如何為論文做筆記來提取和組織研究資訊 (PART C) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/7/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何為論文做筆記來提取和組織研究資訊 (PART C)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(649) Research Projects Planning
* 動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) ( 1/ 10)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (124) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何為論文做筆記來提取和組織研究資訊 (PART C)

* 紀錄研究文獻來源如下:

– 作者的姓氏和縮寫

– 完整標題的文章或教科書

– 有關章節和頁碼

– 出版日期和地點

– 出版商的名稱

Source : Inside Track to Writing Theses and Disserations by NeilMurray and David Beglar (p. 76) (scribd)

學術英文投稿教學影片(649) Research Projects Planning
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) ( 1/ 10)

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Difficulty is encountered in explanation of the method to inexperienced engineers owing to its computational complexity.

2. Simulation of the program is performed in this study.

3. A slight increase occurs in the deposition rate.

4. Knowledge of how the variables are distributed is not re- quired by novice engineers

5. Not only is the variability of the control factors considered by the proposed procedure, but implementation of related tasks is performed by that same procedure.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym

* Báo cáo thuyết phục (Phần 2) Kỹ thuật viết tại nơi làm việc

– Thảo luận về tính khả thi của dự án thành công về phương pháp, chiến lược và dịch vụ khách hàng.

– Làm nổi bật những lợi ích dự kiến của dự án thành công.

– Tóm tắt các bước cần thiết để đảm bảo thành công của dự án.

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (282): Grammar Mistake Correction using Flax

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (69) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineeering)

非正式工程英文技術報告 (124) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our project focused on lowering production costs and sustaining or even enhancing product quality of integrated circuit components. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 As the semiconductor industry rapidly evolves, integrated circuit components continuously develop in line with consumer requirements for thinner and miniaturized electronic products. Wafer chips and system boards have a limited link distance when using a lead frame in conventional semiconductor package technologies, making it impossible for them to conform to high speed communication and high channel density requirements. A collaborative effort between manufacturers of chip packages and carriers has devised a new package technology, i.e., tape automated bonding, a new wafer chip carrier and tape. As a promising alternative to the above limitations, a tape can contain thinner channels with a shorter electrical connection distance between chip and system board to comply with high speed communication and numerous channel requirements. 介紹管理問題 Process capacity index-Cpk is used to determine the capability performance and equipment stability of the tape manufacturing process. Additionally, process capacity index should, in theory, be positively related to production yield. However, production yield is insufficient even when the tape process has an acceptable Cpk value and stable trend chart in statistical process control. Short, open and etching defects are major defect items identified during analysis of yield loss during final visual inspection. For instance, the final visual inspection yield of tape is under 75%. Moreover, major three defect rates are -8.5% for short, -4.3% for open and -2.8% for etching processes. The inability to enhance the production yield of the tape process makes it impossible to achieve a satisfactory production yield owing to the lack of a good Cpk, ultimately incurring high production costs and low product quality.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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