上自己的裝備,因為你知道如何使用它。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 616)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (105) : Blended Learning
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洽商技術合作之出國計畫書: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

Thank you for your prompt response to my inquiry regarding the UNEP working group on sustainable product development. I was also pleased to learn of your interest in WEIC, Taiwan. Enclosed please find a presentation document that may give further insight into the “Industrial Waste Minimization Information Service” Project.

From your press release, dated February 15, 1994, on the new UNEP working group on sustainable product development, I learned much that I’m sure will prove beneficial to waste minimization efforts in Taiwan.

Rapid economic growth in Taiwan has brought more than seven million tons of municipal waste and thirty million tons of industrial waste annually. To alleviate this threat, the government, the industrial sector, and various research and technology organizations are working together to achieve sustainable product technology. Many researchers have recently focused their efforts on the study and implementation of life cycle assessment, clean technology, and ‘polluter pays’ policies.

I am pleased to hear that a new working group on sustainable product development is to be established. At this time, I am keenly interested in visiting Dr. Jones and his staff to learn of all the operational aspects involved with this program. I would like to arrange for a ten day technical visit to your department and other pertinent places this upcoming May. Accompanying me would be Ms. Chang, an engineer with China Technical Consultants, Inc., and Mr. Liu, Director of the Bureau of Solid Waste Control of the EPA R.O.C. (We will cover the expenses). If this visit is agreeable with you, please notify me which dates are convenient for you. A suggested itinerary would also be most appreciated, i.e., discussion time, plant tour schedule, accommodations. I look forward to your reply.

Also, the Industrial Development Bureau of the Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA) has been quite successful in assisting the industrial sector develop better waste minimization practices. Mr. Lee, Deputy Chief of the Seventh Division of the Industrial Development Bureau of the MOEA in Taipei, can clarify any questions you might have regarding these activities.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if I can be of any further assistance.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文假設描述 (45) (下)

*商用目標 : 商用提案的目標 ?

*達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

*希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

*領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關商用領域的貢獻?

商用英文假設描述:

商用目標 An effective quality control index based on customer relations management can be developed to analyze how individuals select a hospital to receive medical treatment, thus providing a valuable reference for policymakers in the medical sector. 商用成目標的方法 To do so, a questionnaire can be designed to understand the varying levels of medical treatment quality by incorporating the basic requirements of patients, including intangible ones such as respect. Use of PZB in the twenty two-item questionnaires can enhance its effectiveness, including factors such as tangibles, reliability, responsiveness, assurance, and empathy. The following criterion can then be adopted to analyze the questionnaire results: physicians are qualified and reliable; medical staff has received sufficient training; physicians are willing to offer valuable clinical information; physicians express concern for their patients; medical staff display a professional attitude; and the hospital honors patient confidentiality. Next, a distinction between satisfactory and unsatisfactory medical treatment can be made by using the AHP method. Additionally, the quality of medical services in individual hospitals can be determined using the quality control index. 希望的結果 As anticipated, by incorporating AHP, the proposed quality control index can evaluate individual attitudes towards medical service quality, thus enhancing management quality and competitiveness of hospitals, as evidenced by increased revenues. 領域的貢獻 While attempting to enhance medical quality island wide, the proposed index can more accurately assess the quality of medical service in hospitals than conventional management methods can. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

如排練口頭報告 / 在口頭報告中使用圖形時重要的考慮因素 : 研究生英文投稿日報 5/3/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*如何排練口頭報告

*在口頭報告中使用圖形時重要的考慮因素 (PART A)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (104) : Mixed Methods Research

*住宿/交通工具之安排: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

*商用英文假設描述 (45) (上)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

如何排練口頭報告

*第一次彩排

– 不要擔心姿勢或聲音。只需朗讀幻燈片上的文稿內容。

-說明所有的重點,並從一個點建立有效轉換到另一個點。

– 可修改你的幻燈片順序以創建一個更好的轉換流程。

*第二次彩排

– 當你已完全的控制口頭報告的組織和流程,此時要確保口頭報告可在規定時間內完成。

*第三次彩排

– 在觀眾面前排練,讓聽眾可以對你的說話風格提供問題或有建設性的意見。

– 另外,自行錄音或錄影口頭報告然後加以評估。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 623 )

在口頭報告中使用圖形時重要的考慮因素 (PART A)

*演示文稿的長度。

– 有多少幻燈片?

