我該如何進行對另一專業人士的同儕審查? / 我應該如何呈現自己當進行同儕審查的時候? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 9/29/2014

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研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
* 我該如何進行對另一專業人士的同儕審查?(PART A)
* 我應該如何呈現自己當進行同儕審查的時候?(PART A)
* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (253) How to Prioritize Your Time
* 明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (7 / 12)
* 科學英文論文組織寫作 (31) : (第二部分:行動)
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我該如何進行對另一專業人士的同儕審查?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART A)

* 只評論表現,對事不對人。

– 對個人的批評不僅損害當事人和損害互相的關係,且對事沒有幫助。

* 要具體。專注於特定的行為。模糊不會讓批評溫和。

* 避免一般化,避免用字像“總是”;這樣只會讓對方有防備性。

* 不要做假設,要陳述事實,也讓其他人講述他們自己的故事。

– 避免添加自己的解釋或猜測別人的動機。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 38 )

我應該如何呈現自己當進行同儕審查的時候?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART A)

* 要守時。讓其他人等候你表示你不重視這個過程或者你想證明你是多麼的重要。

* 準備。提前收集你的事實,想想你會說些什麼。

* 留意。給受評者充分重視。

* 按重要性排列問題。首先要解決大問題, 以確保他們有足夠的時間。

* 專注於解決方案。回顧過去從中吸取教訓以提高未來表現。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 40 )

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明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (7 / 12)

科技英文寫作者常常寫非所想,當然誤導了讀者,此時明白寫作就很重要,除了要把文章寫得精確以外,更要使讀者不誤解您的意思。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5. After the board meeting was finished, they left the room.

6. It is preferred in standard methods to select a tentative model based on censored data.

7. This study focuses on examination of Taguchi’s two step procedure and demonstrating how the
wafer quality is improved in the deposition process.

8. The two step procedure attempts to identify those factors that significantly affect the signal-
to-noise (SN) ratio and finding the adjustment factors that markedly influence the mean.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (31) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop an accurate and non-intrusive diagnosis method to examine human diseases efficiently.

達成目標的方法 To do so, saliva can be sampled using a non-intrusive diagnosis method. An accurate and feasible diagnosis produced can then be adopted that is compatible with the customized ELISA kit. Next, the steroid examination value can be derived to diagnose the disease accurately and efficiently.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the customized and non-intrusive ELISA kit can diagnose diseases rapidly and accurately, subsequently reducing the likelihood of a hemolytic sample by roughly 30%.

領域的貢獻 Importantly, the steroid examination value derived by the proposed diagnosis method can provide a valuable reference for clinically diagnosing human diseases.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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