我研究導師如何幫助我的論文寫作過程規劃? / 寫作研究論文結論部分檢查事項清單 (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 11/2/2014

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:

* 我研究導師如何幫助我的論文寫作過程規劃?
* 寫作研究論文結論部分檢查事項清單
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (287) Writing your Dissertation: a Guide for Postgraduate Students
* 句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (2/12)
* 醫療英文論文組織寫作 (39) : (第二部分:行動)

Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

我研究導師如何幫助我的論文寫作過程規劃? (柯泰德英文編修翻譯)

* 你的研究導師是你的良師益友,幫助你定義你的論文題目,並幫助您規劃研究策略和時間表。

* 你的研究導師也建議你學位論文答辯委員會的其他成員。

* 在整個論文計劃的過程中,你的研究導師將幫助您獲得的所有學位論文答辯委員會成員的支持,還同時提供了對你論文有價值的反饋。

* 你的研究生導師會讀你的論文的每一章和評價論文的章節在把它們分發給學位委員會的其他人之前。

* 你的研究導師通常會幫助您發表會議論文和出版您的研究成果,以及對你未來的職業安排進行協商。

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 291 )

寫作研究論文結論部分檢查事項清單 (柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART D)

* 如果您有引用語以做為支持你論點的補充證據,你確定引用語中沒有出現和結論的不一致性和公正性?

* 您使用多種方法的數據測量來證明你結果的普遍性?

* 您已經客觀地評價你研究的局限性?

* 你的結論與你摘要一致?

* 你的主要結論反映在您研究論文標題的關鍵字?
Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 274 )

學術英文投稿教學影片 (287) Writing your Dissertation: a Guide for Postgraduate Students
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句子的結構須有一致性 (明白寫作) 英文編修訓練 (2/12)

科技英文寫作中,句子的建構必須有一致性。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. Experimental design is used in this method to arrange the design parameters and noise factors in the orthogonal arrays and computing the signal-to-noise (SN) ratio based on the quality loss for each experimental combination.

6. The relative importance of each response can be transformed into a fuzzy number through means of the establishment of a formal scale system that can be used to convert linguistic terms into their corresponding fuzzy numbers and to express the relative importance of each response by the linguistic term.

7. The Taguchi approach provides a combination of experimental design techniques with quality loss considerations and that the average quadratic loss is minimized.

8. The conventional approach happens to be cumbersome, complicated and wastes too much time.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (39) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a high lipophilicity radiopharmaceutical method that uses two groups of radiochemistry, i.e. aminedithiolate ligand (ONS) and monothiolate coligand (S), to increase the radiopharmaceutical high lipophilicity level in order to maintain a radiopharmaceutical stability and hyperactivities.

達成目標的方法 To do so, aminedithiolate and monothiolate can be used in one part of combined 99mTc’s 1 ligand 99mTc’s 3 ligands. In the new radiopharmaceutical, its radiochemical characteristics can then be analyzed using a high performance liquid chromatographic (HPLC), with its amount subsequently analyzed using a thin layer chromatography (TLC). Next, the characteristics of high lipophilicity can be analyzed using a Partition coefficient Using this radiopharmaceutical sample, its radioactivity can be analyzed as well using an automatic gamma counter. Radiation tracer characteristics can be analyzed using multiple-channel pulse wave equipment. Additionally, the new radiopharmaceutical serum can be injected into laboratory mice, with the radiopharmaceutical uptake number of each mouse organ analyzed as well. Following sacrifice of those mice with significant organs extracted,the organs can be weighed and their radioactivity levels determined as well. Finally, the biodistribution in laboratory mice can be analyzed.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed high lipophilicity radiopharmaceutical method can ensure stability in a mouse’s brain with an uptake number exceeding 15% and other organ’s uptake numbers lower than 30%. New radiopharmaceuticals can maintain stability six hours after fabrication. Blood clearing ratio can then be lower than traditional radiopharmaceuticals used in brain imagery.

領域的貢獻 Results of this study can contribute to efforts to increase the clinical accuracy of diagnosing brain diseases as early as possible for curative purposes, thus enhancing a physician’s ability to achieve ideal patient management, improve a patient’s quality of life, decrease both the mortality rate associated with brain-related diseases and the relapse rate and, ultimately, lower the radiation dose of patients with brain-related diseases.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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