我怎麼能保證我有一個成功的論文答辯? / 為未來研究選擇研究問題的一些通用技巧為何? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 11/10/2014

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 我怎麼能保證我有一個成功的論文答辯? (PART C)
* 為未來研究選擇研究問題的一些通用技巧為何? (PART B)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (295) How To Write Research Statements for Academic Positions – Part 2
* 句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)
* 醫療英文論文組織寫作 (41) : (第二部分:行動)
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我怎麼能保證我有一個成功的論文答辯?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART C)

* 你計劃檢查將需要的物理環境及材料包括講台,投影儀?

* 論文答辯時你使用直觀工具,如圖表,表格,照片,圖表,模型,電影和其他輔助?

* 論文答辯時有沒有在房間裡放置時鐘以計時?

* 你有計劃的提出在你的研究範圍內你論文的原創性貢獻?

* 你談吐簡潔?

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 305)

為未來研究選擇研究問題的一些通用技巧為何?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART B)

* 選擇一個研究課題,需要考慮課題重要性,研究人員的資格及培訓,所涉及的費用,以及分配給該研究項目的時間。

– 是否有精良的研究裝備以在研究背景下進行研究?

– 研究是否在預算範圍內使研究人員能夠負擔得起?

– 研究人員是否有必要和其他參與者合作?

* 在選擇一個研究問題之前可能需要進行初步性研究。例如,當探究的領域是比較新的,沒有一套良好的研究方法可遵行, 此時必須進行一個簡短的可行性研究。

Research Methodology by C. R. Kothari (p. 25)

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句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (10/12)

科技英文寫作中,句子的建構必須有一致性。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Incomplete data is commonly referred to as censored data and often occurs when the response variable is time to failure, e.g., accelerated life testing.

2. Their method suggested either using iterative least squares (ILS) to analyze censored data or the initial fit is used to estimate the expected failure time for each censored observation.

3. The TOPSIS value for each trial and the optimal factor/level combination can be determined in the following steps:

Apply equations (4) ~ (8) to compute the relative closeness of each trial.

The TOPSIS value in the ith trial is set to the designated value.

The factor effects based on the TOPSIS value are estimated.

Determine the optimal control factors and their levels.

4. The systems manager is in no case responsible for combining the experimental design techniques with quality loss considerations and careful consideration of how the various factors affect performance variation.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (41) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should examine the feasibility of adopting total skin electron beam irradiation (TESI) to treat patients with pruritus skin cancer by attempting to improve the dose distribution and decrease the SSD to less than 300 cm through variation of the dosage level, as achieved by electron energy, the scattering material, proximity of patient to the electron beam and variation in treatment angle.

達成目標的方法 To do so, uniform dose distribution and reduced photon dose for patients can be achieved under the following conditions: a range of 4 MeV – 12 MeV of electron energy, a distance of 3 – 5 meters between the patient receiving treatment and the electron beam, and a range of 15 – 20 degrees in treatment angle. The scattering material can comprise acrylic, wire netting and plastic material. Finally, the dose distribution can be measured under various conditions.

希望的結果 As anticipated, analytical results can demonstrate the effectiveness of adopting TESI to treat patients with pruritus skin cancer.

領域的貢獻 The results of this study can provide a valuable reference when treating patients with pruritus skin cancer.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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