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我應該寫期刊論文或學術會議論文? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 12/30/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 我應該寫期刊論文或學術會議論文?
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(701) How to develop a research proposal
* 明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (10 / 15)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (150) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞
我應該寫期刊論文或學術會議論文?

* 學術會議論文的優點:

– 會議論文允許你向觀眾展示作品,往往比通過期刊投稿審核過程更快

– 會議論文為同一主題感興趣的人提供了一個很好的交流機會。

– 會議論文給新的研究人員和資深研究學者接觸機會和提高知名度的機會。

– 會議論文讓研究員在投稿期刊前對其論文初稿得到一些意見反饋。

* 然而,會議論文是不能作為著名的期刊文章。

* 而且期刊文章的投稿審核過程會比會議論文更長。
Source: Journal articles vs. Conference proposals (protoscholar)

學術英文投稿教學影片(701) How to develop a research proposal
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (10 / 15)

科技英文寫作者常常寫非所想,當然誤導了讀者,此時明白寫作就很重要,除了要把文章寫得精確以外,更要使讀者不誤解您的意思。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

16. Turn on the machine and the valve should be closed.

17. The academic advisor asked the graduate student if the paper was completed and is it ready to send
to the journal for review.

18. The laboratory manager arranged the meeting and the discussion was led by him.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 10 lý do để theo đuổi công việc nghiên cứu sinh tiến sĩ (PART B)
– Bạn sẽ có nhiều cơ hội công việc hơn trong tương lai
– Bạn có hứng thú với một đề tài nghiên cứu
– Bạn hưởng thụ thời gian tự do và do bản thân tự quyết định
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (333): Research poster design: 1) Planning
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (94) (phần 2)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (150) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our most recent project focused on the excessive amount of time required to deploy and configure thousands of WSN nodes 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境As a novel network architecture, a wireless sensor network (WSN) represents the maturity of hardware and software technologies for electrical devices and enhanced wireless network capabilities. Its applications can be found in healthcare, the military, disaster support, environmental monitoring and factory management. 介紹管理問題 However, many WSN architecture-related issues have not been effectively addressed, including multi-hops, multiple-access abilities, routing capabilities, and self-organization. Numerous WSN nodes cooperating with each other are necessary to alleviate the above difficulties. For instance, monitoring a forested area requires deploying at least one thousand WSN nodes. Exactly how engineers configure those WSN nodes and distribute them over such a large area are challenging issues. Although capable of simulating all WSN nodes to manage and configure the WSN, a pure simulation model lacks authentic WSN behaviors. The ability to devise an WSN-based experimental platform to manage such a large number of WSN nodes will require an excessive amount of time in deploying and configuring thousands of WSN nodes. Such a predicament severely restricts WSN studies.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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如何處理學術會議發問問題 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 12/17/2015

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“>如何處理學術會議發問問題

處理學術會議發問問題如下:

*你可以不回答這個問題,因為你要考慮或者你突然忘記答案。這時,感謝這個人的問題,建議他或她以後討論這個問題。

*現在的問題和你的口頭報告無關。感謝這個人的問題,請對方原諒自己無法回答這個問題,因要保留時間給相關問題。你也可以建議他或她以後討論這個問題。

*他們完全誤解重點,嘗試回答這個問題並指出那不是你的原先意圖。

*問題有敵意(你不知道為什麼)。清楚表示你不同意他們的意見,但保持禮貌。

*問題有敵意(你知道為什麼)。可能是有經驗的研究人員試圖羞辱研究生的例子。這時應表示你尊重他的意見。但你仍覺得你的方法較好。

<a href="https://theresearchwhisperer.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/question-time/

“>Source: Building Conference Karma 2: Question Time(theresearchwhisperer)

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
*如何處理學術會議發問問題
*學術英文投稿教學影片(689) Research design: interview analysis basics
*除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
*非正式工程英文技術報告 (144) (上)
<a href="https://theresearchwhisperer.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/question-time/
學術英文投稿教學影片(689) Research design: interview analysis basics
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。
請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Joint cooperation between the two organizations depends on whether the available resources are adequate enough.

