我如何為學術期刊寫一個有效的同儕審查報告? / 學術期刊如何回應我的手稿在我第一次投稿之後? (研究生英文出版投稿日報) 8/10/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*我如何為學術期刊寫一個有效的同儕審查報告?(PART B)
*學術期刊如何回應我的手稿在我第一次投稿之後? (PART A)
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (203) Google and Google Scholar
*動詞代替名詞 (英文編修訓練) (2 / 10 )
*醫療英文論文組織寫作 (18) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

我如何為學術期刊寫一個有效的同儕審查報告?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART B)
*在細節之前,總結簡短的寶貴意見以便您可以:
– 幫助編輯記得已審閱的基本概念
– 展示給期刊編輯和作者你明白工作內容
*請務必提供建設性的批評
– 請記住,大多數的作者花費大量時間起草一個稿子,然後修改它許多次才提交出版。
How to peer review a manuscript by Moher D and Jadad AR. (p. 186)

學術期刊如何回應我的手稿在我第一次投稿之後?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART A)
*學術期刊接受您的稿件但手稿內容必須做小的修改。
– 期刊快速回應這些修訂且沒有太多的爭論。
– 若作者回應迅速而該期刊的編輯仍然是熟悉你的稿子內容時可能導致稿件更快速地被接受。
*學術期刊需要您的稿件做重大修改。
– 修改並重新提交到同一期刊上,如果意見是公平的,即使修改並重新提交需要大量的時間。
How to reply to peer review comments when submitting papers for publication by HC Williams
學術英文投稿教學影片 (203) Google and Google Scholar</strong>
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
動詞代替名詞 (英文編修訓練) (2 / 10 )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

6. A recommendation of using iterative least squares (ILS) as a simple method for analysis of censored data was made by Schmee and Hahn (1990).

7. Normalization of operations is achieved by a simple calculation of the scores.

8. Improvement of the condition is achieved by variation of the control factors

9. A recommendation is made here that the program be simulated by the engineer.

10. The operator made a reservation of the ticket for me.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (18) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a photon MRS in vivo method, capable of assessing the bone marrow of leukemia to supersede conventional examinations.

達成目標的方法 To do so, bone marrow can be detected using either single-voxel spectroscopy or 2D chemical shift imaging. The lesion portion of the voxel can then be detected on the bone marrow, followed by modulation of the pulse sequence. Next, the MRS signal for the bone marrow can be analyzed, capable of differentiating between the MRS of normal children and children with leukemia.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed photon MRS in vivo method can be used to determine why physiological variation of the bone marrow of Leukemia occurs, which can supersede conventional examinations.

領域的貢獻 Capable of determining the bone marrow (including red bone marrow and yellow bone marrow) of leukemia, the proposed method can also be used to interpret the magnetic resonance spectroscopy for the bone marrow of leukemia. Moreover, while most MRS investigations have focused on brain signals, MRS has seldom been studied with respect to signals of bone marrow, making it a valuable reference for future investigations.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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