如何回答期刊評審對我稿件提交的特殊情況意見? / 我如何為學術期刊寫一個有效的同儕審查報告? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 8/16/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*如何回答期刊評審對我稿件提交的特殊情況意見?(PART A)
*我如何為學術期刊寫一個有效的同儕審查報告?(PART H)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (209) Introduction to SQ3R Technique to Reading
*動詞代替名詞 (英文編修訓練) (8 / 10 )
*科學英文論文組織寫作 (20) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

如何回答期刊評審對我稿件提交的特殊情況意見?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART A)

*期刊評審有衝突的觀點

– 在這種情況下,你可以選擇其中你最同意觀點回覆。且在您的回覆中引用了另外兩個評審的不同意見,使其對你有利。

– 您也可以通過詢問期刊編輯最後決定。

*該期刊的評審是錯誤的。

– 評審有時沒有妥當閱讀您的文稿,甚至當你對他們關注事項已做出回應。
在你的回應中要有禮貌。而不是說:“如果評審已經不屑閱讀我們的文稿,…”,你應該禮貌地說:“我們同意這是一個重要的點,我們已經在第A面,B段,C行做出陳述”。

– 如果你有信心認為你是正確的而評審是錯誤的,此時可以把在文獻中找到的事實加以說明。然後該期刊的編輯可以做出最後的決定。

How to reply to peer review comments when submitting papers for publication by HC Williams

我如何為學術期刊寫一個有效的同儕審查報告?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART H)

*保持機密手稿的內容。

– 保持同樣的道德標準

– 無論是有意還是無意,避免使用手稿信息以為自己的研究。

*徵求反饋信息

-通過與其他審稿比較您的意見,以評估你的同行評審。

How to peer review a manuscript by Moher D and Jadad AR. (p. 186)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (209) Introduction to SQ3R Technique to Reading
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
動詞代替名詞 (英文編修訓練) (8 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

6. The fact that the attributes must be numerical and comparable is stipulated by TOPSIS.

7. The relative closeness computed in TOPSIS can be used as a performance assessment of multi-
response problems in the Taguchi method.

8. Measurement of each response must be carefully made by the standard.

9. Systematic optimization of the problem is the focus of this section.

10. Determination from the experience of an engineer shows how much pressure is affected by
time.

11. Further analysis of the facility is necessary for the practitioner to make an adjustment of
the parameter settings.

12. Minimization of A and B levels can be achieved by setting factors A and B at A2.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (20) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should design a sensitive and accurate biosensor that can identify special proteins efficiently, as well as detect certain diseases in their early stages. For instance, identifying the protein ADDLs early can be used to diagnose Alzheimer’s disease in its early stages so that therapeutic treatment can be administered.

達成目標的方法 To do so, nanoparticles can be developed in a glass chamber, followed by design of a LSPR biosensor. The bio molecular structure can then be detected using LSPR, enabling us to identify the disease.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed analytical method for detecting bio molecular structures can detect solution consistency below 1pM with a high degree of accuracy.

領域的貢獻 Moreover, the proposed LSPR biosensor can provide a highly sensitive and accurate means of detecting the bio molecular structure. The ability to identify the disease in its early stages can lead to earlier treatment and recovery. For instance, Alzheimer’s disease can be diagnosed early because LSPR can detect ADDLs with a high degree of sensitivity, ultimately increasing the survival rate of patients.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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