在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題? / 對每一個研究論文,我要問的三個基本問題為何? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 9/11/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題? (PART B)
*對每一個研究論文,我要問的三個基本問題為何?(PART B)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (235) Mind Mapping Interactive Course
*除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (1 / 12)
*醫療英文論文組織寫作 (26) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

在審查提交學術期刊的手稿時我應該問什麼樣的具體問題?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)

*是否提交原創手稿?

– “原創”,包括新的數據,觀點,方法或報告,或現有數據的再分析。

– 如果研究的問題已經被解決,這手稿是否補充足夠新資料來證明?

*提交的手稿是否有效?

– 研究設計是否回答主要研究問題?

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

對每一個研究論文,我要問的三個基本問題為何?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)

*我是否相信研究論文陳說的內容?

– 論文是否通過合理的數據以得出結論,並且是有效的方法?

*我是否重視以下?

-研究問題是否重要和有趣?

– 研究結果有明確的理論和實際意義?

How to Survive Peer Review by Elizabeth Wager, Fiona Godlee and Tom Jefferson

學術英文投稿教學影片 (235) Mind Mapping Interactive Course
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
除去重複及不必要的措詞 (英文編修訓練) (精確寫作) (1 / 12)

這些擾人的重複不必要的文詞其實可以完全去除或是更簡明的表達。作者若不注意這個細節則會使句子變得愈來愈長。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. It is well known that a majority of Taguchi method applications have the capacity for
addressing a single-response problem.

2. It may be said that computers have the ability to incorporate kinds of equipment in order that
the user is in a position to interact with the computer.

3. It is a fact that the network cards have the opportunity to be upgraded to meet the connection
speeds in the event that the campus upgrades 100Mbps hubs and routers.

4. It is evident that the college is able to make an informed decision through means of
understanding the capabilities and cost difference for both 10Mbps and 100Mbps.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (26) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should design a multi-channel microelectrode incorporated with a customized multi-channel recording amplifier to record multi-channel evoked potentials and quantitatively evaluate clinical pain.

達成目標的方法 To do so, glass microelectrodes can be used to record cerebral evoked potentials caused by electrical or mechanical stimuli. The responsive centers can then be identified via current-source-density (CSD) analyses. Next, a concentration can be made of sixteen channels in one system, which consists of amplifiers and filers capable of preventing too many falling heads.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the multi-channel microelectrode incorporated with a customized multi-channel recording amplifier can markedly reduce the time required to perform electrophysiological experiments and reproduce experiments.

領域的貢獻 While adequate monitoring and recording systems can build up public confidence in the reliability of laboratory results, further clinical trials of this systems can increase diagnosis efficiency and detect diseases in their early stages for immediate treatment.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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