作為學術期刊同行評審, 我如何寫一個審查意見報告? / 在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 9/12/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*作為學術期刊同行評審, 我如何寫一個審查意見報告?(PART A)
*在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題?(PART C)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (236) Learn How Minimalism Can Help Increase Your Focus
*除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (2 / 12)
*科學英文論文組織寫作 (27) : (第一部分:背景)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

作為學術期刊同行評審, 我如何寫一個審查意見報告?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART A)

*仔細檢查評審期刊的說明。

– 一些期刊有勾選框來記錄手稿的各個方面,但通常還提供文字意見的空間。

* 開始研究論文的簡要概述以說明你理解研究手稿的總體原則。

* 在一個列表中列舉您的意見,使作者更容易向您的意見作出回應。

– 表示該意見涉及稿件哪個部分。

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART C)

* 提交的手稿是否有效?

– 被研究對象的取樣是否正確?

– 研究控制適當和足夠?

– 是否有足夠高的回應率?

– 方法充分描述?

-分析是否正確?

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

學術英文投稿教學影片 (236) Learn How Minimalism Can Help Increase Your Focus
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (2 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

5 It has been found that any error that might happen will be more destructive in light of the
fact that XYZ applications is in a position to make direct calls to the hardware.

6 It has long been known that the logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted
considering the fact that an eavesdropper actually wants to gain the ID and password.

7 It is our opinion that Windows 95 is for all intents and purposes a good operating system in a
situation in which the user has many requirements.

8 It is possible that the error affects the necessary requirements when attempting to ascertain
the location of the variables.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (27) : (第一部分:背景)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第一部分:背景)

研究建構 : 你研究的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭研究的內容嗎?

研究問題 : 你的研究裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

研究問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制?

研究問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對研究的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

(第一部分:背景) :

研究建構 As an island, Taiwan has abundant seafood available for consumption. Of particular concern is Vibrio paraemolyticus, an epidemic pathogen commonly found in seafood. This pathogen can cause sitotoxism, a disease with an incidence rate in Taiwan that is the highest worldwide. Often a result of insufficiently cooked seafood, sitotoxism is especially prevalent from May to August, when a large amount of seafood is consumed islandwide.

研究問題 As the conventional means of identifying Vibrio paraemolyticus, serotyping is expensive, tedious, and time consuming. Various molecular subtyping methods are also applied to identified an appropriate means of differentiating Vibrio paraemolyticus isolates from other serotypes. However, whether molecular subtyping methods provide a more rapid and sensitive alternative for differentiating among Vibrio paraemolyticus strains is unknown.

研究問題的量化 For instance, serotyping requires seven days before supplying reliable results and, in doing so, is relatively inefficient, thus necessitating the need for a viable alternative.

研究問題的中心 The inability to develop a more reliable and efficient means of identifying Vibrio paraemolyticus will lead to an increasingly higher incidence rate of sitotoxism in Taiwan.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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