– 每30秒顯示不同的幻燈片。

*觀眾資質和經驗
什麼樣的圖形可以使你的聽眾很容易理解?

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 616)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (104) : Mixed Methods Research
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

住宿/交通工具之安排: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

I would like to make a hotel reservation for three single rooms from March 19 to March 22 (four nights), and another single room from March 21 to March 22 (two nights). My colleagues and I will arrive at 8 p.m. on March 19, and will be registered under the names of Mr. Chang, Mrs. Wu, Mr. Lin (March 19 to March 22), and Ms. Chu (March 21 to March 22).

Your prompt reply as to whether you can accommodate us would be most appreciated. Credit card information is provided as follows.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文問題描述 (45) (上)

*商用提案建構 : 你商用提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭商用提案的內容嗎?

*商用問題 : 你的商用提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

*商用問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制 ?

*問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對商用提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

*商用計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?

商用英文問題描述:

商用提案建構 Changes in Taiwan’s National Health Insurance policy have led to stringent competition among an increasing number of hospitals to receive case payment for treating patients given a fixed allocated budget, necessitating that hospitals change their management approaches to remain competitive. 商用問題 Given the increasingly competitive medical treatment services offered nationwide, conventional management methods have lost their competitiveness in handling case-payment schemes owing to the inability to fully understand market needs, which is essential to establishing an effective strategy to increase revenues. (NOTE : Add 2-4 sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用問題的量化 For instance, each of the five hospitals in Hsinchu, Taiwan has lost $1,200,000 annually in revenues owing to the inefficient management of case-payment schemes. 問題的中心 The inability to handle case-payment schemes will lead to a further loss in hospital revenues, eventually leading to a reduction in personnel and community services. 商用計劃需求 Therefore, an effective quality control index based on customer relations management must be developed to analyze how individuals select a hospital to receive medical treatment, thus providing a valuable reference for policymakers in the medical sector.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

強調和求職相關的已有知識技能或領導特質 / 曾參加的相關課外活動介紹 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) : 研究生英文投稿日報 4/30/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*強調和求職相關的已有知識技能或領導特質(描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

*曾參加的相關課外活動介紹 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (101) : How to Win Over the Audience

*資訊交流之聯繫: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

*商用英文假設描述 (44) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

強調和求職相關的已有知識技能或領導特質(描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

*Extracurricular activities and recognition for my contributions greatly added to me character, thus equipping me for the challenges of graduate school and ability to more fully grasp human resource management concepts.
課外活動和對我貢獻的認可,在我個性上有極大助益,使我有能力面對研究所的挑戰,亦更能充分掌握人力資源管理的觀念。

*Language is a vital part of our life’s experiences, something that I am devoted to in my leisure time in order to build upon my solid academic background and to acquire a better position at work.
語言是生活經驗不可少的部份,是我在空閒時為了作為紮實學術背景的基石並進而獲得較佳工作職位而致力以求的項目。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

曾參加的相關課外活動介紹 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

*While certain individuals may view me as being overanxious to assimilate much information, I constantly distinguish between academic/work reading and pleasure reading.
有些人可能認為我過度急切想要吸取大量資訊,但我一直都能夠將學術工作閱讀和休閒閱讀做出區隔。

*Getting along with others, especially with classmates in the university’s extracurricular activities, was a large part of my daily campus life, regardless of whether I was collaborating on a project or spending leisure time with others.
不論是和他人合作專案或共度空閒時光,和他人相處,特別是大學課外活動的同學,佔據了我每日校園生活的絕大部分。

*My classmates elected me monitor, which is a unique leadership opportunity that increased my self-confidence in leadership skills while striving for harmony among classmates and coordination with the classroom instructor.
同學選我做班長,這是獨特的領導機會,讓我在致力於班級合諧和教師聯繫時增加自己在領導技巧上的自信。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (101) : How to Win Over the Audience
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

資訊交流之聯繫: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

Thank you for your letter dated 31 December 1993 and for the publication “Cutting Your Losses 2.” In response, I’d like to propose a technological information exchange regarding environmental pollution prevention and waste minimization.

