作為學術期刊同行評議的評審提交意見應注意事項? / 作為學術期刊同行評議的評審提交意見後應注意事項?(研究生英文出版投稿日報) 8/6/2014

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研究生英文出版投稿日報:
*作為學術期刊同行評議的評審提交意見應注意事項?(PART A)
*作為學術期刊同行評議的評審提交意見後應注意事項?
*學術英文投稿教學影片 (199) Using Wikipedia for Academic Research
*常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10/12)
*醫療英文論文組織寫作 (17) : (第二部分:行動)
Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

作為學術期刊同行評議的評審提交意見應注意事項?(柯泰德翻譯) (PART A)

*審稿人應該記住,該期刊的編輯在期待著他們的學科知識,良好的判斷力對手稿的長處和短處的誠實和公正的評價。

*在其審查的開始應明確規定如果審稿人被要求解決只有特定的手稿的部分或方面。

*審稿人應遵循期刊“上所要求他們的具體的反饋說明。

*審稿人應該是客觀和建設性的評論,並提供反饋,以幫助作者提高自己手稿水準。

*審稿人不應該貶低個人的意見或提出毫無根據的指控。

Guidelines for Peer Reviewers by Irene Hames

作為學術期刊同行評議的評審提交意見後應注意事項?(柯泰德翻譯)

*審稿人應繼續保持原稿細節和審查保密。

*如果和期刊稿件的審閱事宜相關事項應及時回應並提供所需的信息。

*如果審稿人已經提交了審查意見後, 審稿人應聯繫該期刊可能會影響其原有的反饋和建議的事項。

*審稿人應閱讀其他審閱者的評論,如果這些都是由該期刊提供的,以提高自己對主題的理解。

*審稿人應配合期刊的要求審查已修訂或重新提交的手稿。

Guidelines for Peer Reviewers by Irene Hames

學術英文投稿教學影片 (199) Using Wikipedia for Academic Research
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力
常用主動語氣 (精確英文寫作) (英文編修訓練) (10/12)

就像先前所說,如何用最少的字來表達一個完整的意念通常是科技寫作者一個大挑戰,然而這裡有一個祕訣,那就是使用主動語法。請記住主動語氣使句子更直接,明確及更有說服力。

請把練習題列印出來再以紅筆用標準編修註記修改:

1. Integration of quality loss for responses is made with the proposed method through the application of Taguchi’s SN ratios.

2. The variability is reduced when the scale of the quality loss is normalized.

3. Determination of the optimal factor/level combination is made in the following procedure.

4. There is no significant effect on MRSN by any factor.

5. Guidelines in which the optimal adjustment factors in a multi-response problem are determined are presented in the above section.

Answer

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (17) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a therapeutic method that combines MRCP with conventional MR images to diagnose cholangiocarcinoma, pancreatic adenocarcinoma and liver tumor accurately. Doing so can clearly display various pancreaticobiliary obstruction lesions, including stones, cholangitis, pancreatitis and choledochal cysts.

達成目標的方法 To do so, upgraded computer software and improvements in scanning techniques can facilitate the production of high quality cholangiograms, even providing super visualization of normal pancreaticobiliary anatomy. Additionally, adopting the patient respiratory-trigger procedure can obviously decreases the motion artifact caused by a patient’s respiratory system, as facilitated by proper training of technical personnel to execute the standard examination procedure.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed therapeutic method can eliminate the motion artifact through the most appropriate pulse sequence chosen, better signal receive coil, and the respiratory-trigger procedure. Thoroughly training the instrumentation operator can significantly reduce both procedural time and patient discomfort. Moreover, the image work station and advanced computer hardware can reconstruct the raw data, subsequently decreasing the false diagnosis rate and increasing diagnosis accuracy to 99%.

領域的貢獻 While incorporating MRCP for direct visualization of the biliary and pancreatic ducts without the need for an invasive procedure, ionizing radiation or iodine contrast media administration, the proposed therapeutic method can produce MRCP with sufficient contrast and spatial resolution by incorporating the volume sequence of respiratory trigger turbo spine echocardiogram with MIP algorithm, even when a 0.5T MR unit is used. Given its increasing accessibility, lowering cost and enhanced spatial resolution, MRCP will become the preferred choice for imaging the pancreaticobiliary system.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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