面試失誤 (PART E) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 11/1/2015

Humanitarian aid OCPA-2005-10-28-090517a

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 面試失誤 (PART E)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(643) Writing an Article Critique
* 常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6/12)
* 常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6/12)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (120) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

面試失誤 (PART E)

*沒有事先準備以下問題:

– 什麼是你的弱點?

– 為什麼我們應該僱用你?你為什麼要來這裡工作?

– 你的職業目標是什麼?為什麼你離開上一份工作?

– 何時你最滿意你的工作?

– 你能為我們做什麼其他應試者不能做的呢?

– 你要求多少薪水?你最不喜歡有關你上一份工作的事項?

Source: Successful Interview Techniques and Resume Building Guidelines (scribd)

Source: How to Write a Successful Resume and Win the Interviewby Michael Feeley

學術英文投稿教學影片(643) Writing an Article Critique
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6/12)

就像先前所說,如何用最少的字來表達一個完整的意念通常是科技寫作者一個大挑戰,然而這裡有一個祕訣,那就是使用主動語法。請記住主動語氣使句子更直接,明確及更有說服力。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

11. Specification of suitable operations is required by a user so that the responses can be simultaneously optimized.

12. An adjustment in the temperature can be made by the engineer.

13. Relevant statistics are examined in the following section so that the underlying factors can be assessed.

14. A detailed description of the economic situation is made in Section 2.

15. Objective assessment of the workplace is required by the supervisor.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Nhấn mạnh quá trình luyện tập học thuật của một lĩnh vực nhất định (phần 1) (Kỹ năng viết đơn xin việc:) (Mô tả nền tảng học vấn và thành tích có liên quan đến việc làm)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (275): Scholarly Research
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (66) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineeering)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (120) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we adapted the verification process area in CMI level 3 for CCL. Organizational culture should be of primary concern, while the verification process area merges with the process management system at CCL. 管理方案方法論的細節描述A peer review system for major manufactured products was established. Source code review meetings were then conducted periodically as the project progresses. Next, a complete interface test was performed upon completion of all product components. Additionally, a formal verification test was performed before product delivery. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the CMM1-level 3-adapted process management system can not only increase the defect removal rate before testing from 50%-70%, but also reduce identified defects from 6.6 to 2.1 per KLOC. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 In addition to enhancing product quality and increasing customer satisfaction, the proposed process management system can provide a valuable reference for organizations similar to CCL that are attempting to adapt CMMI level 3. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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