WEIC is a non-governmental, non-profit subsidiary of Union Chemical Laboratories of the Industrial Technology Research Institute, Hsinchu, Taiwan. We are currently involved in a long-term project entitled “Industrial Waste Minimization Information Service,” which has already been sponsored for more than three years by our government’s Industrial Development Bureau(IDB). The goal of this long-term project focuses on providing relevant information on industrial waste minimization. Our major work includes publication of a bimonthly waste minimization magazine, facilitation of waste exchange/reuse, and dissemination of commercialized waste minimization technologies. The experimental results generated in this project have already been most helpful in Taiwan’s environmental protection work.

Rapid economic growth in Taiwan annually produces more than seven million tons of municipal waste and thirty million tons of industrial waste. To alleviate this problem, government, industry, and research and technology organizations have all recognized that product technology improvement would be a most effective solution. Many such projects currently focus on the study and implementation of life cycle assessment, clean technology, and ‘polluter pays’ policies. We recognize that ensuring the continued success of our efforts in Taiwan depends on the open sharing and exchange of related experiences with other similar organizations. Enclosed please find a presentation document that provides further insight into WEIC, Taiwan.

I am looking forward to hearing your ideas or suggestions regarding this information exchange opportunity. I would also like to arrange for a ten-day technical visit to your organization this upcoming May as the initial step of our cooperation. If at all possible, please notify me as to which dates are most convenient for you. A tentative visiting schedule would also be appreciated. Thanks in advance for your careful consideration; I am looking forward to our future cooperation.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文假設描述 (44) (下)

*商用目標 : 商用提案的目標 ?

*達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

*希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

*領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關商用領域的貢獻?

商用英文假設描述:

商用目標 An AHP-based method can be developed that can select objectively the location of a commercial center by drawing from the results of interviews with experts in the field, thus increasing the likelihood of a high occupancy rate and strong commercial value of the commercial center. 商用目標的方法 To do so, a questionnaire can be designed to query experts in the real estate sector on the current market demand for commercial centers in Taiwan. An appropriate weight criterion can then be derived based on the results of the interviews with those experts. Next, based on that criterion, an unbiased consistency index and decision-making process can be developed. Additionally, the potential location of a commercial center can be assessed based on the objective procedure. 希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed AHP-based method can offer a more efficient and precise site selection criterion than the biased conventional approach can, subsequently reducing the potential risks associated with selecting the site for a commercial center. 領域的貢獻 Importantly, the proposed AHP method can provide not only real estate planners with a reliable means of estimating risk factors and selecting the optimal location of commercial centers, but also governmental urban planners with an effective means of reducing unnecessary risks when selecting the sites of other commercial trades. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

曾參加的相關課外活動介紹 / 強調和求職相關的已有知識技能或領導特質 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) : 研究生英文投稿日報 4/29/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*曾參加的相關課外活動介紹 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

*強調和求職相關的已有知識技能或領導特質 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (100) : How to Influence Others with Persuasion

*洽詢技術合作: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

*商用英文問題描述 (44) (上)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

曾參加的相關課外活動介紹 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

*Community service is an integral aspect of scouting activities, with club members looking forward to activities such as working with area youth through physical exercise and extracurricular activities.
社區服務是一項由童軍活動構成的整體概念,社團成員期盼的活動,舉例來說,是藉由體育活動或課外活動和地區青年合作。

*As for my extracurricular activities, I participated in campus wide anti-smoking activities sponsored byTaiwan’s Bureau of Health Promotion Department. In addition to offering general orientation on the dangers of smoking, the activities also inform students on tobacco manufacturers’deceptive motives and marketing approaches.
關於課外活動方面,我曾參與行政院衛生署國民健康局發起的校園反菸活動。除了提供抽菸產生的一般危險之外,此活動亦讓學生暸解菸草製造商的詭騙動機和行銷手法。

*Most extracurricular activities I participated in were construction management-oriented out of concern to keep my academic scholarship for studies in civil engineering.
出於取得獎學金攻讀土木工程的考量,大多數我所參與的課外活動均屬營造管理方面。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

強調和求職相關的已有知識技能或領導特質 (描述與求職相關的課外活動) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

*Extracurricular activities nurtured my communicative skills by requiring that I closely collaborate with other club members to ensure that everything ran smoothly.
課外活動當中,需要和其他社團成員密切聯繫以確保每件事順利進行,故而培養出我的溝通技巧。

