(摘要 /簡介 /主要內容) : 進行學術期刊論文審查時應該問的問題 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 8/29/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* (摘要 /簡介 /主要內容) : 進行學術期刊論文審查時應該問的問題 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片(579) Essay Structure and Literature Review
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (88) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

(摘要 /簡介 /主要內容) : 進行學術期刊論文審查時應該問的問題 (PART B)

* 主要內容

– 作者清楚地描述所提出的方法和分析?

– 作者是否清楚地描述分析實驗誤差和不確定性?

– 作者確定文章的主要部分是為了滿足讀者的興趣?

– 是否有不太重要的或無關的內容可以刪除嗎?

– 作者對提出的研究主要結果提供足夠的細節?

– 作者是否提出太多的數據讓讀者混淆?

– 你能建議作者如何可以消除論文的某些部分,以用來在期刊文章的其他領域提供額外的內容細節?

– 內容份量是否適合足以做為研究報告?

– 論文內容是否可以被分為兩篇期刊文章?

Source: How to Review a Technical Paper by Alan Meier (scribd)

學術英文投稿教學影片(579) Essay Structure and Literature Review
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代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. It is our opinion that, when a decision reaches the final stage, it must be implemented
promptly.

2. No adjustment factors exist if (C1) is violated, which means that the transformation approach can be carried out.

3. Taguchi [4] treated censoring times as actual failures, which may lead to serious deficiencies. This arises because the unobserved failure and censoring times may significantly differ.

4. A number of studies have examined how inflation affects an inventory policy, which also considered the time value of money and different inflation rates.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

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非正式工程英文技術報告 (88) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our group has thoroughly explored the complexity of increasing the operational efficiency of stepping motors. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 As indispensable actuators for auto-focusing (AF) and zooming, stepping motors are extensively adopted in digital video cameras (DVCs). Following rising consumer demand for DVCs in the electronic products market, enhanced properties and elevated functions play an increasing pivotal role in luring new customers. 介紹管理問題 Despite their fast dynamic AF access, even the most advanced DVCs are limited in terms of low power consumption and inadequate operational efficiency to satisfy consumer demand. Conventional AF actuators in DVCs are all stepping motors, subsequently limited by a slow dynamic AF speed, high power consumption low power efficiency. Moreover, noise interference from a stepping motor in a DVC is easily recorded into the digital films during AF operation. For instance, the operational time for a typical AF linear actuator in a DVC is only 1/6th that of a conventional stepper motor. Additionally, the power consumption by using a linear actuator in a DVC is only 1/3rd of that when using a conventional stepping motor for AF. Moreover, the operational efficiency by using a linear actuator in a DVC is only 1/2 that of a conventional steeping motor. Furthermore, the acoustic noise interference caused by using a linear actuator for AF in a DVC is lower than that when operated by a conventional stepping motor. Therefore, linear actuators are highly promising alternatives to conventional stepping motors in DVCs. Theoretically, conventional stepping motors are limited in terms of their fixed resolution, possibly incurring errors when using open-loop control in AF operation. Such limitations lead to unclear CCD images in a DVC. In practice, a conventional stepping motor is larger than a linear actuator owing to the simple structure of the latter. Additionally, the conventional stepping motor for AF system in a DVC leads to slow dynamic AF speed, high power loss and low operational efficiency. Moreover, noise interference from a stepping motor is easily recorded into digital forms during AF operation.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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