舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 12/16/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(688) 3 kinds of randomness in research
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (143) (下)
舉辦學術會議提案撰寫 (PART B)

* 考慮誰是你的聽眾?

– 在學術會議中, 你會如何提出有關你工作中更廣泛的含意及影響?

– 你能提出領域特定主題新研究途徑的問題?*介紹這次會議的主題*保持參考資料簡潔和明確以用來主持學術會議。

– 你的觀點明白地寫在會議的提案上。

– 確保你的學術會議中的個別句子有清楚邏輯性加以連接。

– 省略贅言。

* 校對,編輯,仔細檢查

Source: Writing the Academic Conference Proposal (gradhacker)

學術英文投稿教學影片(688) 3 kinds of randomness in research
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞(精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。
請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Computer networking is found to be a group connected together in order to share information.

10. The public phone system is a good example of a network in light of the fact that it makes use of its own protocols to establish a link between two or more people that make an inquiry about the manner in which voiced information is exchanged.

11. A majority of laser printers offer a sharper and darker text print compared to other types.

12. There is a general consensus of opinion that the adopted measures are adequate enough.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Học giả nên sử dụng Twitter như thế nào (phần A)
– Sau mỗi lần hội nghị/hội thảo/hội nghị nghiên cứu thảo luận, nên đem các slide liên quan để trên trang mạng
– Mỗi lần khi bài luận văn xuất bản, sử dụng Twitter công bố trang mạng có liên quan đến người xuất bản.
– Sử dụng Twitter để công bố lời bàn của người phát ngôn của hội nghị
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (320): Writing a Research Proposal
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (88) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Civil Engineering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (143) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an efficient SDS scheme that incorporates user diversity and an evolutionary model to adapt to various conversational contexts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述A fine-grained user model was derived to accurately represent a user’s situation; the user model comprises a skill level for the system, knowledge level on the target domain and degree of hastiness. The adaptation of SDS was then achieved using a reinforced learning approach. (NOTE: Add 1-2 more sentence to describe the methodology more thoroughl) 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed SDS scheme can increase the response accuracy of air travel-related problems and response system by 15%. Additionally, the proposed scheme can contribute to efforts to further enhance HCI with robustness by facilitating natural speech dialogic communication with computers. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, given the large discrepancy in individual behavior or conversation, the proposed spoken dialogue scheme can also provide a valuable reference for efforts underway to model the divergence of users. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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