*Organizational responsibilities included drawing up a schedule for construction engineering-related activities, encouraging members to actively participate in those activities, leading discussions during meetings and evaluating the success of our activities.
組織內的責任包括擬定營造工程活動時間表、鼓勵人員積極參與活動、會議間主導討論進行以及評估活動的成功性。

*Scouting activities have profoundly impacted my life, making me more socially conscious, responsible, courageous, independent, aggressive, honest and willing to help others.
童軍活動影響我的生活至深,使我更圓融、負責、勇敢、獨立、積極、誠實、樂於助人。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (100) : How to Influence Others with Persuasion觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

洽詢技術合作: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

Miss Jones suggested that I contact you regarding your company’s automotive products. It is our understanding that your company specializes in the manufacturing of automotive gear boxes.

We would be pleased if you would introduce your current developments and specific product data.

Our organization, Mechanical Industrial Rensearch Institute (MIRL), is a subsidiary of the Industrial Technology Research Institute (ITRI). The primary responsibilities of MIRL are to improve industrial productivity and seek technology sources for the R.O.C.

We are currently involved in a gear box development program aimed at seeking foreign partners who are capable of developing gear boxes or can engage in a technical cooperative program with automotive manufacturers in the R.O.C

The major items of technology to be developed are:
1. Key components that conform to domestic auto specifications
2. New gear box technology for domestic auto manufacturers
3. The latest technology in transmission design, manufacturing, assembly and testing
4. Cost effective production systems
Please let me know if there are any areas of common interest you would like to discuss.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文問題描述 (44) (上)

*商用提案建構 : 你商用提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭商用提案的內容嗎?

*商用問題 : 你的商用提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

*商用問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制 ?

*問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對商用提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

*商用計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?

商用英文問題描述:

商用提案建構 Given the depressed commercial real estate market in Taiwan, real estate planners have switched their focus to commercial centers containing business units for lease. For instance, in Taipei, numerous commercial centers containing more than ten business units have been established since 1991. The market demand for commercial centers is expected to increase. 商用問題 However, real estate planners lack an objective means of determining the site of a commercial center, concerned primarily with the location, computer hardware access and their own subjective judgment based on previous experiences, possibly leading to an inappropriate selection for the location of a commercial center. (NOTE : Add 2 sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用問題的量化 For instance, real estate planners tat rely solely on subjective assessments or previous experiences to select the location of a commercial may make an inappropriate decision that does not draw from the beneficial results of estimating norms and interviews with experts in the field. 問題的中心 The inability of real estate planners to draw upon objective sources of information when selecting the site of a commercial center may lead to a low occupancy rate and decreased commercial value of the commercial center. 商用計劃需求 Therefore, an AHP-based method must be developed that can select objectively the location of a commercial center by drawing from the results of interviews with experts in the field, thus increasing the likelihood of a high occupancy rate and strong commercial value of the commercial center.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

強調學術背景對未來求職的利處 / 強調一個學術訓練的特定領域 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) : 研究生英文投稿日報 4/26/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 強調學術背景對未來求職的利處 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

* 強調一個學術訓練的特定領域 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (97) : Effective scholarly work

* 國外特約人員之邀請: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

* 商用英文假設描述 (43) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

強調學術背景對未來求職的利處 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

* I am absolutely confident that my academic background and experimental as well as professional
experiences in food science and biotechnology will allow me to succeed in your company’s many
collaborative product development projects.
我在食品科學和生物工藝學的學術背景以及實驗和專業經驗,將可讓我在貴公司成功完成多項產品發展合作專案,對此,
我有絕對的自信。

* Through graduate school research, I contributed to efforts to elevate the quality of affordable
housing units for the elderly living in residential communities. I hope to continue this line of
work upon employment in your organization.
藉由研究所時的研究,我盡力為年長者在可負擔的住屋價格下提升住宅區住屋品質。我希望在貴機構的工作仍維持此類工
作方向。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