2. A major breakthrough in modern technology of today is the emergence of artificial intelligence.

3. The major benefit of the proposal is that the true facts about the very unique industrial
situation can be obtained.

4. The final outcome between the two teams was an unexpected surprise.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Học giả nên sử dụng Twitter như thế nào (phần B)
– Bạn sử dụng sự phân tích của Twitter, để xác định thời gian tốt nhất gửi email
– Không nên đợi mọi người đến tìm bạn, tích cực vào Twitter của bạn để công bố
– Thời gian phải chính xác
– Sử dụng Twitter làm phần phương tiện truyền thông xã hội càng mở rộng và một phần trong chiến lược thông tin
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (321): How to Write a Good Argumentative Essay: Logical Structure
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (89) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Civil Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (144) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent effort investigated how to expand the market share of digital life-related products. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Constructing and applying intelligent environments have received considerable interest in industrial and academic circles. Digital life has also received much interest in recent years, with identification technology playing a critical role in intelligent environment research. Many IT manufacturers design and produce various handheld 3C products to gain a foothold in the emerging digital life market. 介紹管理問題 However, given its focus on home care, home learning, and home entertainment, digital life applications are limited to the home. Additionally, radio frequency identification (RFID), i.e. conventionally adopted critical identification technology, is seldom adopted in digital life studies, thus restricting the creation of R&D efforts in digital life. The above fact not only reflects the inability to integrate various intelligent environments, but also indicates that only 10% of all 3C products can be used as expected as their prime scenario due to an unsound intelligent environment. Therefore, the promotional efforts in mobile commerce are not well defined. Moreover, profits from the digital life market account for only 10% of the entire 3C market.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 12/16/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(688) 3 kinds of randomness in research
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (143) (下)
舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART B)

* 考慮誰是你的聽眾?

– 在學術會議中, 你會如何提出有關你工作中更廣泛的含意及影響?

– 你能提出領域特定主題新研究途徑的問題?*介紹這次會議的主題*保持參考資料簡潔和明確以用來主持學術會議。

– 你的觀點明白地寫在會議的提案上。

– 確保你的學術會議中的個別句子有清楚邏輯性加以連接。

– 省略贅言。

* 校對,編輯,仔細檢查

Source: Writing the Academic Conference Proposal (gradhacker)

學術英文投稿教學影片(688) 3 kinds of randomness in research
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。
請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Computer networking is found to be a group connected together in order to share information.

10. The public phone system is a good example of a network in light of the fact that it makes use of its own protocols to establish a link between two or more people that make an inquiry about the manner in which voiced information is exchanged.

11. A majority of laser printers offer a sharper and darker text print compared to other types.

12. There is a general consensus of opinion that the adopted measures are adequate enough.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Học giả nên sử dụng Twitter như thế nào (phần A)
– Sau mỗi lần hội nghị/hội thảo/hội nghị nghiên cứu thảo luận, nên đem các slide liên quan để trên trang mạng
– Mỗi lần khi bài luận văn xuất bản, sử dụng Twitter công bố trang mạng có liên quan đến người xuất bản.
– Sử dụng Twitter để công bố lời bàn của người phát ngôn của hội nghị
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (320): Writing a Research Proposal
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (88) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Civil Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (143) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an efficient SDS scheme that incorporates user diversity and an evolutionary model to adapt to various conversational contexts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述A fine-grained user model was derived to accurately represent a user’s situation; the user model comprises a skill level for the system, knowledge level on the target domain and degree of hastiness. The adaptation of SDS was then achieved using a reinforced learning approach. (NOTE: Add 1-2 more sentence to describe the methodology more thoroughl) 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed SDS scheme can increase the response accuracy of air travel-related problems and response system by 15%. Additionally, the proposed scheme can contribute to efforts to further enhance HCI with robustness by facilitating natural speech dialogic communication with computers. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, given the large discrepancy in individual behavior or conversation, the proposed spoken dialogue scheme can also provide a valuable reference for efforts underway to model the divergence of users. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART A) (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 12/15/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(687) Research Design: a simple approach
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (8 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (143) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART A)

* 考慮誰是你的聽眾?

– 會議著重在一個更大學科裡的特定主題嗎?

– 你是否有專業知識及資格舉辦這樣的會議?*把你的主題和相關較大的學科做聯結。

– 你怎麼能把你聽眾的需求和一個特定的學科做聯結?

– 你能舉出一個重要叄考來源或有關本學科的學者?

– 你能解釋你的工作內容以作為一個研究方向或研究領域裡主要辯論的一部分嗎?

Source: Writing the Academic Conference Proposal (gradhacker)

學術英文投稿教學影片(687) Research Design: a simple approach
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (8 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。
請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. Netscape Navigator is also helpful if conditions are such that the users are in many cases not in close proximity to their local server.

