學術刊物應該如何處理作者和他們的研究贊助商之間的分歧?(PART B)(研究出版倫理) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 2/16/2015

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* 學術刊物應該如何處理作者和他們的研究贊助商之間的分歧?(研究出版倫理)(PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (393) Copyright and Open Access
* Vietnam: Tổ chức lớp viết báo khoa học Kỹ thuật đăng trên tạp chí quốc tế (14)
* 除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6 / 12)
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (18) (下)
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學術刊物應該如何處理作者和他們的研究贊助商之間的分歧?(研究出版倫理)(PART B) (柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 公司回應,他們並不滿足於作者的反應;他們重複他們要求獨立審計。

* 作者回答說他們沒有足夠的資源來進行獨立審計,但會進行廣泛的內部審計。

* 評估公司的權利宣明和作者的答覆後,該期刊的編輯認為,對該公司提出的問題,作者提交了滿意的答覆。

* 本公司聯繫作者機構的倫理委員會,並報告了他們的關注。

* 作者機構的倫理委員會發現,雖然已經發生的錯誤,作者沒有犯科研不端行為。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 11-15)

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*Mô tả khóa học: Khóa học này tập trung chủ yếu vào việc dạy các chuyên gia công nghệ làm thế nào để kết hợp quá trình viết và nghiên cứu để bài báo đưcọ viết một cách hiệu quả và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

*Lợi ích của khóa học: Sau khi trải qua khóa học, học viên có thể
(a) Tổ chức và viết bài báo khoa hoc hoặc báo cáo kỹ thuật một cách tiết kiệm thời gian.
(b) Xác định được sở thích của người đọc để bài báo trở nên thân thiện với người đọc hơn.

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除去重複及不必要的措詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (6 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。
請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. It goes without saying that it is not necessary for a trackball to have total hand and arm
movement in order to move the cursor around the screen.

10. The mouse has a sort of ball inside that basically moves along the workspace and controls
electronic connections inside the particular device itself.

11. It is the board of directors who make a decision in the event that the future plan will be
accepted.

12. There are laser printers that have a slight edge over other types of printers in terms of
printing speed and cost.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (18) (下)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

介紹管理方案的目標 Therefore, we developed a patient selection model using AHP and TOPSIS, which analyzes incoming hospital patients with respect to public image of the hospital, the current market demand for specific services, efforts to gain the confidence of patients in the quality of medical services. According to the decision making rule, patients normally assess the unique features of a hospital when they visit a physician. More than previously, patients will assess the quality of a hospital before selecting which one to receive medical treatment. Identifying the factors why patients select a certain hospital for treatment is thus of priority concern. 管理方案方法論的細節描述 AHP and TOPSIS were adopted to analyze incoming hospital patients with respect to public image of the hospital, the current market demand for specific services, efforts to gain the confidence of patients in the quality of medical services in patient’s mind and factors why patients select a certain hospital for treatment. A frame questionnaire was then designed by incorporating the basic requirements of patients, including intangible ones such as respect. To our knowledge, patients hospitalized for over three days in a medical center in Taipei were analyzed for the first time in this study with respect to the above factors. Use of PZB in the twenty-two item questionnaire enhanced its effectiveness, including factors such as tangibles, reliability, responsiveness, assurance and empathy. Next, the following criterion was adopted to analyze the questionnaire results: physicians were qualified and reliable; medical staff had received sufficient training; physicians were willing to offer valuable clinical information; physicians expressed concern for their patients; medical staff displayed a professional attitude; and the hospital honored patient confidentiality. Additionally, SPSS software package was used to analyze those results. Moreover, four assumptions were be raised. 管理方案主要成果總結 Our results indicated that the proposed patient selection model can be established using AHP and TOPSIS, which conventional statistical models are incapable of doing. While influencing which hospital that a patient selects, quality of hospital services does not necessarily improve customer satisfaction. 管理方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻Importantly, the proposed model provides an effective strategy for hospitals attempting to generate revenues independently of the national health insurance scheme. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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