使用路線圖概念進行研究論文寫作檢查清單 / 我怎樣才能讓我的研究論文更側重於期刊讀者的需求?: 研究生英文出版投稿日報 7/13/2014

研究生英文出版投稿日報:

*使用路線圖概念進行研究論文寫作檢查清單 (PART A)

*我怎樣才能讓我的研究論文更側重於期刊讀者的需求? (PART B)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (175) How to Publish in a Top Journal (2/11)

*避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (8 / 10)

*醫療英文論文組織寫作 (11) : (第二部分:行動)

Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

使用路線圖概念進行研究論文寫作檢查清單 (PART A) (柯泰德翻譯)

*你有沒有組織您的論文框架?

*你有沒有在你的領域進行徹底的文獻回顧?

*你有沒有寫出你的文章總結和主要過渡段每個部分粗略的草案?

*在你的研究論文草稿的邏輯中您已經評價內部總結和過渡段?

*你有沒有試過閱讀短文朗讀,聽其措辭的節奏?

*請問您的研究論文標題準確地反映你論文路線圖概念?

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 40)

我怎樣才能讓我的研究論文更側重於期刊讀者的需求? (PART B) (柯泰德翻譯)

*嚙合寫作:研究論文應激發讀者的興趣,突出可能涉及哪些問題,避免過於詳細的描述。

– 使用主動而非被動語態(如適用) 。

– 避免過度使用要點列表,有足夠的分段標題,保持各段文字密集精簡。

– 始終校對和修改研究論文。

– 大聲閱讀修訂後的研究論文,檢視研究目標是否已實現。

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 39)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (175) How to Publish in a Top Journal (2/11)
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (8 / 10)

使用It 及 There 開頭的句子容易使文章語多累贅及曖昧不清。除非It 指的是先前句子所提特定的名詞,否則完全的避免 It is 的句型。數個由It is 開頭的句型應去除掉,因為他們對句意並沒幫助。如果不能完全省略去除掉這種句型,則應更為精簡的描述全句。

範例一
Original
It is widely known that the Hsinchu City Government is heavily promoting the use of public transportation to alleviate the growing heavy traffic. However, the obsolete routes and services of the public transportation, city bus, can not meet the citizens’ needs that shifted as the science park developed in recent years.

Revised
The Hsinchu City Government aggressively advocates public transportation use to alleviate the growing traffic congestion. However, obsolete bus routes and public transportation have failed to satisfy consumer demand, especially given the rapid development of the Hsinchu Science-based Industrial Park in recent years.

範例二
Original
It is a normal practice that private sectors of traditional industry file visitor information as valuable database for relationship maintenance. However, the paper-based fail to present systematic and updated data, causing inefficiency in contacting with these potential customers.

Revised
Private enterprises often enter visitor information into their databases as a form of customer relations management. However, paper-based documentation is often unsystematic and inefficient when identifying and contacting potential customers.

範例(三)
Original
It is certain key information of the data, such as e-mail address or telephone number, becomes invalid due to the difficulty to renew the database.

Revised
The failure to upgrade database contents invalidates outdated information, including e-mail addresses and telephone numbers.

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (11) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a high lipophilicity radiopharmaceutical method that uses two groups of radiochemistry, i.e. aminedithiolate ligand (ONS) and monothiolate coligand (S), to increase the radiopharmaceutical high lipophilicity level in order to maintain a radiopharmaceutical stability and hyperactivities.

達成目標的方法 To do so, aminedithiolate and monothiolate can be used to one part of combined 99mTc’s 1 ligand 99mTc’s 3 ligands. In the new radiopharmaceutical, its radiochemical characteristics can then be analyzed using a high performance liquid chromatographic (HPLC), with its amount subsequently analyzed using a thin layer chromatography (TLC). Next, the characteristics of high lipophilicity can be analyzed using a Partition coefficient Using this radiopharmaceutical sample, its radioactivity can be analyzed as well using an automatic gamma counter. Radiation tracer characteristics can be analyzed using multiple-channel pulse wave equipment. Additionally, the new radiopharmaceutical serum can be injected into laboratory mice, with the radiopharmaceutical uptake number of each mouse organ analyzed as well. Following sacrifice of those mice with significant organs extracted,the organs can be weighed and their radioactivity levels determined as well. Finally, the biodistribution in laboratory mice can be analyzed.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed high lipophilicity radiopharmaceutical method can ensure stability in a mouse’s brain with an uptake number exceeding 15% and other organ’s uptake numbers lower than 30%. New radiopharmaceuticals can maintain stability six hours after fabrication. Blood clearing ratio can then be lower than traditional radiopharmaceuticals used in brain imagery.

領域的貢獻 Results of this study can contribute to efforts to increase the clinical accuracy of diagnosing brain diseases as early as possible for curative purposes, thus enhancing a physician’s ability to achieve ideal patient management, improve a patient’s quality of life, decrease both the mortality rate associated with brain-related diseases and the relapse rate and, ultimately, lower the radiation dose of patients with brain-related diseases.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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