6. The web browser in all cases gives consideration to the user’s needs in a situation in which he or she is away from the office.

7. The following instructions are actually presented for the purpose of helping the e-mail user access incoming and outgoing e-mail from anywhere.

8. It is well known that a computer network serves the function of being a group of interconnected computers that cooperate together to accomplish many important tasks.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Làm thế nào đọc bài phê bình để chuẩn bị cho bài viết đánh giá học thuật (nghiên cứu sinh tiếng Anh viết bài báo hàng ngày)
– Sử dụng các nguồn tài nguyên mạng để tìm kiếm tác giả là ai và những câu chuyện nổi tiếng của họ.
– Xin đặc biệt chú ý phần dẫn luận, lời cảm ơn và lời nói đầu.
– Ở trang ghi chú sử dụng biểu tượng và phần viết tắt làm ký hiệu.
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (319): Life in Research and Academia
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (88) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Civil Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (143) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our most recent project focused on how to ensure the development of speech applications in human computer interaction (HCI). 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 HCI has emulated certain aspect of human-human communication in the recent decade, opening possibilities for machines to converse with humans. However, speech recognition schemes have substantially improved in terms of implementing experimental spoken dialogue systems (SDS) that function within specific semantic domains. The dialogue management (DM) module can be used to control conversation between humans and computers, subsequently affecting the performance of SDS significantly. 介紹管理問題 However, in addition to only adopting finite state machine approaches to represent the states of dialogue and treating each user as a similar conversational behavior, this module can not learn from various conversational contexts. Moreover, SDS can not perform as humans do owing to the inability to exploit the discrepancies between users and a lack of automatic adaptation. Given the difficulty of evaluating SDS, many evaluation parameters have been used in previous research, i.e. the total time of utterances, the number of user/machine dialogue turns and the transaction success. In the travel domain, correct responses of SDS would be only around 80%. Despite enhancements, SDS accuracy falls below user requirements, thus restricting severely the development of speech applications, i.e. voice portal, and ultimately incurring a collapse of human-human communication in HCI.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

如何在國際會議上發表學術文章 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 12/2/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何在國際會議上發表學術文章 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(674) Effective Project Planning in Application Development
* 避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (5 / 11)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (136) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何在國際會議上發表學術文章 (PART B)

* 簡短你的句子。

* 避免使用術語和縮略語。

* 專注於一個論點或想法。

*嘗試預想任何問題。
Source: Giving an academic conference paper (doctoral school)

學術英文投稿教學影片(674) Effective Project Planning in Application Development
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (5 / 11)

使用It 及 There 開頭的句子容易使文章語多累贅及曖昧不清。除非It 指的是先前句子所提特定的名詞,否則完全的避免 It is 的句型。數個由It is 開頭的句型應去除掉,因為他們對句意並沒幫助。如果不能完全省略去除掉這種句型,則應更為精簡的描述全句。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. There is little attention paid in previous literature to multi-response problems in the Taguchi
Method.

6. There is more and more evidence that suggests that there is a close relation between nutrition
and work performance.

7. It is important that the conflict is reduced to make a determina- tion of the optimal setting
of the design parameters.

8. There is another method that employs the regression technique.
Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Bảng liệt kê tóm tắt luận văn nghiên cứu của bạn: Sắp xếp bài báo nghiên cứu cho các tạp chí quốc tế
– Bài tóm tắt của bạn dài bao nhiêu?
– Tư liệu chung mà bài tóm tắt của bạn cung cấp gồm những vấn đề nào, chẳng hạn như vấn đề nghiên cứu cần giải quyết, và các nghiên cứu trước đây đã từng làm nhưng vấn đề chưa thể giải quyết được?
– Lý luận hoặc phương pháp của bạn có gì khác biệt so với những nghiên cứu trước đây?
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (306): A career in academic research: A perspective on ethics
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (81) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Industrial Management)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (136) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a novel method for verifying the completeness and validity of Embedded Linux by requiring only three months and two qualified staff members to do so. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The proposed method can adopt an automation mechanism to test Embedded Linux and display the results graphically. Engineers can select portions of the embedded Linux for testing. The code coverage for those tests was analyzed. According to the code coverage, whether the tests are complete and whether additional test patterns are required were determined. Next, error portions of the Embedded Linux were corrected based on the test results. Additionally, the above procedure was repeated until all tests are completed, thus satisfying the minimal time requirement via this automation method. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that, in addition to completing a test using the code coverage information, the minimal time requirement can be satisfied using this automation method. Moreover, minimal human resources can be expended using this automation method. Furthermore, the average error rate is only 1.5%. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed method can lower overhead costs and increase profit revenues owing to a low error rate. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

