在我論文第一次初稿中要強調的重點為何? / 投稿同行評審的期刊時我應該遵循什麼樣的步驟? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 9/19/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
* 在我論文第一次初稿中要強調的重點為何? (PART B)
* 投稿同行評審的期刊時我應該遵循什麼樣的步驟? (PART B)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (243) The Missing Key: Review – SQ3R
*除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (9 / 12)
* 醫療英文論文組織寫作 (28) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

在我論文第一次初稿中要強調的重點為何?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)

* 版面佈局:你有雙倍行距 – 甚至是圖表和參考?

– 你有沒有明確指出圖表中的內文?

– 你有沒有包含圖表的說明標題?

* 致謝:你是否感謝提供資金的來源?

* 利益衝突:你有沒有申報所有的利益衝突?

– 你有沒有在手稿及說明信聲明利益衝突,讓評審可以看到?

* 倫理:你提到你已得到研究倫理委員會或審查委員會批准?

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 25)

投稿同行評審的期刊時我應該遵循什麼樣的步驟?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)

* 步驟三:閱讀期刊的投稿須知和其他有用信息。

– 一個精心準備的文稿使編輯和審稿人有好心情。

* 步驟五:收集你需要投稿同行評審期刊的項目。

– 檢查你需要準備的物品,以避免在最後一分鐘要完成全部事項的壓力。

* 步驟六:記住審稿和編輯查看您手稿時應做事項。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson (p. 23)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (243) The Missing Key: Review – SQ3R
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (9 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. Computer networking is found to be a group connected together in order to share information.

10. The public phone system is a good example of a network in light of the fact that it makes use
of its own protocols to establish a link between two or more people that make an inquiry about
the manner in which voiced information is exchanged.

11. A majority of laser printers offer a sharper and darker text print compared to other types.

12. There is a general consensus of opinion that the adopted measures are adequate enough.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (28) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Given the difficulty in quantifying 3D space measurements, we should attempt to determine the distribution of radiation dosage from portable x-ray machines in general waiting areas for sick patients via simulation, results of which can provide a valuable reference for concerns over radiation protection in a clinical diagnosis setting.

達成目標的方法 To do so, clinical diagnosis or treatment can be simulated, in which radiation is distributed in a 3D space. Exactly how radiation dose is distributed in medical personnel and patients can then be understood. Next, simulation of RANDO phantoms can be observed with respect to the influence of x-ray scattering during clinical diagnosis. Additionally, a TLD chip can be suspended at varying heights in the level layer of three planes. Moreover, TLD data can be obtained after analyzing the radiation distribution.

領域的貢獻 As anticipated, analysis results can identify the optimal radiation dose distribution in a 3D space, thus clarifying not only how radiation dose is distributed in medical personnel and patients and what radiation protection equipment is available, but also how radiation in a lead laden protective screen can be stopped.

希望的結果 Results of this study can demonstrate that lead laden protective screen can prevent 96 % of all radiation leakage from harming medical personnel and patients.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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