我如何設置研究論文或技術報告終稿中信息呈現的優先次序? / 修改我的研究論文或技術報告初稿一般準則? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 11/22/2014

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 我如何設置研究論文或技術報告終稿中信息呈現的優先次序?
* 修改我的研究論文或技術報告初稿一般準則?(PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (307) How to Evaluate Blogs for Academic Research
* 去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10 / 12)
* 醫療英文論文組織寫作 (44) : (第二部分:行動)
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我如何設置研究論文或技術報告終稿中信息呈現的優先次序?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 由於有些讀者僅略讀研究論文或技術報告,你必須強調在總結,結論和建議中的清晰度和說服力。

* 為更專業讀者的進一步說明可以放在後面,如果他們要求提供補充資料。

* 為專注科學或技術細節的讀者,你必須仔細描述詳細的使用方法,包括引用和參考文獻列表。

* 一個有效的策略是在你的研究論文的每一章呈現信息時應如同你處理Power Point的方式,。注重在制定完整優良的句子。

* 不要浪費了大量的時間使用你不熟悉的先進文字處理程式或圖形程式;除非你有足夠的時間對他們進行實驗。

* 使用已安裝好的文字處理軟體。他們不僅方便製作結構佈局,同時也使研究論文或技術報告一目了然。

* 使用簡便易學,省時省力的電腦鍵盤上的功能鍵來移動游標,或使用自動更正功能。

Technical Writing Skills by Kim van der Linden (p. 25 )

修改我的研究論文或技術報告初稿一般準則?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART B)

* 所有的信息被清晰地呈現?報告變得更加方便閱讀和有趣如果信息可視化。

– 盡可能使用數字和表格傳達研究成果,也可以使用列表陳述本文內容。

* 內容是否包括所有部分?當寫入內容時,其他部分如概要和參考列表可以一起進行。

* 第二稿是否由其他人再次檢查內容, 文法和句法?即使你認為文字對你的讀者來說是絕對清楚,但經由校對可以發現缺陷。

Technical Writing Skills by Kim van der Linden (p. 23)

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去除修飾語所造成的問題 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10 / 12)

修飾語必須放在所要修飾的字之旁。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Being made of concrete, the construction worker had difficulty in breaking the pavement.

2. Unable to pay their monthly bills, the finance company provided solutions for debt-ridden
consumers.

3. After examining available options, feasible payment schedules were arranged by the financial
consultant.

4. Registering for the fall semester, many elective courses were selected by the student.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (44) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should design a spherical or right cylindrical tissue equivalent proportional counter to measure all particles composed of thermal neutrons, fast neutrons, high energy charge particles and photons for a high energy linear accelerator. Additionally, the energy deposited in volumes resembling critical tissue components such as cells or cell nuclei can be determined using such a microdosimeter.

達成目標的方法 To do so, given that microdosimetry involves studying single-event deposition at microscopic sites of a tissue, the detector geometry can be selected to design a tissue equivalent proportional counter. The spherical cavity generally tends to be cylinder based owing to that the sphere is not only volume with isotropic response, but also has the lowest relative variance of chord lengths. The wall of such a counter can then be made of a tissue equivalent to A-150 plastic, which is a mixture of calcium fluoride, polyethylene, nylon and carbon. Next, the gas filling can be selected to influence the gas gain and counting characteristics. In general, the tissue equivalent gases based on methane and propane are both available commercially.

希望的結果 As anticipated, analysis results can indicate the feasibility of fabricating anequivalent proportional counter for the spherical tissue that conforms to the chord length distribution and mean chord length standard described by Professor Kellerer when measuring the mixed radiation field for a high energy linear accelerator, especially in neutron dose. If desired, the linear energy deposited in small tissue can be determined using such a microdosimeter.

領域的貢獻 A neutron dose equivalent meter based on a tissue equivalent proportional counter is highly promising for a variety of radiation fields of a high energy linear accelerator. Such a counter can be used as a reference meter in various neutron fields for routine microdosimeters. Moreover, using this counter with another simple dosimeter may reduce systematic measurement errors of dose equivalent in a mixed radiation field.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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