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1. Either the supply or consumers determines the market outcome.
2. The department chairman and professor are my current employer.
3. Telecommunications have been widely studied in recent years.
4. The optimization phase determines a feasible factor level combination to optimize the process
quality. This may be difficult for users without previous statistical training.
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科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德
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| 非正式工程英文技術報告 (148) (上)
強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:
* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。
* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境：管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。
* 介紹工程問題：工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。
* 介紹工程方案的目標：工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應
* 工程方案方法論的細節描述：精確的方案步驟描述。
* 工程方案主要成果總結：工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。
* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻：研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。
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| 強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:
簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent effort addressed the increasing incidence of insufficient computational power and performance of hand-held devices owing to battery constraints 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Time to market delivery and reduction of overhead costs in the electronics industry have received increasing attention in recent years owing not only to stringent competition in audio and video hand-held devices, but also to the increasing number of companies in this market. For instance, this market niche includes various mp3, photo and MPEG4 players, allowing customers to base their decisions on price, appearance, storage capacity of FLASH or mini hard disk, audio or video quality, as well as functions and operational interfaces. A notable example is iPod. As a fascinating operational interface, the Apple Click Wheel possesses 20G or 30G large capacity that enables users to store thousands of mp3 files. 介紹管理問題 However, the conventional hardware design method depends only on experience of the designer. As mentioned above, time to market delivery and reduction of overhead costs are vital to product success or failure. Unfortunately, such requirements are normally exclusive if designers adopt the conventional method. Consequently, designers add redundant hardware components if hardware computational power is insufficient. Insufficient hardware computational power fails to satisfy the basic product requirements. Additionally, more functions required complicate hardware design, explaining the redundancy in hardware components. For instance, the likelihood of success in hardware design at ABC Company using the conventional method is roughly 50%. Therefore, ABC Company mandates that two teams process the same hardware design, resulting in at least one team experiencing success. Given the competition between the two teams to succeed, more hardware components are added to ensure sufficient hardware computational power in order to comply with product requirements. Such tendency increases hardware costs and power consumption. Power consumption is essential hand-held devices given that batteries are the power resource of such devices. An excessive amount of human resources expended in hardware design lowers the success probability below 100%. Additionally, success probability varies according to knowledge expertise of the designers. Given the inability to reduce high hardware costs, many redundant hardware components are added owing to the impossibility of ensuring sufficient computational power, ultimately resulting in the failure of hand-held devices owing to battery constraints.
有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德
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柯泰德英文論文編修訓練部落格 
