評估研究提案的標準為何? / 審查學術期刊稿件時經常遇到的問題? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 9/16/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*評估研究提案的標準為何? (PART A)
*審查學術期刊稿件時經常遇到的問題?(PART B)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (240) Understanding SQ3R Presentation
*除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (6 / 12)
*科學英文論文組織寫作 (28) : (第一部分:背景)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

評估研究提案的標準為何?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART A)

* 研究有必要嗎?

– 尋找研究的明確理由,包括對現有文獻的徹底審查。

– 對文獻中相似的研究做你自己的附加搜索。

* 研究方法是否恰當?

– 主要的困難是在區別提案品質及已提出研究的品質 。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

審查學術期刊稿件時經常遇到的問題?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)

* 我的評論會得到任何意見反饋?

– 閱讀這些評論,看看是否你有錯過手稿的重要問題。

– 此外,與其他評審比較您評論的全面性。

* 我將被要求再次看稿?

– 大多數期刊會問審稿人是否想再次審看已修訂過的手稿。

– 如果你已經提出了實質的關注和批評,你應該再看一遍修訂手稿。

– 該期刊應該為您提供作者的說明信,其中概括了作者針對您的意見所做的更改。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

學術英文投稿教學影片 (240) Understanding SQ3R Presentation
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (6 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. It goes without saying that it is not necessary for a trackball to have total hand and arm
movement in order to move the cursor around the screen.

10. The mouse has a sort of ball inside that basically moves along the workspace and controls
electronic connections inside the particular device itself.

11. It is the board of directors who make a decision in the event that the future plan will be
accepted.

12. There are laser printers that have a slight edge over other types of printers in terms of
printing speed and cost.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (28) : (第一部分:背景)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第一部分:背景)

研究建構 : 你研究的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭研究的內容嗎?

研究問題 : 你的研究裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

研究問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制?

研究問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對研究的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

(第一部分:背景) :

研究建構 As is well known, ionizing irradiation causes material damage. The range/number of radiation effects in solids depends on both the crystal structure and the type of ionizing irradiation. Additionally, the energy and dosage of irradiation essentially affect radiation processes. Ionizing irradiation excites both electronic and ionic subsystems of crystals. Relaxation processes occur after excitation, forming defects. Defects impair the solids, extensively stimulating material damage.

研究問題 However, the radiation-stimulated ordering effect (RSOE) is found in various materials. At least two competitive processes are observed in crystals and semiconductors under ionizing irradiation – 1) generation of radiation defects and 2) radiation-stimulated annihilation of defects.

研究問題的量化 For instance, on a specific stage, the annihilation of irradiation defects can dominate the generation of defects, enhancing the structure. This stage is referred to as RSOE. Therefore, low-dose irradiation could serve as an effective method for increasing the reliability of semiconductors and the stability of parameters in the final stage of manufacturing. This fact substantially increases economical efficiency.

研究問題的中心 Nevertheless, the RSOE mechanisms in II-VI semiconductors remain unknown, making it impossible to implement process applications capable of increasing the efficiency of barrier structures. Although the application of RSOE could markedly increase product output in microelectronics, the generalization and analysis of RSOE remain an obstacle to further development.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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