應避免的七種類型的學術會議簡報 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 5/23/2015

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* 應避免的七種類型的學術會議簡報
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (489) Writing in the Sciences 6.1 – Stanford University Online
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* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (42) (下)
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應避免的七種類型的學術會議簡報

* 主講人是如此熱愛他們的話題,他們對觀眾提供過多的細節,整體表現缺乏紀律,最後所有訊息資料整合失敗。

* 主講人只有鬆散的相互關係,有沒有結構性的順序點。

* 該演示展示了許多完整的數據透明膠片。雖然表示出組織性,但是沉悶和缺乏證據:沒有故事,案例研究,代言,隱喻或類比。

* 主講人告訴許多故事,奇聞軼事,笑話,令人震驚的統計數字,與隱喻。但資料不足提出證明。

* 主講人沒有預先排練,也沒有足夠的時間來介紹計劃涵蓋的所有關鍵點。所以主講人用以下方式快速講完,“我只是快速講
過”,“如果我有足夠的時間,我會讓你知道關於X”,“我希望我有更多的時間來告訴你關於這個事件。

* 主講人並沒有事先透露,直到最後才講出最重要的點 – 就像是一個謎小說。它通常意味著,主持人沒想到觀眾的需求,只是跟
著自己的思維,導致最後的結論。

* 主講人花費那麼多時間研究背景,方法論,但主講人,很少有時間提交數據,以支持他論點。觀眾認為簡報是不完整的,因為沒
有達到真正的結論。

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科技英文寫作系列之四–“科技英文編修訓練手冊” 強調精確寫作,即如何去除寫作格式錯誤,使作者的意思更為精簡。以下的練習題幫助您複習精確寫作的一般通則,以期可以和本書的明白寫作呵成一氣。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. There is a necessity for a compromise on the proposal by both parties.

10. There is no need for implementation of the environmental awareness program to be the sole
responsibility of the organizing committee.

11. The committee is in a position to make sure that the program is capable of being promulgated
successfully.

12. It is our opinion that the current system is deficient of an initial prototype.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (42) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we devised an optimal operating model, capable of selecting an effective monitor to adequately implement an internal marketing model in hospital marketing practices, subsequently providing admissions directors or hospital administrators with the most effective strategic policy to promote marketing efforts. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 Statistical variables of various populations among patients and hospital staff that provide healthcare services such as training, orientation and promotion were identified using multivariate statistical analysis, i.e. one way ANOVA test and the Karl Pearson test (NOTE: Add 2-3 sentences to describe the methodology more completely). 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed optimal operating model can provide staff with a more productive working environment by adopting statistical analysis to demonstrate the effectiveness of various services, including training, orientation and promotion, enabling hospitals to understand which areas require improvement to achieve quality healthcare services. Enhanced quality of healthcare services is an indirect means of promotion, by which satisfied patients and their relatives relay their positive experiences to others, ultimately improving the image of the institution. Moreover, the proposed operating model confirms the effectiveness of internal marketing, in which organizations train and motivate their employees to provide quality healthcare services. Such an approach must precede conventional marketing practices if a hospital is to maintain its competitiveness. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻Importantly, the proposed optimal operating model can provide expectations by and of the staff, motivating them to continuously improve in their profession. Additionally, the proposed method contains an optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data for engineers. While an internal marketing program within a hospital must focus on training and career advancement for hospital staff, the proposed model can encourage training and continuous on-the-job learning through daily interaction with peers and supervisors. Furthermore, the optimization procedure with simplified calculations in ordered categorical data can provide a valuable reference for engineers as well.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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