為我的分析研究選擇一個課題時應該問什麼問題? / 創建您的研究論文大綱檢查清單: 研究生英文出版投稿日報 7/10/2014

研究生英文出版投稿日報:

*為我的分析研究選擇一個課題時應該問什麼問題? (PART D)

*創建您的研究論文大綱檢查清單 (PART B)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (172) Publishing Research Data: What’s in it for me?

*避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (5 / 10)

*科學英文論文組織寫作 (11) : (第一部分:背景)

Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

為我的分析研究選擇一個課題時應該問什麼問題? (PART D)

*你寫出一個正式的問題陳述和假設語句來總結你的研究目標是什麼?

*你是否願意在你已經完成的問題陳述和假設而對你的論文進行評估?

*你確定你的研究假設不重複別人已經發表的結果?

*你有沒有特別注意選擇你的標題,以此讀者會期望你畢業論文所提出的貢獻?

*對你的主題感興趣的讀者是否可根據您的標題關鍵字找到相關查詢?

*你有沒有避免和個人利益有關的主題?在您的研究中必須避免這些利益衝突。

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 17)

創建您的研究論文大綱檢查清單 (PART B)

*摘要包括您的主要結果,而不是你所研究領域的一個參考?

*請問您的研究論文對問題的描述加以研究並在理論上和實踐上解釋清楚?

*您的研究論文有明確的目標受眾,如從業者,理論家和政策制定者 ?

*對研究論文大綱主要及次要想法避免給予同等的重視?

*你列出調查選擇問題的方法?

*你的研究論文大綱安排可以讓你的述使故事達到結論高潮?

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 32)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (172) Publishing Research Data: What’s in it for me?
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

避免過度使用It 及 There開頭句 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (5 / 10)

使用It 及 There 開頭的句子容易使文章語多累贅及曖昧不清。除非It 指的是先前句子所提特定的名詞,否則完全的避免 It is 的句型。數個由It is 開頭的句型應去除掉,因為他們對句意並沒幫助。如果不能完全省略去除掉這種句型,則應更為精簡的描述全句。

範例一
Original
It goes without saying that the security issue of electronic data and copyright are getting increasingly attention, however the computer nowadays is not reliable in data protection. Malicious programs such as virus can easily danger the confidential data stored in computers.

Revised
Despite increasing security concerns over electronic data and copyright protection, malicious programs such as viruses can easily compromise confidential data storied in computers.

範例二
Original
It was a trend that mobile phones became more popular from the end of 2002, and the mobile phone number/population percentage was over 100%. It was then that Taiwan became the top one country in the world. At the third season quarter of 2003, it even reached 113%, which mean that there were with 25275000 subscribers at that time and every 100 people have 113 mobile phone numbers in the average.

Revised
Mobile phones have pervaded daily life since the end of 2002, as evidenced by the number of subscribers in Taiwan surpassing the entire population. That percentage increased to 113% by the third quarter of 2003, with 25,275,000 subscribers island wide, or an average of 113 mobile phone numbers per 100 individuals.

範例(三)
Original
It was found from the results of a survey study recently that 6 millions subscribers don’t satisfy their current telecom operators and 4 millions subscribers want to change the operators. Because of the inconvenience and complex of the changing original used number, many subscribers cannot but succumb to the original operator.

Revised
A recent survey indicated that two-thirds of 6,000,000 subscribers dissatisfied with their current service providers want to switch operators. However, many of those individuals find it impossible to do so given the inconvenience of changing the original mobile phone number.

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (11) : (第一部分:背景)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第一部分:背景)

研究建構 : 你研究的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭研究的內容嗎?

研究問題 : 你的研究裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

研究問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制?

研究問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對研究的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

(第一部分:背景) :

研究建構 Originally an agricultural based economy that has shifted to an industrial based one, Taiwan now overproduces agricultural produce that can be found in rice as well as in traditional vegetable and fruit markets. However, even with these traditional markets, effectively dealing with agricultural overproduce is problematic. For agricultural overproduce in the international community, the cellulose microbe can not curtail food processing effectively, largely owing to the natural boundary of enzyme production for a thermostable enzyme.

研究問題 The cellulase in cultural heritage is subjected to hot stability, which is insufficiently high; the enzyme yield is low as well. Additionally, the natural boundary only has a small amount of mold and actinomyceses for the cellulase. Therefore, owing to that the natural boundary is not fast enough, agricultural overproduce can not be processed efficiently.

研究問題的量化 For instance, according to the Environmental Protection Administration of the Republic of China, Taiwan has 6,000,000 tons of agricultural overproduce that must be processed annually. However, this overproduce can not be processed entirely. Taiwan has 2,300,000 tons of agricultural overproduce in rice, while traditional vegetable and fruit markets generate 600,000 tons. Such overproduce can not be processed efficiently.

研究問題的中心 The inability to produce a thermostable enzyme would make it impossible to handle the overwhelming amount of agricultural produce in Taiwan, resulting in serious environmental pollution.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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