強調一個學術訓練的特定領域 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

* Given the importance of detail and sequential order when working in a laboratory, I carefully
wrote down the details of experimental steps to be followed. Upon completion of the experiment,
I compared the data generated from the experiments with those results anticipated beforehand.
Despite the occasional bottlenecks in research, I remained calm to avoid experimental failure.
由於在實驗室工作,細節和後續次序很重要,我仔細寫下實驗步驟的細節供作依循。實驗完成後,我將實驗產生的資料和
事前預期的結果做比較。雖然研究中有時會有瓶頸,但我仍維持冷靜,避免實驗失敗。

* In addition to providing me with several opportunities to corroborate what I had learned from
textbooks in the classroom, several field studies on air pollution at Linyuan Industrial Park in
Kaohsiung allowed me to extend my knowledge skills to an entirely different field to achieve
innovative solutions.
在高雄林園工業區實地進行的數項空氣污染研究,除了提供我驗證課堂教科書所學的機會之外,亦讓我將知識技術擴展至
全然不同的領域,得出創新的解決辦法。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (97) : Effective scholarly work觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

國外特約人員之邀請: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

Quite some time has passed since you visited our laboratories in June of 1993. I hope that all is going well at your institute. As to the scientific and non-scientific collaboration progress between Russian and Taiwan, R.O.C., with the signing of the MOU, the time seems right for cooperation between ABC Institute and CMS/ITRI. I’m sure you recall our conversation in which I told you that the first thing we could do is to exchange scientific experts. More specifically, I would like to propose the following:

Please recommend one scientific expert to serve as a short term consultant at CMS.

Naturally, we would like someone whose expertise is highly relevant to the following subjects:
1. acoustical standards, and particularly, the reciprocity calibration of microphones
2. the design philosophy of microphones and hydrophones.
This expert must also be fluent in English.
He or she could stay at our laboratory for roughly two weeks, and lecture on the following topics:
a. The progress of Acoustics in Russia (2 hours)
b. Microphone design: general and guidelines (3 hours)
c. Hydrophone design: general and guidelines (3 hours)
d. Other topics related to acoustics (optional)

We would offer round-trip airfare from Moscow to Taipei and accomodations in Taiwan during the consultancy period. An honorarium for the seminars would also be included. If you have such a candidate available or if you should have any comments about this proposal, please let us know at your earliest convenience.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文假設描述 (43) (下)

* 商用目標 : 商用提案的目標 ?

* 達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

* 希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

* 領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關商用領域的貢獻?

商用英文假設描述:

商用目標 An AHP-based method can be developed that allows enterprises to select, based on an objective standard, in which public relations firms should represent them. 商用目標的方法 To do so, a list of public relations firms can be accumulated from industrial and business catalogues. A valuation standard that reflects enterprise values can then be derived based on interviews with experts in the field. Next, an objective decision among candidate public relations firms can be made using the AHP method. 希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed AHP-based method can enable enterprises to evaluate objectively the most appropriate public relations firm, subsequently conserving overhead costs and time associated with enterprise valuation. 領域的貢獻 While enabling researchers to determine the benefits of enterprises seeking public relations firms for representation, the proposed method can assist enterprises limited in time and budget to select the most appropriate public relations firm based on an objective standard. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

強調一個學術訓練的特定領域 / 強調學術背景對未來求職的利處 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) : 研究生英文投稿日報 4/25/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 強調一個學術訓練的特定領域 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳)
(PART A)

* 強調學術背景對未來求職的利處 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳)
(PART A)

* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (96) : Organizing research papers

* 國內演講者之邀請: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

* 商用英文問題描述 (43) (上)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

強調一個學術訓練的特定領域 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

* Although extremely taxing, the project instilled in me a sense of
confidence in meeting the rigorous challenges of such an
undertaking. Although research of this topic initially began
overseas, I was able to extend those results and make them
applicable to Taiwan’s circumstances.
這項專案雖極度艱鉅,但也讓我對面對此類嚴酷的工作挑戰時逐漸產生自信。雖說是國
外首先進行此項專題研究,但我能推展結果,將其適用於台灣環境。

* I served as a research assistant in the Society of Civil Engineers,
R.O.C., which allowed me not only tosee the connection between
theoretical knowledge and actual commercial practices, but also to
realize how results from academic investigations can influence
governmental policies.
我在中華民國土木工程學會擔任研究助理時,不只明白了理論知識和實際商業實務間的
關連,亦暸解到學術研究的結果可以如何的影響政府政策。

