更多博士生研究失敗事項 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 8/22/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 更多博士生研究失敗事項
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (572) Writing scientific articles (Part 13 of 18)
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (3/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (84) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

更多博士生研究失敗事項

* 你沒有向學校顧問建議你認為誰應該審查你的論文。

* 你發送論文給從來沒有審查過論文的人審查。

* 你先寫論文的介紹部份。在介紹部份裡所提出的任何問題,都應已在結論部份回答。大多數評審閱讀摘要,介紹和結論,然後再
看看叄考文獻。這些部份都要事後前後反覆再檢查改寫。

* 你寫了一個壞的文獻回顧。

* 你不要讓其他人編輯修正你論文裡語法和寫作風格錯誤。

Source: Five Ways to Fail Your PhD (thesiswhisperer)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (572) Writing scientific articles (Part 13 of 18)
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (3/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Factors C, D, F, G and H significantly affect the response average. This indicates that F can be
adjusted based on the target value.

10. You should maintain a constant cutting speed even though the effective diameter of the cutting
changes during machining.

11. In most previous investigations, they do not consider the simultaneous effects of deterioration and
inflation.

12. A numerical example demonstrates the effectiveness of the proposed method, which further indicates
that the total system cost will be incorrectly estimated if the deteriorating effect and/or
inflationary effect are neglected.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym

* Cấu trúc câu đều phải có sự nhất quán (11/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết
văn bản tiếng anh)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (189): Academic Writing and Publishing

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (23) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

非正式工程英文技術報告 (84) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標Therefore, we developed an enhanced contract time schedule that incorporates calendar dates, working days and project phases. As duration of a contract includes many circumstances, using only one time framework to determine the entire project schedule time is an unreliable approach that will create friction between the company owner and contractor. All foreseeable circumstances must be integrated into the contract schedule. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The scope of the project’s activities was determined. A time schedule for each work task was then confirmed. Next, weather conditions during the project were also forecasted. Additionally, the role of alternative design and administrative assignments during implementation of the contract was evaluated. Moreover, other ways in which the contractor influences this contracted work were assessed. Finally, the above influences on this contract were considered to determine the actual project schedule time. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed contract time schedule can determine more accurately the time constraints in a construction project than conventional methods can. In addition to achieving a more accurate budget than the originally forecasted one, the proposed schedule can ensure a higher quality than previous ones. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 In addition to accurately predicting project completion, the proposed schedule can determine budgetary constraints precisely. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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