如何評審期刊文章 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/14/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何評審期刊文章 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(656) Writing a research proposal
* 動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (8 / 10 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (127) (下)
如何評審期刊文章 (PART A)
* 總結期刊文章主要論點。
* 確定某個特定領域或期刊上文章的理論和實際貢獻。
* 確定期刊上文章長處
* 指出有關具體問題的內容。列出每個問題在期刊上的文章引用頁碼。
Source: How to Give Advice on a Peer’s Paper (patthomson)
學術英文投稿教學影片(656) Writing a research proposal
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (8 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

6. The fact that the attributes must be numerical and comparable is stipulated by TOPSIS.

7. The relative closeness computed in TOPSIS can be used as a performance assessment of multi-
response problems in the Taguchi method.

8. Measurement of each response must be carefully made by the standard.

9. Systematic optimization of the problem is the focus of this section.

10. Determination from the experience of an engineer shows how much pressure is affected by
time.

11. Further analysis of the facility is necessary for the practitioner to make an adjustment of
the parameter settings.

12. Minimization of A and B levels can be achieved by setting factors A and B at A2.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

<strong>Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym

* Mô tả kiến thức, kỹ năng và khả năng lãnh đạo mà cá nhân thu được (phần 1) (Kỹ năng viết đơn xin việc) (Giới thiệu kinh nghiệm làm việc và nghiên cứu)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (289): Teaching Critical Thinking

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (73) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineeering)

非正式工程英文技術報告 (127) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a centralized multimedia advertising system, capable of using a client-server architecture that enables advertising staff to replace the advertising contents for numerous multimedia advertising clients simultaneously through a centralized server. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 Various networking capabilities were implemented in a multimedia advertising system to support not only wired networks, e.g., Ethernet LAN, but also wireless ones, e.g., WLAN, PHS, GPRS and CDMA. A network management program was then developed to facilitate a dynamic switch among all networking capabilities under various environmental constraints. Next, an administrative program was implemented in the server, allowing a user to send updated multimedia advertising contents to all clients. Additionally, a receiver program was executed for each client to continuously update multimedia advertising contents from the server. Moreover, a current status program was executed for each client to calculate the display time, analyze the status of the client, and report all results to the server. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the centralized multimedia advertising system with a client-server architecture can enable staff to continuously and simultaneously update multimedia advertising contents for all clients from a centralized server, thus reducing the amount of personnel and company resources required to do so. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 In addition to providing shopping malls and department stores with an efficient means of continuously updating multimedia advertising contents, the proposed system can ultimately increase company profits. Moreover, the diverse networking ability of the proposed system can adopt itself to various network environments, thus streamlining efforts to deploy numerous multimedia advertisement clients in shopping malls and department stores.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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