* While a course in Statistics focused on how to analyze the
effectiveness of the latest software applications, another course in
English Writing oriented me on how to organize and write a research
paper, as well as increase my academic reading comprehension.
統計學課程著重在如何分析最新軟體應用的有效性,另一門英語寫作課程的方向則在於
如何組織、繕寫研究報告以及提升閱讀學術文章的理解力。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

強調學術背景對未來求職的利處 (描述學歷背景及已獲成就) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

* Combining academic concepts with my knowledge expertise from
previous employment will enable me to rise to the arduous challenges
of working in the intensely competitive hi-tech sector for a
renowned corporation such as yours.
結合學術觀念和從以前工作中獲得的知識專業,使我能擔負在像貴公司此類著名公司內
部競爭激烈的高科技部門任職的艱鉅挑戰。

* The professional knowledge acquired from graduate school will also
strengthen my intellectual capacity to give me a clearer picture of
my career path, hopefully at your company.
從研究所獲得的專業知識也增加了我的智識,使我對自己的事業前途有更具體的景象,
希望能在貴公司實現。

* Feeling somewhat unprepared for the demands of the workplace,
graduate school allowed me to further strengthen my knowledge skills
in management, thus enabling me to more effectively apply my strong
academic background in order to enhance my work competence.
感到對工作上的要求尚未作好準備,而研究所則進一步的增進我在管理上的知識技術,
因此讓我更有效的憑優秀的學術背景提升工作能力。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (96) : Organizing research papers
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

國內演講者之邀請: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

In light of your renowned research and your contributions in the field of GRIN polymers, we would like to formally invite you to serve as an Invited Speaker at the upcoming Grin Polymer Materials Symposium. Place and time of eventThis symposium is to be held at Union Chemical Laboratories (Hsinchu, Taiwan) on March 15, 1994.

We hope your lecture will include a discussion of trends and current developments in GRIN POF, GRIN LENS, and backlight plate.

We will provide a roundtrip airfare ticket and accomodations. I advise you to stay here for one week (if at all possible) so that you can enjoy some of the sights that Taiwan has to offer. Please advise us of your flight number so that we can meet you at the airport.

Please send us your lecture title and outline, along with related handouts, before February 28, 1994. We will then have a sufficient amount of time to make copies and appropriate arrangements. I also need your curriculum vitae, with contents to include: NAME, DATE OF BIRTH, PLACE OF BIRTH, NATIONALITY, MARITAL STATUS, ACADEMIC QUALIFICATIONS, PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE, SCIENTIFIC ACHIEVEMENTS, CURRENT SCIENTIFIC ACTIVITIES, OTHER SCIENCE-RELATED ACTIVITIES, AND SELECTED PUBLICATIONS.

Please do not hesitate to let me know if you have any concerns and/or suggestions. Your contribution to this symposium would definitely benefit all the participants.
有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文問題描述 (43) (上)

* 商用提案建構 : 你商用提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭商用提案的內容嗎?

* 商用問題 : 你的商用提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

* 商用問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限
制 ?

* 問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對商用提案的讀者會有多大的負面
衝擊?

* 商用計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?

商用英文問題描述:

商用提案建構 Public relations is an effective means of linking enterprises with the general public, explaining the increasing popularity among Taiwanese enterprise to contract the services of public relations firms. 商用問題 However, conventional marketing approaches involving manufacturer evaluation do not consider the valuation standard when selecting a public relations firm. (NOTE : Add 2-4 sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用問題的量化 For instance, while lacking sufficient budget and time to assess public relations firm on an individual basis, small and middle scale enterprises often rely on company supervisors to make a subjective judgment when selecting among candidate firms. 問題的中心 The inability to consider the valuation standard when selecting a public relations firm makes it impossible not only for researchers to determine the benefits that enterprises enjoy when hiring public relations firms, but also for enterprises to make selections based on an objective standard. 商用計劃需求 Therefore, an AHP-based method must be developed that allows enterprises to select, based on an objective standard, in which public relations firms should represent them.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

介紹此方案的目標 / 概述該方案的成果 (描述所參與方案裡專業興趣的表現包括) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) : 研究生英文投稿日報 4/20/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 介紹此方案的目標 (描述所參與方案裡專業興趣的表現包括) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

* 概述該方案的成果 (描述所參與方案裡專業興趣的表現包括) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (91) : Statement of Purpose for Graduate Study

