研究生顧問和他們的學生的職責 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/25/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 研究生顧問和他們的學生的職責
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (491) Writing in the Sciences 6.3 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 24/5/2015:
* 精確寫作 (英文編修訓練) (2/6)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (43) (下)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

研究生顧問和他們的學生的職責

* 建議學生的學校生活:研究,發表文章,出席會議,並如何應對學業壓力

* 確保研究項目的經費和對研究生提供足夠的訊息

* 提供有關就業機會的誠實意見,提供研究生早期和明確的指導方針,及如何履行畢業要求
學生的學術界責任:

* 努力尋找就業機會

* 以需求/期望確定就業機會是否合理。

* 以時間和金錢二方面來看研究生涯是否值的投資。

* 學習如何配合行政法規,以履行研究生涯要求

Source: 5+5 Commandments of a Ph.D. (matt.might)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (491) Writing in the Sciences 6.3 – Stanford University Online
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 24/5/2015

* Tránh sử dụng quá nhiều “It” và “There” ở đầu câu (1/11) (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo
chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (79): How can academics use the app Mendeley?

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (12) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

精確寫作 (英文編修訓練) (2/6)

忙碌的專家們是沒有時間去逐字的閱讀冗長的報告文件,因此很多科技作者的文稿被拒絕或延遲發表,就是因為他們無法精短的表達文章意念。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

6. The Taguchi approach entails minimizing the average quadratic loss.

7. There have been a considerable amount of studies on robust design.

8. There is a significant difference in control levels for the parameter settings.

9. The committee made a decision on the question as to using an individual mouse or a trackball would
be more productive.

10. As a general rule, mice and trackballs serve the function of being both used for the same reason.

Answers

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (43) (下)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a novel hybrid TDM/WDM PON architecture that not only enables a gradual evolution from cost-effective TDM to a high-performing WDM PON, but also provides 1+1 protection against fiber cuts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 To achieve optimization among cost, upgradability, and system evolvability, DWDM and CWDM were adopted for downstream and upstream traffic, respectively. In the remote node, a cost-effective and reliable CWDM AWG was then used for wavelength routing. Next, two pairs of feeding fibers were deployed and connected to various sides of the AWG. Additionally, two DWA modules were utilized in a full-grown system to serve a large number of users, enable protection from laser failure, and optimize packet latency and jittering. 管理方案主要成果總結 According to our results, the proposed architecture can enhance the packet latency and jittering more than TDM PON can. For a comparison of equivalent resource and background traffic loading, a TDM PON can be assumed to have a single FL for 16 users; in addition, the DWA module has 2TLs multiplexed by 100/50(GHz) interleaver for 32 users. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻 Importantly, the proposed hybrid TDM/WDM PON architecture with protection from fiber cuts and laser failure can achieve cost-effectiveness. While comprising fast tunable lasers and interleavers, the OLT DWA module can outperform the conventional TDM PON one in terms of packet delay and jitter performance. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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