學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART B) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 6/18/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (515) How to manage costs – project management
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 10 )
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (51) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術工作自薦信寫得不好的原因 (PART B)

* 把自己當作一個學生,而不是同事。你說話不堅定,沒有自信和無力。你還是聽起來像一個學
生:謙虛,和卑躬屈膝。*你無法指出你出版計劃。無法說明你的出版物,哪些是已發表,哪些
是在投稿中,而那些仍然正在寫,及要投那個期刊。

*你沒有第二個研究計劃。你的第二個研究計劃,應該從你的論文研究中產生,但內容是不一樣
的。

*你沒有做任何你申請工作部門的研究。你不知道教師名字。你還沒有讀過他們的作品,感謝他們
的貢獻,你不知道你所申請的工作的重點和專業部門的方案。

*你的學術求職信的結構不清晰。

Source: Why Your Academic Job Cover Letter Sucks (and what you can do to fix it) (theprofessorisin)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (515) How to manage costs – project management
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym

* Chỉnh sửa cho rõ rang (3/15) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng
anh)

* What colleges and graduate schools don’t want you to know

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (112)

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (16) (phần
1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Electrical Engineering)

動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (9 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. How to adjust the multiple settings of the process parameters was outside
of the knowledge of the engineers.

2. Standardization of the accreditation procedures was achieved by the
committee.

3. For optimization of the conditions for robust design problems, the
applicability of a novel approach is performed in this study.

4. An experiment of the PCVD process in the IC manufacturing field is required
of the engineer.

5. Significant contributions by the proposed procedure are made to the
manufacturing sector.

6. Transformation of the structure is achieved by strict control of the
variables.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (51) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事
項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a generic CA architecture to execute various CA procedures on the same platform. 管理方案方法論的細節描述Spreading codes were correlated with each other in a generic correlating element (CE) array. Correlated results were then directed to appropriate components for summation. Next, these added results were combined, followed by a comparison of correlation results to identify the maximum. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the generic architecture can execute various CA procedures on the same platform. The spreading code can have a length of 256 chips. Moreover, its operation clock rate can reach 100 MHz. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 While providing a useful platform for CA in various DS-CDMA systems, the generic CA architecture can be used to implement the CA procedure immediately for single-system and multi-system user equipment. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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