博士論文會如何被審查 (PART D) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 8/21/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 博士論文會如何被審查 (PART D)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (571) Writing scientific articles (Part 12 of 18)
* 代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (2/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (84) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

博士論文會如何被審查 (PART D)

*確保論文的理論基礎和方法是明確的。

*確保該論文是原創作品。

*確保學生可以為他/她整個論文進行論證。

*確保整體的論文是基於一個結構良好的論點撰寫。

*看學生是如何批評他或她自己的說法。學生如何認識他們的研究和處理矛盾點?

*確定學生是否表明自己的能力和自主研發能力,及他/她對其論文的信心。

*確保學生是否已證明對於主題的創造力。

*確保論文是否體現了學生自我評估的能力。 (studentservices.uwa)

Source : ‘It’s a PhD, not a Nobel Prize’: how experienced examiners assess research theses (studentservices.uwa)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (571) Writing scientific articles (Part 12 of 18)
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
代名詞必須清楚的使用 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (2/12)

如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The department chairman told the research assistant that she needed to perform the simulations
in the event that the experiment fails.

6. Deterioration is set to a constant fraction of the stock level, which implies that shortages are not permitted and the demand rate is assumed to decrease exponentially.

7. When a machine is assigned to a manufacturing cell, it attempts to reduce the total cost.

8. The posterior objective concentrates on balancing intracell and intercell machine loadings, which
allows us to formulate the cell formation problem as follows.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Cấu trúc câu đều phải có sự nhất quán (10/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết
văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (188): Future of academic publishing
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (Ví dụ: ) (23) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)
http://owl.lhu.edu.vn/cau-truc-cau-deu-phai-co-su-nhat-quan-1012-chinh-sua-cho-ro-rang-dao-tao-chinh-sua-trong-viet-van-ban-tieng-anh/
非正式工程英文技術報告 (84) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our working group has become increasingly intrigued with the current trend in contractual disputes that often lead to time schedule delays. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 A strictly adhered to time schedule is of priority concern in civil engineering, with company owners and contractors often struggling to reach a consensus on deadlines and constraints, requiring that regulations, construction practices and schedule are clearly agreed upon in the contract. 介紹管理問題 While the time schedule outlined in a contract is defined according to calendar dates, working days and project phases, actual construction tasks are often complex and fail to comply with antiquated time schedules. For instance, although scheduled for completion in three years, the Taipei Mass Rapid Transit Project lasted more than four years. This discrepancy between forecasted and actual project completion time required more capital and resources than originally forecasted. The inability to resolve constant contractual disputes is owing to an unacceptable schedule completion time.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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