如何在國際會議上發表學術文章 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 12/1/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何在國際會議上發表學術文章 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(673) Project Planning and Analysis
* 避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (3 / 11)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (136) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何在國際會議上發表學術文章 (PART A)

* 找出觀眾對你的期望。大多數會議時間約20分鐘之久,不包括Q&A時間*你的觀眾將是誰。他們是這個主題的專家或者他們只知其一,二?

* 檢查場地細節。你發表學術文章是在一個小會議間裡嗎?或者在大講堂?*當你在編寫學術簡報內容時應大聲朗讀出來。

* 一個20分鐘的學術簡報文件內容應約有3200字左右。

* 不要只讀你的文件。應與觀眾眼神接觸和使用令人放鬆的身體語言。
Source: Giving an academic conference paper (doctoral school)

學術英文投稿教學影片(673) Project Planning and Analysis
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (3 / 11)

使用It 及 There 開頭的句子容易使文章語多累贅及曖昧不清。除非It 指的是先前句子所提特定的名詞,否則完全的避免 It is 的句型。數個由It is 開頭的句型應去除掉,因為他們對句意並沒幫助。如果不能完全省略去除掉這種句型,則應更為精簡的描述全句。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. It is imperative that arrangement of the class schedule be
done by the academic advisor.

10. It is not necessary for the coordination of the tasks to be
the responsibility of the department manager.

11. There is no need for the responsibility for all the
assignments to be that of the team leader.

12. There is no need for corrections of the tests to be done by
the teacher.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Các bước tiến hành viết một nhận xét văn học: Sắp xếp bài báo nghiên cứu cho các tạp chí quốc tế
– Xác định lĩnh vực nghiên cứu của bạn
– Tìm kiếm tài liệu văn học
– Tìm phần trích có liên quan trong cuốn sách và bài viết của bạn
– Tóm tắt những nghiên cứu trước đó và đề xuất nghiên cứu trong tương lai để xác định chủ đề chính có liên quan đến phần nghiên cứu của mình.
– Tạo khung khái niệm của bạn, để xác định trong việc xem xét các bài nghiên cứu khác nhau nên có một chủ đề chung và hàm ý chung.
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (305): Starting and Running Your Research Lab at a New Institution
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (81) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Industrial Management)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (136) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent effort investigated how to alleviate concerns over customer dissatisfaction with a high error rate with company products. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 The frequency of embedded Linux’s test has significantly increased in recent years owing to consumer demand for audio and video hand-held devices, as well as increased product diversification. For instance, variable mp3 players are constructed using various hardware platforms, with each platform requiring a specialized embedded Linux, explaining the increasingly larger frequency of embedded Linux’s test. 介紹管理問題 However, the conventional method cannot verify completeness and validity of embedded Linux efficiently, thus expending enormous human resources and a prohibitively high error rate. Moreover, the conventional method cannot verify the completeness and validity of embedded Linux efficiently, thus expending enormous human resources and a prohibitively high error rate. For instance, the conventional method requires roughly 10 months and four qualified staff members. Additionally, the average error rate is around 5% in a 40,000 line source code. A prohibitively large amount of time and human resources spend in verifying the completeness and validity of Embedded Linux result in increased overhead costs, thus delaying market delivery and incurring significant profit loss. Moreover, a high error rate causes customers to lose confidence in the product quality.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

學術職位面試常見問題 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/29/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術職位面試常見問題 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(671) Planning and Organizing Your Project to Ensure Success
* 避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) ( 1 / 11 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (135) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞
學術職位面試常見問題 (PART B)

* 請指出你感興趣教導的三個學科?為什麼呢?

* 你如何看待你和本科系的合作?

* 你會如何教研究生研討會基礎理論/方法?

* 什麼是目前在你的領域最重要的知識討論?

*你能想像和目前在該部門教學的教師合作?

* 是什麼激勵你的教學?