* 特約人員之申請 (上) : 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

* 商用英文假設描述 (42) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

介紹此方案的目標 (描述所參與方案裡專業興趣的表現包括) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART B)

* Although research on construction management practices in long-term residential communities initially began overseas, I was able
to extend those results and make them applicable to the needs of Taiwan’s growing elderly population.
雖說是國外首先進行長期住宅區營造管理實務的研究,但我能推展結果,將其適用於台灣逐漸成長的老年人口的需要。

* Given my commitment to the civil engineering profession, I actively participated in graduate level research to optimize work
productivity on a construction site, having collaborated with others in related projects.
由於我有志於土木工程的專業,所以我積極參與研究所的研究,以期工地的工作生產力得以充分運用,此外,我亦與他人合作相關專案。

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

概述該方案的成果 (描述所參與方案裡專業興趣的表現包括) (有效撰寫求職英文自傳) (PART A)

* Our collaborative efforts led to the discovery of …
由於我們共同的努力,因而發現…

* Our results further allowed us to clarify how…
我們的成果進而使我們闡明如何…

* My recent research enabled me to discern between…
我最近的研究讓我分辨…和…

有效撰寫求職英文自傳 柯泰德 (2004)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (91) : Statement of Purpose for Graduate Study
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

特約人員之申請 (上) : 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

Allow me to introduce myself. I am a researcher in the Department of Component Technology at the Center for Measurement Standards (CMS), which is similar to ABC Institute. I am an engineer with a master’s degree in Materials Science and Engineering and have received special training in thin film deposition photolithography and chemical etching. I am currently designing a process that integrates these technologies for the development of a pressure sensor that is based on a metal thin strain gauge. We plan to miniaturize this sensor in the near future.

Our laboratory would like me to receive training in micromachining technology, e.g., wet/dry silicon etching and silicon to silicon fusion bonding. I hope that your laboratory, one of the leaders in this field of research, can provide me with the opportunity to learn about sensor manufacturing technology. I wish to learn about sensor manufacturing technology at your laboratory for three months this year, preferably during March through June. Pressure sensors and related technology are what we are most concerned with. The proposed format is that of a self-supported guest worker at your laboratory.

By the way, I have an aunt living in a nearby Cupertino. Her name is Dr. Lin Mei Mei and she can be directly contacted at (408)1234567 (tel) or (408)2345678 (fax). She can provide further clarification, if necessary.

I would greatly appreciate your comments regarding this proposal. Thanks for your assistance. I look forward to our future cooperation.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

商用英文假設描述 (42) (下)

* 商用目標 : 商用提案的目標 ?

* 達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

* 希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

* 領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關商用領域的貢獻?

商用英文假設描述:

商用目標 An optimal operating model can be developed, capable of selecting an effective monitor to adequately implement an internal marketing model in hospital marketing practices, subsequently providing admissions directors or hospital administrators with the most effective strategic policy to promote marketing efforts. 商用目標的方法 To do so, statistical variables of various populations among patients and hospital staff that provide healthcare services such as training, orientation and promotion can be identified using multivariate statistical analysis, i.e. one way ANOVA test and the Karl Pearson test (NOTE: Add 2-3 sentences to describe the methodology more completely). 希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed optimal operating model can provide staff with a more productive working environment by adopting statistical analysis to demonstrate the effectiveness of various services, including training, orientation and promotion, enabling hospitals to understand which areas require improvement to achieve quality healthcare services. Enhanced quality of healthcare services is an indirect means of promotion, by which satisfied patients and their relatives relay their positive experiences to others, ultimately improving the image of the institution. Moreover, the proposed operating model confirms the effectiveness of internal marketing, in which organizations train and motivate their employees to provide quality healthcare services. Such an approach must precede conventional marketing practices if a hospital is to maintain its competitiveness. 領域的貢獻 Importantly, the proposed optimal operating model can provide expectations by and of the staff, motivating them to continuously improve in their profession. Additionally, the proposed method contains an optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data for engineers. While an internal marketing program within a hospital must focus on training and career advancement for hospital staff, the proposed model can encourage training and continuous on-the-job learning through daily interaction with peers and supervisors. Furthermore, the optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data can provide a valuable reference for engineers as well.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德