如何評審期刊文章 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/15/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何評審期刊文章 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(657) Planning Your Research Proposal
* 動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 10 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (128) (上)
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如何評審期刊文章 (PART B)

* 指出拼寫,語法和寫作風格錯誤。

* 指出期刊文章上的表達問題 – 文章的主要論點為何?

– 是否明確組織文章?

– 是否提供足夠的證據證明在研究論文介紹部份中所提出的論點聲明?

Source: How to Give Advice on a Peer’s Paper (patthomson)

學術英文投稿教學影片(657) Planning Your Research Proposal
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. How to adjust the multiple settings of the process parameters was outside of the knowledge of the engineers.

2. Standardization of the accreditation procedures was achieved by the committee.

3. For optimization of the conditions for robust design problems, the applicability of a novel
approach is performed in this study.

4. An experiment of the PCVD process in the IC manufacturing field is required of the
engineer.

5. Significant contributions by the proposed procedure are made to the manufacturing sector.

6. Transformation of the structure is achieved by strict control of the variables.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Mô tả kiến thức, kỹ năng và khả năng lãnh đạo mà cá nhân thu được (phần 2) (Kỹ năng viết đơn xin việc) (Giới thiệu kinh nghiệm làm việc và nghiên cứu)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (290): Duke University Student Chat – Academics and Research
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (73) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineeering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (128) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent effort investigated how to integrate a wireless LAN environment with mobile phone design. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Internet hot spots enable online access in many public areas, including airports, campuses and theaters. 介紹管理問題 However, the commonly adopted authentication, authorization and accounting (AAA) procedure is too complex. For instance, customers at McDonalds stand in line with others purchasing food to buy an ID/password card for one hour use. After the user’s computer is turned on and the browser is opened, the ID/password on the card is entered for authentication and authorization. The entire process may last more then 10 minutes. After an hour passes, the user must stand in line again and repeat the process. Such complexity seriously inhibits consumer desire to use wireless LAN in public places. Given the popularity of mobile phone use, the inability to develop an efficient AAA procedure that uses a wireless LAN environment integrated with mobile phone design seriously falls below consumer expectations.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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