用積極的態度,寫作你的下一個研究論文 (PART A) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 6/4/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 用積極的態度,寫作你的下一個研究論文 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (501) Writing in the Sciences 8.1 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym
* 常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6/12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (45) (下)
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用積極的態度,寫作你的下一個研究論文 (PART A)

1。寫作是一個練習:練習中寫作速度變快。開始寫作之前,列出你的目標和預期成果。寫作不該只是計劃完成後的行政任務。寫
作有助於研究方向。

2。基於需求,設定目標:不只是說“我已工作了三個小時”或”鍵入了三頁文稿”。

3。不只專注於“發表論文”,集中討論如何您的研究論文中的結果或參數,將有助於您的領域和對未來的影響。

4。給自己時間壓力寫作並不是最好的方式,即使有些人覺得壓力下寫作更有動力,當你寫作時會產生想法。

5。寫作始終是一個不斷發展的過程,若你感到沮喪,愚蠢和累證明你實際在寫,你如果想成功,就要努力工作。你不只是談論寫
作。你正在這樣做。如果你不覺得有一些書面挫折,就表示你努力不夠。

Source: Ten Tips on How to Write Less Badly (chronicle)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (501) Writing in the Sciences 8.1 – Stanford University Online
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym

* Tránh sử dụng quá nhiều “It” và “There” ở đầu câu (6/11) (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo
chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (86): How to prevent social media overload

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (13) (phần 1)

* Nền tảng (Ví dụ: Information technology)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6/12)

就像先前所說,如何用最少的字來表達一個完整的意念通常是科技寫作者一個大挑戰,然而這裡有一個祕訣,那就是使用主動語法。請記住主動語氣使句子更直接,明確及更有說服力。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

11. Specification of suitable operations is required by a user so that the responses can be
simultaneously optimized.

12. An adjustment in the temperature can be made by the engineer.

13. Relevant statistics are examined in the following section so that the underlying factors can be
assessed.

14. A detailed description of the economic situation is made in Section 2.

15. Objective assessment of the workplace is required by the supervisor.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (45) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we devised an effective quality control index based on customer relations management to analyze how individuals select a hospital to receive medical treatment, thus providing a valuable reference for policymakers in the medical sector. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 A questionnaire was designed to understand the varying levels of medical treatment quality by incorporating the basic requirements of patients, including intangible ones such as respect. Use of PZB in the twenty two-item questionnaires could enhance its effectiveness, including factors such as tangibles, reliability, responsiveness, assurance, and empathy. The following criterion was then adopted to analyze the questionnaire results: physicians are qualified and reliable; medical staff had received sufficient training; physicians were willing to offer valuable clinical information; physicians expressed concern for their patients; medical staff displayed a professional attitude; and the hospital honored patient confidentiality. Next, a distinction between satisfactory and unsatisfactory medical treatment was made by using the AHP method. Additionally, the quality of medical services in individual hospitals was determined using the quality control index. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that, by incorporating AHP, the proposed quality control index can evaluate individual attitudes towards medical service quality, thus enhancing management quality and competitiveness of hospitals, as evidenced by increased revenues. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻While attempting to enhance medical quality island wide, the proposed index can assess the quality of medical service in hospitals more accurately than conventional management methods can. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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