如何與期刊評審合作讓你的投稿論文被接受 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 9/5/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何與期刊評審合作讓你的投稿論文被接受 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(586) Academic Writing: Plagiarism and Referencing
* 句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (5/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (91) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何與期刊評審合作讓你的投稿論文被接受 (PART B)

* 表明你正在做評審所要求的一切以讓你的研究論文被接受。
* 如果你不能滿足評審的要求,則也應感謝評審的建議,但解釋為什麼這些要求不可能被改變的原因。
* 不要攻擊評審。雖然他們可能對你的論文沒有好感,但他們花時間來閱讀你的文件。
* 不要說:

“評審的想法是壞的,我的想法是好的。

”應說評審有一個有趣的概念,但你提出的想法也不錯,且是基於特定的事實或研究所發現。

Source: Common Reasons Why Academic Papers Are Rejected by Journal Editors

學術英文投稿教學影片(586) Academic Writing: Plagiarism and Referencing
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句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (5/12)

科技英文寫作中,句子的建構必須有一致性。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The standard procedure is for all intents and purposes inefficient, impractical, and creates problems.

6. Ullman [1989] not only used the Analysis of Means (ANOM) to study the mean response, but also a further extension of the ANOM was made to analyze dispersion effects.

7. The Taguchi Method deals with a one-dimensional problem and multi-dimensional problems are handled by TOPSIS.

8. The calculations are performed either to get a revised least squares fit or expected failure times are estimated for the censored values.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Kiểm tra các lỗi và thiếu sót bất cẩn và so sánh với lần đầu (1/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo
chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (213): 學習基礎方法 SQ3R (Learning based method)
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (33) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Information Technology)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (91) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an injection molding method that can accurately estimate shrinkage defects during product manufacturing by estimating the shrinkage rate of a product part and pre-compensation of the mold cavity via simulation, ultimately reducing shrinkage defects in products and streamlining the manufacturing process. 管理方案方法論的細節描述Shrinkage of wafer products was reduced based on mold shrinkage compensation. The shrinkage compensation rates for various materials were then determined via computer-aided engineering (CAE) simulation. Next, compensation dimensions of shrinkage and injection molding process parameters were optimized by performing CAE simulations repeatedly. Additionally, design was simplified and manufacturing time significantly lowered by using those compensation rates, which were stored in a database made available for engineers. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed injection molding method can streamline product design by decreasing the shrinkage rate of defective products to less than 2%. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed method can ensure pre-compensation of the mold part, ultimately ensuring high precision in the manufacturing of exterior injection mold parts.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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