如何合理應對期刊評審 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 9/17/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何合理應對期刊評審 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(598) Effective Writing for Scholarly Work
* 去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (5 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym:
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (97) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何合理應對期刊評審 (PART B)

*理解和解釋評審的意見

-看一些評審在其單獨報告中作出的批評。這將有助於你了解其中的意義。

-尋找積極評價,讓您可以更好地了解你論文的優勢。嘗試使用這些優勢。

-有系統整理每個評審的批評,不要忽視正面的評價,或過分注重負面評論。

-小心審閱建議當評審建議你改變研究題目時。即使批評可能是合理的,應對您所選擇的研究目標充滿信心。一定要感謝評審的建議,因為其提供未來研究的可能發展方向。

Source: Rational Responses to Referees (theresearchwhisperer)

學術英文投稿教學影片(598) Effective Writing for Scholarly Work
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (5 / 12)

修飾語必須放在所要修飾的字之旁。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The technology has been advanced to satisfy consumer demand in recent years.

6. After considering the consumer reaction, which is volatile in the early stages of development, a decrease in production output was his decision.

7. When only seventeen years old, the university president granted her a doctorate degree.

8. To fully understand a lecture, note taking skills must be developed by the seminar participant.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym

* Kiểm tra các lỗi và thiếu sót bất cẩn và so sánh với lần đầu (10/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (228): How To Improve Your Reading Comprehension

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (42) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Information Techniology)

非正式工程英文技術報告 (97) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an injection molding method, capable of accurately estimating shrinkage defects during product manufacturing. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 Shrinkage of wafer products was reduced based on mold shrinkage compensation. The shrinkage compensation rates for various materials were then determined via simulation. Next, design and manufacturing time was significantly lowered by using those compensation rates, which are stored in a database made available for engineers. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed injection molding method can streamline product design by decreasing the shrinkage rate of defective products to less than 2%. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed method can ensure pre-compensation of the mold part, ultimately ensuring high precision in the manufacturing of exterior injection mold parts. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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