博士論文會如何被審查 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 8/18/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 博士論文會如何被審查 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (568) Writing scientific articles (Part 9 of 18)
* 主詞及動詞必須前後呼應 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (11/12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (82) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

博士論文會如何被審查 (PART A)

* 檢視論文時詢問下列問題:

– 要如何解決在摘要中和標題列出的研究問題?

– 讀者喜歡什麼樣的問題解答?

– 結論是由介紹部份引伸寫出來的嗎?博士生如何解釋他或她正在做的研究呢?

– 書目日期有更新嗎?數量足夠嗎?

– 結果值得嗎?

– 多少工作實際上已經完成?

– 論文知識層的深入和詳細度?

– 這是實際的研究嗎:是有一個邏輯論證?

Source : ‘It’s a PhD, not a Nobel Prize’: how experienced examiners assess research theses (studentservices.uwa)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (568) Writing scientific articles (Part 9 of 18)
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主詞及動詞必須前後呼應 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (11/12)

如果主詞的單複數與動詞不能配合,不僅讀者感到困惑,同時句子的邏輯也會發生問題。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The number of theoretical investigations on bubble/liquid displacement in a tube ( is , are ) increasing.

6. The physical phenomena associated with gas penetration within the polymer melt ( require , requires ) further clarification.

7. Neither of the conditions ( affects , affect ) gas penetration within the polymer melt much.

8. Members of the scientific community that ( studies , study ) genetic similarities between rats and humans ( is , are ) divided on the issue.

Answer
科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Cấu trúc câu đều phải có sự nhất quán (7/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết
văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (185): Advice on Academic Publishing
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Y khoa đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (28) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Radiotechnology)
http://owl.lhu.edu.vn/cau-truc-cau-deu-phai-co-su-nhat-quan-712-chinh-sua-cho-ro-rang-dao-tao-chinh-sua-trong-viet-van-ban-tieng-anh/
非正式工程英文技術報告 (82) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an effective remediation method for the CEC to resolve disputes in the construction industry efficiently. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 The contract contents were carefully studied to determine the rights and obligations of the contractor. Photographic evidence was then accumulated from the jobsite. Next, lawyers served as representatives of both parties to resolve disputes. Finally, disputes were resolved via a mediation conference or litigation. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed mediation method can enable the project owner to return the performance bond of the steel bridge project and receive compensation. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Moreover, the proposed method can orient CEC staff on how to enhance contract management skills. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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