我如何為提交國際研討會摘要的同行審查做準備? / 我的投稿可能被期刊拒絕的原因? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 9/26/2014

Guo Xi Early Spring

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
*我如何為提交國際研討會摘要的同行審查做準備? (PART B)
*我的投稿可能被期刊拒絕的原因?(PART B)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (250) Survey Portion of SQ3R
*明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (4 / 12)
*醫療英文論文組織寫作 (30) : (第一部分:背景)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

我如何為提交國際研討會摘要的同行審查做準備?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART B)

* 不要忽視你摘要的詞或空間限制。摘要一般應不包含表或 引用。

* 如果你確信你的數據可在會議前及時準備好,此時可在摘要中明確講解你的研究方法。

* 如果你需要合著者’或上司的同意或許可,應在您提交之前給他們充足的時間來審查摘要。

* 使審稿人的工作變得盡可能容易。有意義地解釋所有的縮寫。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 34)

我的投稿可能被期刊拒絕的原因?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART B)

* 沒有閱讀期刊給作者的說明。

* 論文沒有頁碼編號。

* 任意在本文插入圖形和表格。

* 選擇一個不清楚的文獻參考型式,且絕對不是你所選擇的期刊所要求的型式。

* 沒有檢查你的引用,且有些不完整。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 33)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (250) Survey Portion of SQ3R
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (4 / 12)

科技英文寫作者常常寫非所想,當然誤導了讀者,此時明白寫作就很重要,除了要把文章寫得精確以外,更要使讀者不誤解您的意思。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

13. The proposed procedure corrects dimensional distortion and errors better.

14. Our company prefers that organization more than their institute.

15. The new company is as competitive, if not more competitive than, existing ones.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (30) : (第一部分:背景)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第一部分:背景)

研究建構 : 你研究的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭研究的內容嗎?

研究問題 : 你的研究裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

研究問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制?

研究問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對研究的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

(第一部分:背景) :

研究建構 Most cancer patient treatments use radiation in a high energy linear accelerator. An energy level exceeding 10MV in the linear accelerator output will not only incur neutron contamination, but also cause redundant abrosption dosages for patients. Still, an energy level exceeding 10MV must be used in radiation therapy to monitor the neutron yield. Handling an excessive amount of neutron contaminants requires not only selecting the most appropriate treatment method or dose rate in real-time, but also decreasing redundant absorption dosages for patients.

研究問題 Although capable of determining the amount of neutrons during treatment, the TLD detection method, i.e. a commonly adopted approach in which a high concentration is used is expensive and ineficient in clinical practice. For instance, TLD can only be used once per patient, with a new patient requiring a replacement of all TLD in the treatment room. Additionally, TLD can not obtain the dose rate in real-time.

研究問題的量化 For instance, detecting the neutron quantity of ten patients daily would require using hundreds of TLD. Additionally, technical personnel spend an additional fine minutes in changing the TLD for new patients, with additional personnel required as well as in reading the TLD results.

研究問題的中心 The inability to resolve the expensive and ineficient nature of TLD will not only increase material and personnel expenses, but also eventually lead to both unnecessary delays in patients receiving treatment in real-time and fewer patients receiving this treatment owing to its complexity.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德
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