Source: How Not to F**k Up Your Conference Interview(theprofessorisin)

學術英文投稿教學影片(671) Planning and Organizing Your Project to Ensure Success
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) ( 1 / 11 )

使用It 及 There 開頭的句子容易使文章語多累贅及曖昧不清。除非It 指的是先前句子所提特定的名詞,否則完全的避免 It is 的句型。數個由It is 開頭的句型應去除掉,因為他們對句意並沒幫助。如果不能完全省略去除掉這種句型,則應更為精簡的描述全句。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. It is possible that the price of a laser printer is higher
than that of an ink jet printer.

2. There is a need for limitation of the number of users by the
systems manager.

3. It is important that cooperation with each other be the
focus of the study group.

4. It could happen that a decision to cancel the exhibition is
reached by the committee.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Thư ứng dụng việc làm (phần 1): Kỹ năng viết đơn xin việc
– Giới thiệu sơ lược
– Tư cách người giới thiệu
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (303): Joseph Lampel on the importance of management research
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (80) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (135) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our most recent project focused on how to ensure high-quality medical care. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Computer graphic capabilities of storing and displaying 2D CT images play an increasingly significant role in brain surgery, in which surgeons rely upon these digitalized images to ensure success. 介紹管理問題 However, diagnosing and determining the exact 3D reconstructed structure of a brain and disease target is extremely difficult. Besides the complexity involved in explaining the diagnosis to patients clearly, identifying and determining the position and direction of the target is also problematic. In clinical practice, the error in determining the target position normally exceeds 1 cm. The surgeon must therefore enlarge the incision of the patient’s skull. Such inaccuracy makes high-quality medical care impossible, not only causing patient injury, but also expending many resources from the national healthcare system.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source:

學術職位面試常見問題 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日 11/28/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術職位面試常見問題 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(670) How to create a simple and visual high level Project Plan using Microsoft Excel
* 強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (12 / 12 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (134) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術職位面試常見問題 (PART A)

* 你的論文和同領域的其他人有什麼不同點?

* 基於你的論文所引出的出版計劃內容如何?

* 對你的工作,誰對你有最大的學術影響?

* 對於大規模的學科基礎班你會怎樣教導?

* 你會有效使用教科書嗎?

Source: How Not to F**k Up Your Conference Interview(theprofessorisin)

學術英文投稿教學影片(670) How to create a simple and visual high level Project Plan using Microsoft Excel
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (12 / 12 )

如前單元所示,使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰,然而,有些動詞讓人感覺並不強勁,無法有力闡示一個動作。動詞如 is, are, was, were, has, give, make, come, 還有 take 等都屬此類。所以, 作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. The investigator came up with a recommendation on a solution to the problem.

10. The assessors make a verification of the product quality.

11. The pollster regularly takes a survey of the general public on whether or not the incumbent should be re-elected by the constituents.

12. The accreditation committee makes an appraisal of qualified candidates that are in compliance with the standards.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Thuyết trình báo cáo quản lý tiếng Anh hiệu quả (3) Kỹ thuật viết quảng cáo
– Những nhân tố chủ yếu trong kết cấu thuyết trình tiếng Anh: (A)Mở đầu (B)Nội dung chính (C)Kết luận
– Kết luận: (a)Khái quát các luận điểm chủ yếu (b)Cảm ơn các đại biểu (c)Mời các đại biểu phát biểu
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (302): Personal and Professional Growth through Academic Research
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (79) (phần 2)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (134) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a control technology method for radiation patterns. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The pattern direction was adjusted using an additional metal reflector from conventional patterns. However, this method increases the system size, which is inappropriate for portable device applications. Asymmetry of the antenna radiation patterns originates from various current distributions on the system ground plane and the antenna. Thus, cancelling the ground plane current can avert destructive interference in the far field. Next, out of phase ground plane current was changed to be in the phase current to produce interference in the far field. Additionally, the RF clock was placed into the system to filter out the phase current. Moreover, contracting the ground plane size was adopted to avoid an unnecessary ground current. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed method can alter the location of the peak radiation power from *** to ***. Meanwhile, the antenna gain at *** can reach 0.5 dBi. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻Importantly, this modification can increase the communication distance, lower power consumption, and enhance communication quality. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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研究資助提案撰寫 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/27/2015

LantanaFlowerLeaves

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 研究資助提案撰寫 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(669) Project Planning with Sticky Notes
* 強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (11 / 12 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (134) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

研究資助提案撰寫 (PART B)

