學術期刊如何應對提交文章假審稿? (PART A)(研究出版倫理)研究生英文編修出版投稿日報 1/26/2015

Archs Alhambra Grenade

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 學術期刊如何應對提交文章假審稿? (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (372) Correcting proofs
* 強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (8 / 12 )
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (13) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

學術期刊如何應對提交文章假審稿? (PART A)(研究出版倫理) (柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 經過一輪同行評審,修改並重新審查,所投稿件由全部三位審稿人建議,該手稿在沒有進一步修改下被接受。

* 所有三位評審人由作者提出。評審人是假的,並沒有存在。

* 它被確定之後,審閱建議是假的,以前由同一作者提出的出版物與’假’審稿被確定。

* 該期刊聯繫所有作者,並要求提供建議評審的更多細節;然而作者沒有作出回應。

* 該期刊的編輯試圖查在作者的機構找聯繫人,但如何確認一個研究倫理委員會的任何個人成員有困難。

* 如果沒有找不到作者的機構聯繫人,作者也沒有可靠的任何回應,學術期刊打算拒絕審查的手稿,並出具發表文章的取回。

Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 12-16)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (372) Correcting proofs
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿力
強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (8 / 12 )

如前單元所示,使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰,然而,有些動詞讓人感覺並不強勁,無法有力闡示一個動作。動詞如 is, are, was, were, has, give, make, come, 還有 take 等都屬此類。所以, 作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. The procedure is to turn on the required machines at the specified time intervals.

6. Previous literature (4) provided a formal definition of the MCG problem.

7. The different groups have to reach an agreement on how to make an adjustment of the
figures.

8. A formal definition of what computer networking is included in this section.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (13) (上)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our working group has become increasingly intrigued with how to enhance the quality of senior citizen residential communities in Taiwan. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境 According to the World Health Organization, Taiwan became an advanced aging society as of the end of 1993, with over 7% of its population 65 years or older. According to estimates from the Council for Economic Planning and Development, the island’s elderly population will account for 14.42% and 20.04% of the population by 2121 and 2131, respectively. Restated, one out of every five individuals will be classified as belonging to the advanced age elderly population. Traditional societal values in which the elderly parents live with their son and daughter-in-law have diminished, creating a growing public awareness that the elderly must make preparations in advance for their long term care. The aging trend in Taiwan explains the growing concern over the market demand for long term care residential communities, in which middle to senior aged individuals live independently in houses or apartment units designed for their special needs upon retirement. Many industries have already heavily invested in this emerging growth sector. Given physical and mental health factors, senior citizens must adjust as traditional societal values change. To facilitate a more ideal living environment for the elderly, governmental organizations and the private sector must coordinate efforts to create an environment in which senior citizens living independently is the norm instead of the exception. In doing so, numerous commercial opportunities will arise. For instance, RUENTEX Construction Company in collaboration with Rien Fu Newlife Company has established a senior citizen residential community in Tan-shui by drawing from the Japanese long term care model to provide residents with a hotel style management approach. The facilities provide high-quality comfort with a 300 residential unit capacity, all of which have already been leased out. Given population trends and enhanced living standards, the climate for growth opportunities in the long term care sector in Taiwan is favorable. Identifying factors for successful operation of senior citizen residential communities are thus essential for businesses to gain a competitive edge, explaining why governmental authorities and industrial planners are anxious to to evaluate the most appropriate management strategies for further development. 介紹管理問題 However, while evaluating the success of certain management practices in satisfying consumer demand in this growing market sector, long term care studies have seldom attempted to identify success factors in managing senior citizen residential communities. Relevant considerations in the management of a senior citizen residential community include environment analysis of the location, analysis of relevant management strategies, , pricing and promotional strategies and strategic alliances. Correspondingly, all success factors should be prioritized based on their importance. For instance, the lack of an objective assessment method makes it impossible for administrators of senior citizen residential communities to determine which management approaches will be successful or not. The lack of an effective model to identify success factors in managing senior citizen residential communities makes it impossible to determine tangible and intangible benefits in long term care research. Moreover, senior citizen residential communities of varying scale sizes will have difficulty in adopting effective management strategies to remain competitive.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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