博士研究生失敗10事 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 8/4/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 博士研究生失敗10事 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (554): MLA Formatting: List of Works Cited
* 明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (12 / 15)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (75) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

博士研究生失敗10事 (PART B)

* 把研讀博士當成像學校或工作一般。解決問題,撰寫研究論文以通過評議的要求皆需要時間。你不能把博士生涯當成朝9晚5的
工作,或期待在一個學期內完成課程。

* 忽略教師委員會。委員會有同意你論文完成與否的權力。但捍衛你的論文並不意味著與該委員會的成員爭論,或無視他們的意
見。

* 目的太低。看部門裡最弱的學生獲得博士學位而認為你不必這麼辛苦工作。

* 目的太高。不要指望研讀博士是你工作生涯的亮點。完成博士學位,只是你職業生涯的開始。

* 錯過真正的里程碑。博士研究生涯的真正的里程碑,是一個有統一主題相連的三個已出版論文。這意味著,你可以反复進行足夠
質量的研究,以滿足同儕審查的標準。

Source: 10 easy ways to fail a Ph.D. (matt.might)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (554) MLA Formatting: List of Works Cited
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (12 / 15)

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

6. The proposed procedure can be easily implemented in an industrial setting. This is despite the fact
that it lacks a rigorous theoretical justification.

7. The SN ratio allows optimization of the parameter design procedure and that this procedure is
decomposed into two smaller optimization steps.

8. The proposed method is accurate, effective and does not cost that much.

9. The derived solution not only provides a feasible strategy, but also measurements of the position
are accurate.

科技英文寫作者常常寫非所想,當然誤導了讀者,此時明白寫作就很重要,除了要把文章寫得精確以外,更要使讀者不誤解您的意思。

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Đảm bảo việc sử dụng các đại từ phải rõ ràng về ngữ nghĩa (9/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo
chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (171): Scholarly publishing series: Keeping it simple
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học thương mại đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (26) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Healthcare Management)gi
非正式工程英文技術報告 (75) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an efficient algorithm with an effective start-up control and low output current, capable of accurately locating the position of the motor and effectively driving it to achieve integration into ICs. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 An experimental platform consisting of a DSP, motor, driven circuit and control software was constructed for estimating motors. Software was then exploited to control the motor based on various conditions. Next, a table of commands was compiled, along with the positions built by observing how control signals and output results are related. Additionally, the accurate position of the motor that reduces the output current for driving motors was determined by referring to this table. Moreover, the optimal current to drive the motor was identified by adjusting the speed of control signals, thus increasing the efficiency of driven motors. Finally, a table and an optimal speed control signal were developed. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed algorithm with an effective start-up control and low output current can be easily implemented into IC design. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed algorithm can minimize hardware implementation and drive motors efficiently to ensure easy manipulation. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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