學術指導者應詢問具體的學生問題 (Part B) (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 4/30/2015

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術指導者應詢問具體的學生問題 (Part B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (466) Writing in the Sciences 2.2 – Stanford University Online
* Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 29/4/2015
* 再次檢查錯誤的比較詞及粗心的疏漏 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (4 / 12)
* 非正式工程英文技術報告 (37) (上)
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學術指導者應詢問具體的學生問題 (Part B)

* 學生有一個沉重的工作量,從而影響他們的私人生活
學術主導定期和研究生討論工作量嗎?
晚上和週末工作水平是否合適?
學生意識到自己的假期時間嗎?他們的假期是多少呢?

* 學生的研究進展緩慢,持續的情緒低落
研究小組是否有社會功能?

* 因為他們的工作量,學生感覺不斷疲憊和破落
工作與生活的平衡,可以接受嗎?
如果這個問題仍然存在,學生了解各種支持資源和應對技能?

* 學生作為一個學術研究者對自己的能力感到失望。
研究生被鼓勵談論他們在研討會或會議的工作?
學生獲得足夠的反饋,正面和負面的,讓他們充分發揮其潛力?

Source: The PhD Well-being Assessment – Information for Academic Supervisors (workspace.imperial)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (466) Writing in the Sciences 2.2 – Stanford University Online
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Viết tiếng Anh học thuật Bảng tin hàng ngàym 29/4/2015

* Sử dụng động từ thay vì danh từ (Chỉnh sửa một cách chính xác) (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn
bản tiếng anh) (9/10)

* Video giảng dạy viết bài báo tiếng Anh (54): I need to pay the bills! Do I get a temp job after my PhD?

* Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (8) (phần 2)

* Thực hiện (Ví dụ: Biotechnology)

Viet OWL – Chỉnh sửa báo Khoa học đăng trên tạp chí Quốc tế

再次檢查錯誤的比較詞及粗心的疏漏 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (4 / 12)

不合邏輯及不完整的比較詞造成更多的含糊不清,同時注意不小心漏掉的字。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. State universities are as competitive, if not more competitive than, private ones.

2. A GA-based procedure is proposed solving the MCG problem.

3. During an earthquake, high rise apartment buildings are as safe, if not safer than, conventional housing.

4. Smith et al. (1) more thoroughly investigated the physical phenomenon.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式工程英文技術報告 (37) (上)

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述工程機構對影響目標工程或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境:管理問題形成的工程環境背景描述。

* 介紹工程問題:工程問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹工程方案的目標:工程機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 工程方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 工程方案主要成果總結:工程方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 工程方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對工程機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

強有力的工程英文技術報告包括以下要素:

簡要的描述工程方案所關心的事項 Our recent project examined how to protect personal privacy of online users more securely. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工程環境 Online messenger services, e.g., MSN, are increasingly common. Besides computers, smart phones and PDAs, users can also send and receive messages on mobile devices. 介紹管理問題 However, most current designs do not support cryptography functions, making communication between messenger users susceptible to unauthorized users. Information leaked out occasionally extracts an extremely heavy cost. For instance, leaking out information on company policies could incur an enormous profit loss. The inability to consider the lack of cryptography functions in messenger design makes it impossible to protect personal privacy ultimately reduces company profits.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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