學術提案被拒絕的原因 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 12/18/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術提案被拒絕的原因
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(690) Qualitative Analysis 3: Practical framework
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (11 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (144) (下)
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學術提案被拒絕的原因

為演講,小組會議,口語簡報而寫的學術提案經常失敗的原因包括:

* 提案沒有足夠的熱情和說服力。

* 缺乏細節和重點;主題過於寬泛

* 提案主題無關會議主題;或者是太細節化。

* 會議論文缺乏明確的語言是提案裡應具有的。

Source: Writing Academic Proposals: Conferences, Articles, and Books (purdueowl)

學術英文投稿教學影片(690) Qualitative Analysis 3: Practical framework
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除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (11 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

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5. During that period in time, the fabrics were of cheap quality and rough in texture.

6. The physical phenomenon that occurs in the physics field is often times of an uncertain
condition and extreme in degree.

7. The terrible tragedy was unusual in nature and of a strange type.

8. It is the terminal that communicates with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

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非正式工程英文技術報告 (144) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a novel intelligent architecture, capable of increasing the efficiency of mobile commerce. The proposed architecture can integrate the applications of several environments, i.e. home, mini markets, shopping malls and banks. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 An intelligent info-filtering mechanism for tags reading was established. The status-management mechanism of daily commodities was then presented. Next, a secure settlement and payment mechanism were developed as well. Additionally, a practical info-interchange method was constructed. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed architecture can integrate RFID and context awareness technologies in a ubiquitous environment to increase the efficiency of mobile commerce. In addition to contributing to research efforts in digital life, the proposed architecture can also enhance the potential of mobile commerce and increase profits from the digital life market by up to 30% of that from the entire 3C market. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed architecture can provide a valuable reference for business models, ultimately providing opportunities for 3C manufacturers to consume value-added products. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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