準備我的論文委員會應檢查的事項清單? / 在我的論文答辯應該準備什麼問題? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 11/6/2014

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:

* 準備我的論文委員會應檢查的事項清單? (PART A)
* 在我的論文答辯應該準備什麼問題? (PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (291) Using Google, Wikipedia, Google Scholar, and an academic database for research
* 句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (6/12)
* 醫療英文論文組織寫作 (40) : (第二部分:行動)

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準備我的論文委員會應檢查的事項清單?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART A)

* 委員會有沒有包含至少有一位教師是你研究設計使用的定性或定量方法的專家?

* 你提供委員論文草稿及時間表,使他們有足夠的時間來閱讀並回應?

* 你與你的顧問是否討論一個時間表, 並由單一個章節得到反饋後整理以至整個論文初稿提出?

* 您曾經訪問過所有委員會成員,並試圖了解他們的意見?

* 你定義你的研究範圍,完成數據收集和分析?

* 你可以用清晰一句話陳述論文核心概念?

* 你定義你的主題,及說明其原創性在某領域的貢獻?

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 296)

在我的論文答辯應該準備什麼問題? (柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART A)

* 什麼是你學習的目的,是一個可核查的問題,是在明確的範圍?

* 你有什麼研究的假設,在你的領域是否能夠接受?

* 請問你的論文的問題涉及到在你領域的文學有那些?

* 是什麼讓你的論文有文學貢獻?

* 你有什麼因變量?

* 你有什麼假設?

* 為什麼選擇你現在測試假設的定性或定量程序而不是另外一組程序?

* 在隨機樣本上你有什麼發現?

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 304)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (291) Using Google, Wikipedia, Google Scholar, and an academic database for research
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句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (6/12)

科技英文寫作中,句子的建構必須有一致性。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. The proposed optimization procedure is made up of the following steps:

Step 1: Transform the relative importance of each response into a fuzzy number.

Step 2: Crisp scores must be assigned to the selected conversion scale.

Step 3: The quality loss is computed.

Step 4: Determine the TOPSIS value for each trial.

Step 5: The optimal factor/level combination must be determined.

Step 6: The confirmation experiment is conducted.

10. Wee [11] made a further extension of the conventional model to allow for shortages and assuming that the demand rate would decrease exponentially.

11. The relative closeness computed in TOPSIS can be used to assess the performance measurement and optimizing multi-response problems in the Taguchi method.

12. The experiment focused on determination of how process parameters affect the silicon nitride deposition process and to satisfy the industrial requirements.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (40) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should examine the feasibility of accelerating the scanning time during a CT examination, thus reducing radiation dose levels. Whereas the human body is not proportional with respect to thickness, the absorbed radiation dosage is all the same.

達成目標的方法 To do so, the ability to ensure that the human body absorbs a lower radiation dose with respect to thickness, CT can be verified as an effective physical examination procedure for prevention purposes (NOTE: Add 2-3 more sentences to more describe the methodology more completely).

希望的結果 As anticipated, analysis results can indicate that the accelerated CT scan speed can scan front and rear positions of the body at varying thicknesses and radiation dosages, subsequently reducing a substantial amount of nonessential dosage and making CT highly promising as a preventive medicine procedure. Such a procedure would significantly contribute to treatment of lung cancer patients since MRI does not have a spoke beam. Given that the lower number of hydrogen atoms in the lungs does not provide adequate information for the image signal of MRI However, CT can produce an accurate image of the lungs, making it relatively easy to detect lung cancer in its early stages.

領域的貢獻 Results of this study can demonstrate the ability of CT to reduce the radiation dose level, makes it highly promising as a preventive measure during physical examinations to detect lung cancer in its early stages.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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