如何糾正在學術期刊上發表的論文 (PART A)(研究出版倫理)學術英文編修出版新聞 1/18/2015

Gymnocalicium mihanowichii, Ciudad Ho Chi Minh, Vietnam, 2013-08-14, DD 02

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 如何糾正在學術期刊上發表的論文 (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (364) Evaluating Scholarly Impact in Light of Emerging Models of Scholarly
Communication
* Vietnam 6.4: Mô tả nền tảng học vấn và thành tích có liên quan đến việc làm (Thư xin việc)
* 動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10 / 10 )
* 非正式商用英文技術報告 (11) (上)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

如何糾正在學術期刊上發表的論文 (PART A)(研究出版倫理)(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)
* 已經發表的研究論文的作者被告知他圖之一必須更換以符合國家安全的利益。
* 編輯和他的評閱人討論,更換圖將不會影響文件的結果或結論。
* 問題:學術期刊能否直接為了避免這個圖而替換發布的版本還是重新發布全文?
* 還是應該期刊撤回論文?是否有可能重新發布論文而用新的圖呢?
* 建議:一旦論文發表,不應該沒有通知明確而修改,因為這樣會破壞出版記錄的完整性。
Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE) (Case No. 12-23)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (364) Evaluating Scholarly Impact in Light of Emerging Models of Scholarly Communication
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿力
Vietnam 6.4: Mô tả nền tảng học vấn và thành tích có liên quan đến việc làm (Thư xin việc)
動詞代替名詞 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。
請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

7. A conclusion is made in this study that it is necessary for the parameters to be varied by the
engineer to ensure that the operations are effectively controlled by the system.

8. An assessment of the proposed method in this section is made so that accurate data can be ensured.

9. Complexity of the computational process is increased by their approach.

10. Described in the following section is how implementation of the control factor is achieved by the
proposed scheme.

11. No significant effect on the mean response is made by the factor.

12. Assessment of the product’s reliability is made by the practitioner is achieved through means of
compilation of the statistics.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

非正式商用英文技術報告 (11) (上)

強有力的商用英文技術報告包括以下要素:

* 簡要的描述商用方案所關心的事項 。經由一個句子描述商用機構對影響目標工業或客戶有關事項的關心程度。

* 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的商用環境:管理問題形成的商用環境背景描述。

* 介紹商用問題:商用問題的本質和對與其相關的特定部門或客戶的負面影響。

* 介紹商用方案的目標:商用機構對以上問題最合理的回應

* 商用方案方法論的細節描述:精確的方案步驟描述。

* 商用方案主要成果總結:商用方案對特定部門或客戶立即的利益。

* 商用方案對特定部門或領域的全面貢獻:研究結果和所提方法對商用機構以外更廣大讀者的牽涉。

研讀以下工程計劃以辦別包含的科技論點:

簡要的描述管理方案所關心的事項 Our project team expressed concern over how to upgrade the quality of medical waste disposal firms island wide. 闡明特定部門或客戶所關心的工業環境 Taiwanese hospitals must effectively cope with not only severe budgetary constraints in the national health insurance scheme, but also stringent mandates on medical waste treatment from the Environmental Protection Administration. While hospitals dispose of large amounts of medical waste to ensure sanitation and personal hygiene, doing so inefficiently creates potential environmental hazards and increases operational expenses. The environmental protection sector is just beginning to address harmful waste that the waste treatment sector is emitting, largely owing to the lack of effective management experience in closely monitoring daily operations. 介紹管理問題However, the scope of services that medical waste disposal firms provides does not always match the needs of individual hospitals. According to the Environmental Protection Administration, although 456 medical waste disposal firms were operating by the end of 2000, their small-scale size limited its scope of services in handling certain wastes. Therefore, the ability to efficiently handle medical waste depends on the ability of hospitals to adopt sound waste management practices and coordinate their efforts with waste disposal firms. However, Taiwanese hospitals lack an objective criterion to select the most appropriate waste disposal firm and evaluate its performance, instead relying on their own subjective judgment and previous experiences. According to Department of Health statistics, with approximately 17,500 hospital clinics operating domestically with a bed capacity of roughly 120,000 beds, nearly 300 metric tons of medical waste are produced daily; among which, 15% is infectious, with its amount increasing as well. Given the growth trend of increasing medical waste, the inability of hospitals to adopt an objective means of evaluating a waste disposal firm and its performance may lead to an inappropriate selection and higher operational costs, necessitating the development of an effective means of evaluating the performance of waste disposal firms objectively, thus reducing overhead costs and enhancing medical waste management. Owing to that either hospital staff or contracted waste firms must handle the medical waste, such a mechanism would set an allocated budget for medical waste disposal and closely monitor expenditures. Previously, while most hospitals had facilities to process medical waste, expenses incurred were must higher than contracting a firm to perform the task. Therefore, as most hospitals contract waste disposal firms to handle their waste, administrators need a reliable method to select the most appropriate contracted firm in order to closely monitor and reduce expenditures associated with this process.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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