我的投稿可能被期刊拒絕的原因? / 我如何為提交國際研討會摘要的同行審查做準備? (研究生英文編修出版投稿日報) 9/25/2014

Detail of The Emperor's Approach, Xuande period

研究生英文編修出版投稿日報:
*我的投稿可能被期刊拒絕的原因?(PART A)
*我如何為提交國際研討會摘要的同行審查做準備?(PART A)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (249) Recite What You Have Learned – SQ3R
*明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (3 / 12)
*科學英文論文組織寫作 (30) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文編修出版新聞

我的投稿可能被期刊拒絕的原因?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART A)

*你的研究論文採用笨重和羅嗦的寫作風格,並試圖使一切意思曖昧。

*隨意引用您以前所有的出版物,特別是如果他們和你目前的工作沒有相關。

*忽略期刊對摘要和本文的其餘部分結構的慣例。

*把一些結果放在方法部分和很多的討論在結果部分。

*隨機選擇一個期刊,或者只是因為期刊標題聽起來令人印象深刻。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 33)

我如何為提交國際研討會摘要的同行審查做準備?(柯泰德英文編修翻譯) (PART A)

*和期刊不同,大多數國際研討會主辦設置了嚴格的論文摘要截止日期和提供有關摘要長度和格式的詳細說明。

*同行評審通常涉及一個簡單的接受或拒絕的決定,你不會有機會修改你的摘要。

*研討會摘要通常是“相機準備”式提交; 也就是說,它們會以當初呈現的樣式被發表。

*如果研討會主辦需要一個特定結構摘要,你應該精確遵循。

*如果研討會主辦不指定結構,考慮使用標題是否有益。使用標題使摘要更容易閱讀。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 34)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (249) Recite What You Have Learned – SQ3R
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
明白寫作 (英文編修訓練) (3 / 12)

科技英文寫作者常常寫非所想,當然誤導了讀者,此時明白寫作就很重要,除了要把文章寫得精確以外,更要使讀者不誤解您的意思。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. The notions can be simply modified by implementing the following procedure:

Select the levels that maximize SN.

Estimate the slope of the linear regression model.

The control factors and the adjustment factors must be identified.

Identify the control factors that significantly affect the variables.

The target must be adjusted as much as possible.

10. To simulate the program, precautions must be taken by the engineer.

11. As a graduate student, my academic advisor gave me much valuable advice.

12. Before examining all of the available options, the decision was made to initiate the plan.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (30) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a syphilis diagnostic kit, capable of detecting in only one step the anti-treponema specific antibodies in a patient’s serum or plasma binding to the antigen.

達成目標的方法 To do so, the serum samples of syphilis patients can be analyzed. An experiment involving the syphilis diagnostic kit can then be performed with the Treponema pallidum antigen, TpN 15, TpN17 and TpN 47. Next, the gene recombinant method can be adopted to produce traponemal antigens. Additionally, the fusion protein can be used to achiee protein expression in the E.coli expression system. Moreover, a syphilis recombinant system can be established usingrecombinant technology.

希望的結果 As anticipated, analysis results can indicate that a fusion protein can be formed using TpN 15, TpN 17 and TpN 47. That protein can then be used by gene recombinant technology to achieve procreation on a large scale. Hopefully, product procreation on a large scale can elevate the sensitivity of detecting syphilis disease to within an accuracy of 100%.

領域的貢獻 With a high degree of accuracy and specificity, the proposed syphilis diagnostic kit can be applied for use in genetic engineering, protein construction and reagent key technology. Moreover, the diagnostic kit is highly promising for commercialization if the reagent can be developed successfully, thus reducing the diagnostic time while increasing its accuracy significantly.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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