* 不管評論人發表他們的意見的動機是基於政治或個人因素,應取他們好的意見來改進提案。

* 不涉入研究資助過程中所涉及的行政程序。相反,應專注於寫作,以提出好的研究資助提案。

* 把研究資助提案寫作挑戰視為一個學習的經驗。不管最後是什麼結果都要保持信心。

Source: The Joy of Grant Writing (gradhacker)

學術英文投稿教學影片(669) Project Planning with Sticky Notes
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (11 / 12 )

如前單元所示,使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰,然而,有些動詞讓人感覺並不強勁,無法有力闡示一個動作。動詞如 is, are, was, were, has, give, make, come, 還有 take 等都屬此類。所以, 作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The members came to an agreement on how the issue should be
handled by the organization.

6. The group made a decision to let the funds be controlled by
the treasurer.

7. The president gave the authority to the controlling
committee to distribute the funds.

8. The governing body offered explanations why the law is
enacted by the legislative branch.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Thuyết trình báo cáo quản lý tiếng Anh hiệu quả (2) Kỹ thuật viết quảng cáo
– Những nhân tố chủ yếu trong kết cấu thuyết trình tiếng Anh: (A)Mở đầu (B)Nội dung chính (C)Kết luận
– Nội dung chính: (a)Luận điểm số 1 (b)Luận điểm số 2 (c)Luận điểm khác (d)Phần tóm tắt nhỏ của nội dung chính (e)Luận điểm cuối cùng
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (301): Academic Twits: using Twitter in learning, teaching and research
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (79) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (134) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our group has thoroughly explored the increasing incidence of degraded performance of wireless communications. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Wireless communications is increasingly popular, especially in mobile phone and USB dongle card applications. The antenna of these devices is arranged on the edge of a ground plane in a wireless system, making the antenna radiation patterns asymmetrical and the peak radiation power moving towards the system ground. For instance, in mobile phones, the human hand absorbs peak radiation power, subsequently degrading communication quality and shortening the range of communication. 介紹管理問題 However, an increased power consumption reduces usable time of mobile phones. For wireless devices, the peak radiation power is located at *** and the antenna gain at *** plane is lower than O dBi. Additionally, radiation power of 50% in a human hand makes the communication distance only half that of the theoretical value, which is estimated in free space. Asymmetrical characteristics of the patterns consume an excessive amount of power, thus degrading the performance of wireless communications.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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是否叄加一個學術會議決定標準 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/22/2015

Rapsfeld 2007

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 是否叄加一個學術會議決定標準 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(664) Developing Research Questions
* 強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6 / 12 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (131) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

是否叄加一個學術會議決定標準 (PART A)

一個良好的學術會議的標準:

1。會議發表的是所在領域最好的和最新的學術研究。

2。會議提供的交流機會。

3。會議增加您的學術聲譽。列入您的個人經歷。

Source: Academic conferences: Should I stay or should I go?(universityaffairs.ca)

學術英文投稿教學影片(664) Developing Research Questions
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6 / 12 )

如前單元所示,使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰,然而,有些動詞讓人感覺並不強勁,無法有力闡示一個動作。動詞如 is, are, was, were, has, give, make, come, 還有 take 等都屬此類。所以, 作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. The following section provides recommendations on improvements to be made in the
conventional design.

10. The purpose of this study is to propose a GA-based solution to the MCG problem.

11. There is a requirement that all factors be considered.

12. A star configuration is comprised of a series of computers connected through a central
point with a device known as a hub.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Thư ứng dụng việc làm (phần 2) Kỹ năng viết đơn xin việc
– Khen tổ chức mà bạn đang áp dụng cho nhà nước và cách làm việc có sẽ có lợi cho mục tiêu nghề nghiệp của mình.
– Tổng hợp các bản ghi nhớ với một chủ đề hoặc bán điểm chính.
– Mời độc giả liên lạc với bạn cho một cuộc phỏng vấn.
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (296): Evaluating Journal Articles with the CAARP Test
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (76) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineeering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (131) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a novel security protocol, capable of cooperating efficiently with other energy-conserving communication protocols. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 A complex WSN was constructed to function as the operating platform. The performance of three communication protocols was then evaluated when operating with several security protocols, including the proposed one. Next, the drained energy and timing cost was compared statistically to yield the simulation results. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the power consumption does not increase, and the overhead on connection delay is under 20%.管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed protocol can be adopted to establish the foundation of energy-efficient and dependable WSNs. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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