在我的研究論文或技術報告撰寫清晰句子的一些通用規則? / 寫一篇研究論文和技術報告附錄部分一般準則有那些? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 12/3/2014

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* 在我的研究論文或技術報告撰寫清晰句子的一些通用規則?
* 寫一篇研究論文和技術報告附錄部分一般準則有那些?
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (318) Academic Research & IT Policies: Research Software
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* 再次檢查錯誤的比較詞及粗心的疏漏 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (9/ 12)
* 醫療英文論文組織寫作 (47) : (第一部分:背景) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

在我的研究論文或技術報告撰寫清晰句子的一些通用規則?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART B)

* 謹慎使用試探性的語言。

– 要明確:避免浪費時間。準確地說明時間和數量的描述。

– 避免頻繁使用試探性的語言:英語中有些是用來削弱聲明:避免這樣的語句。

* 分離長句(30〜40個字)。較長的句子和較短的句(5〜10個字)相互出現。

– 每頁中寫一個或兩個很短句子(5〜7個字)。這使得文字更有趣。

* 使用簡單的句子(避免句子與一個以上的從句)。

* 代名詞必須清楚的使用:如果代名詞所指的人物或事物不能交待清楚,也是徒增讀者困惑。 .

Technical Writing Skills by Kim van der Linden (p. 67)

寫一篇研究論文和技術報告附錄部分一般準則有那些?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART B)
* 本文應該可以不用附錄被理解:不要強迫讀者來回切換報告和附錄之間。
– 確保在附錄之外,研究論文或技術報告的本文自形成一個整體。
* 各附錄至少被參閱一次:讀者必須能夠知道附錄和研究論文或技術報告那些部分有關。重述,在該研究論文或技術報告的本文所述至少參考了一個附錄。
* 在新頁面上開始一個附錄。
Technical Writing Skills by Kim van der Linden (p. 65)
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再次檢查錯誤的比較詞及粗心的疏漏 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (9/ 12)

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Venugopal and Narendran (1992b) considered limitations machine capacities, production amounts and processing times of parts.

10. SN ratios are analyzed determine the optimal settings of the design parameters.

11. A doctorate degree is usually more time consuming

不合邏輯及不完整的比較詞造成更多的含糊不清,同時注意不小心漏掉的字。
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Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (47) : (第一部分:背景) 研究生英文編修出版投稿日報

研究建構 Although advances in medical technology and therapeutic treatment have greatly increased the survival rate of patients diagnosed with nasal and pharyngeal cancer, patients receiving irradiation treatment experience adverse side effects, including skin reaction, bone necrosis and hearing loss. Such irreversible reactions lower their quality of living, accounting for the search for alternative methods to decrease patient discomfort accompanied with radiation therapy.

研究問題 Given the increasing number of patients receiving radiation therapy, which is less discomforting than chemotherapy or surgery, adverse side effects of treating patient’s diagnosed with nasal and pharyngeal cancer must be resolved. As is generally assumed, skin reaction caused by treatment is irreversible because the radial destroys the dermal cell and the hearing cell, explaining for the search of an effective means of averting side effects irradiation treatments or patients of nasal and pharyngeal cancer.

研究問題的量化 For instance, the side effect of the skin reaction is generally assumed to be irreversible because the radial destroys the dermal cell and the hearing cell, necessitating the development of a method that can avoid the side effects incurred by irradiation for the patient of N.P.C.

研究問題的中心 The inability to eliminate the adverse side effects of irradiation treatment makes it impossible to improve the therapeutic outcome. Patient discomfort may cause them to stop therapy or not adhere to the therapeutic schedule, explaining the urgency to remedy this problem. Moreover, the ability to provide better care for the patient would not only decrease the adverse side effects brought on by irradiation treatment, but also increase the curative rate.

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

研究建構 : 你研究的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭研究的內容嗎?

研究問題 : 你的研究裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

研究問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制?

研究問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對研究的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?
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有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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