學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 7/23/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (541) APA References: Periodicals
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (11 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym:
*非正式工程英文技術報告 (69) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART B)

* 把自己當作一個學生,而不是同事。你說話不堅定,沒有自信和無力。你還是聽起來像一個學生:謙虛,和卑躬屈膝。*你無法指出你出版計劃。無法說明你的出版物,哪些是已發表,哪些是在投稿中,而那些仍然正在寫,及要投那個期刊。

* 你沒有第二個研究計劃。你的第二個研究計劃,應該從你的論文研究中產生,但內容是不一樣的。

* 你沒有做任何你申請工作部門的研究。你不知道教師名字。你還沒有讀過他們的作品,感謝他們的貢獻,你不知道你所申請的工作的重點和專業部門的方案。

* 你的學術求職信的結構不清晰。

Source:Why Your Academic Job Cover Letter Sucks (and what you can do to fix it) (theprofessorisin)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (541) APA References: Periodicals
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (11 / 12)
這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. During that period in time, the fabrics were of cheap quality and rough in texture.

6. The physical phenomenon that occurs in the physics field is often times of an uncertain
condition and extreme in degree.

7. The terrible tragedy was unusual in nature and of a strange type.

8. It is the terminal that communicates with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* Đảm bảo sự phù hợp cách dùng giữa chủ ngữ và động từ (8/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (138): How Journal Editors Decide
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (21) (phần 1)
* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (69) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent effort investigated to remain abreast of current trends in sensorless motors. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 DSP modulation algorithm profoundly impacts the operations of sensorless motors in terms of start-up, position, and speed control applications. 介紹管理問題 Given the narrow applications of sensorless motor drivers, determining the appropriate applications of such drivers is extremely difficult. For instance, complying with customized requirements involves adjusting various electrical characteristics, subsequently increasing not only the number of pins in sensorless motor driver ICs, but also the external chip size by 10% as well as overhead costs by 20%. The failure to incorporate accurate position and speed control in motor control ultimately leads to motor breakdowns.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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