如何準備博士論文答辯考試 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 11/8/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何準備博士論文答辯考試
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(650) Planning a Research Project
* 動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (2 / 10 )
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (124) (下)
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如何準備博士論文答辯考試

* 系統性地準備博士論文答辯考試,而不僅是逐題回答。檢查影響你的論文可能存在的疑點及弱點.這種方法將使你的回答更加靈活,不僅限於一定的思維方式

* 檢查你的論文要點,並試圖找出該委員會可能會問的問題。

* 確保你的論文結論有強力有效的論證參數支持。在你的論文中你可以承認錯誤, 但在此之前確保你可以成功地解釋結論, 且可以積極的語句對委員會建設性評論作出反應。

* 清楚說明影響您論文的作者。確保你能描述這些作者是如何影響你的論文結論.

* 可以在你的論文中提出文獻參考以支持結論。

* 如果委員會有人懷疑論文的結論,你應用數據,理論或方法來支持論文結論 – 特別當這些是你論文的長處。這種方法還可以幫助你保持行動積極性,而不是成為防禦反應。

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學術英文投稿教學影片(650) Planning a Research Project
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動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (2 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

6. A recommendation of using iterative least squares (ILS) as a simple method for analysis of censored data was made by Schmee and Hahn (1990).

7. Normalization of operations is achieved by a simple calculation of the scores.

8. Improvement of the condition is achieved by variation of the control factors

9. A recommendation is made here that the program be simulated by the engineer.

10. The operator made a reservation of the ticket for me.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

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非正式工程英文技術報告 (124) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we identified the root causes incurring low production yield in tape manufacturing by analyzing process parameters and possible causes of major visual defects. 管理方案方法論的細節描述The leading three defect items were determined from production yield data. Possible causes of major visual defects were then simulated based on the cause and effect diagram method. Next, the parameter combination from crossing processes was optimized by using the Taguchi method to reduce the defect rate of the tape process. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed Taguchi method can reduce the occurrence of the leading three defects by 10% and increase the production yield above 80%. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 In addition to providing further insight into how process performance index and production yield in the tape process are related, results of this study can contribute to efforts to increase production yield and enhance industrial competitiveness. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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