學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 7/22/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (540) Video Resumes
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10 / 12)
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (68) (下)
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學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART A)

* 內容太長,超過兩頁。

* 不使用固定的信箋格式。

* 你告訴別人太多,但無法顯示你已經完成的作品。你沒有提供證據證明教學質量。

* 你說明太多你的論文內容但沒有強調實際貢獻。至於你的論文,你應該只描述在你的研究領域的主要辯論和你的論文如何和其交互辯論。內容不要超過一個段落。

* 你對你的教學經驗的描寫是過於多愁善感和模糊,例如:“我愛教學。”,你對於自己說什麼要提供證據。

Source: Why Your Academic Job Cover Letter Sucks (and what you can do to fix it) (theprofessorisin)

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除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Joint cooperation between the two organizations depends on whether the available resources are adequate enough.

2. A major breakthrough in modern technology of today is the emergence of artificial intelligence.

3. The major benefit of the proposal is that the true facts about the very unique industrial
situation can be obtained.

4. The final outcome between the two teams was an unexpected surprise.

Answer
科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym* Đảm bảo sự phù hợp cách dùng giữa chủ ngữ và động từ (7/12) (Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)
* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (137): Writing for Publication
* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (20) (phần 2)
* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)
非正式工程英文技術報告 (68) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed an intelligent thermostat testing system for ICs that can control temperature changes for extended periods and record data from an expanded USB and relay switch, while controlling 127 groups of test systems simultaneously. 管理方案方法論的細節描述Environmental temperature was controlled automatically. Data for parameter settings were then recorded precisely. Next, hardware circuitry and performance algorithms were integrated. Additionally, a Windows-based application program was designed to record and analyze results. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, capable of analyzing temperature-related characteristics of ICs, the proposed thermostat testing system can adequately control temperature variations within a range of 20 C – 120 C for 127 groups of test systems on a data log every 240 hours. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed thermostat testing system can monitor and effectively control factors that would enable a variation in temperature to enhance IC characteristics, lower the product error rate, and reduce the overhead costs of IC products. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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