為什麼論文被學術期刊拒絕的原因 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 9/12/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 為什麼論文被學術期刊拒絕的原因 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(593) How to Think Critically and Learn Anything
* 句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (12/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (95) (上)
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為什麼論文被學術期刊拒絕的原因 (PART B)

* 結構寫得不好:一個寫得不好的手稿無法讓讀者看到你的貢獻。讀者應該可以清楚地看到以下這種結構:

– 研究工作提案建構:你研究工作提案的主題是什麼?你的讀者可以明了提案的內容嗎?

– 研究工作問題:你的提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步了解的問題嗎?

– 問題的量化:你要如何量化的問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制?

– 問題的中心:如果問題沒被解決或是充分了解,這對提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

Source: Publishing Research Manuscripts by Serna Carpenter

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德 (ycrc.com.tw)

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句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (12/12)

科技英文寫作中,句子的建構必須有一致性。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. This section not only presents a numerical example, but also the effectiveness of the proposed GA-based procedure for cell formation problems is demonstrated.

10. The censored data contain less information than complete data and analysis is made more difficult to perform.

11. The proposed model not only performs diagnostic checking, but also the optimal factor/level combination is determined.

12. The procedure to determine the optimal factor/level combination in a multi-response problem is described as follows:

Step 1: Estimate the factor effects.

A. The factor effects are plotted and the main effects on MRSN are tabulated.

B. Plot the factor efforts and tabulate the main effects on the mean response for the nominal-the-best case.

Step 2: The optimal control factors and their levels are determined.

A. Find the control factor that significantly affects MRSN.

B. The optimum level for each control factor is determined.

Step 3: The optimal adjustment factors are determined.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

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* Kiểm tra các lỗi và thiếu sót bất cẩn và so sánh với lần đầu (9/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo
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非正式工程英文技術報告 (95) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our group has thoroughly explored the complexity of incorporating customer preferences in a metropolitan taxi service. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Most metropolitan taxi services not only complement public transportation, but also function as a vital part of urban travel. The Ministry of Transportation (MOT) of the Republic of China cites individual taxis, cooperative associations, and taxi trades as the three business models in the Taiwan taxi industry. 介紹管理問題 Despite a recent focus on factors that may influence whether passengers take a taxicab, exactly how the taxi business model affects passenger behavioral intention remains unclear. For instance, according to MOT statistics, taxi trades in Taiwan rose from an annual rate of 42% in 2005 to 44% in 2007. Taiwan Taxi, a GPS-based taxi company, is a major taxi trade in Taiwan has implemented a GPS-based dispatching system from Singapore. In addition to benefiting the taxi driver and taxi trade firms, GPS technology also provides sense of security for passengers. The inability to understand how a specific taxi business model impacts passenger behavioral intention makes it impossible to determine not only how a taxi business model affects perceived safety, but also how perceived risk mediates the relation between the taxi business model and the behavioral intention of passengers. These unresolved issues make it extremely difficult for fleet line managers to draw up appropriate guide lines in order to comply with consumer preferences.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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