在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題? / 作為學術期刊同行評審, 我如何寫一個審查意見報告? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 9/13/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題?(PART D)
*作為學術期刊同行評審, 我如何寫一個審查意見報告?(PART B)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (237) How To Track Your Time To Increase Your Productivity
*除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (3 / 12)
*科學英文論文組織寫作 (27) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART D)

* 由數據支持的結論是什麼? 結論中對結果的過份說明是很常見的,可能需要在標題,摘要及正文中來校正。

* 手稿良好地被呈現?

– 寫作簡明且有清晰的邏輯?

– 手稿結構是否正確?

– 是否有文字,表格和數字之間的謹慎平衡?

- 摘要及正文之間的謹慎平衡?

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

作為學術期刊同行評審, 我如何寫一個審查意見報告?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)

*不要在紙張的邊緣提交手寫編輯意見。這樣期刊難以傳遞給作者。

* 不要發表您專業知識以外的意見。不要覺得你必須審查並報告一份研究的各個方面。

– 明確告知編輯您的專業知識範圍,讓他們知道什麼時候該諮詢其他評審。

* 說明誰在您的評論過程中曾給予幫助。

– 如果有同事們的幫助,感謝他們在報告中的幫助。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

學術英文投稿教學影片 (237) How To Track Your Time To Increase Your Productivity
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (3 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

9. It is noted that 10Mbps network cards are basically becoming obsolete for the reason of their
slow data transfer rates.

10. It is interesting to note that monitoring features in most cases inform the user provided that
a performance bottleneck occurs.

11. It is the operator who makes a determination of the questions as to the phase should be
implemented.

12. There is a guideline that makes a provision of the necessary requirements.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (27) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動):

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a rapid molecular identification method using the high specific gene of tdh gene in bacteria chromosome to detect a major target.
達成目標的方法 To do so, tdh gene can be detected by polymerase chain reaction (PCR). Exactly how V. paraemolyticus and antibiotics are related can then be determined using a drug sensitivity test. Next, using this same test, whether bacteria are drug resistant or drug sensitive can be determined as well. Additionally, the Vibrio paraemolyticus epidemic phenomenon in the surrounding environment can be more thoroughly understood using pulsed field gel electrophoresis.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed molecular identiication method can detect the presence of Vibrio paraemolyticus in the environment in only a few hours. Additionally, the pulsed field gel electrophoresis results can provide further insight into the molecular epidemic phenomenon in the surrounding environment.

領域的貢獻 Importantly, the proposed method can provide rapid and accurate molecular biology results to detect Vibrio paraemolyticus in the environment.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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