當集思廣益新研究論文時我可以做什麼事情? / 如何讓我的研究小組成員舉行頭腦思考會議產生新的研究思路?: 研究生英文出版投稿日報 7/5/2014

研究生英文出版投稿日報:

*當集思廣益新研究論文時我可以做什麼事情? (PART B)

*如何讓我的研究小組成員舉行頭腦思考會議產生新的研究思路? (PART D)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (167) Academic publishing

*強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (14 / 14)

*醫療英文論文組織寫作 (9) : (第二部分:行動)

Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

當集思廣益新研究論文時我可以做什麼事情? (PART B)

*重點學科術語的正式定義。

*考慮一下,如果你的研究對象可以分為不同的類型,並創建一個類型學。

*列出主題的原因清單。

*列出主題的後果。

*列出幾個和主題類似的研究課題,做一個比較,然後進行相似性和差異列表。

*創建時間線,顯示你的主題的歷史發展。

*列表公共政策的爭議以及你的研究課題的問題。

*有關你的論文或論文委員會的教師,編寫一個初步文件,其中包括你感興趣的領域書目和一般問題。

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p.7)

如何讓我的研究小組成員舉行頭腦思考會議產生新的研究思路? (PART D)

*添加其他的想法並做註圈,把其他的想法和黑板小組討論的註圈找出相關性並做出連接箭頭。

*澄清每個建議項目的意義。

*最後,評估不同的競爭思路。

*刪除想法,如果該小組認為不大可行。

*討論研究思路優先性標準:重要,利益和可行性。

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 4)

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強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (14 / 14)

使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰,有些動詞則無法有力闡示一個動作,如 is、are、was、were、has、give、make、come,還有take等都屬此類。
作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。

範例一
Original
Automatic Optical Inspection systems (AOI) are the methods for inspecting layers of printed circuit boards during manufacturing production. By scanning PCB panels into the system, AOI can perform a detection of defects and even mark thee defects directly on the panel. However, existing automatic optical inspection (AOI) systems have been proved unreliable due to inevitable human errors as their efficiencies in detecting pattern’s defects of printed circuit boards, especially when circuit becomes finer and pattern inspection by humans take a great deal of time.

Revised
Automatic optical inspection systems (AOIs) inspect layers of printed circuit boards during manufacturing. By scanning PCB panels into the system, AOI can detect defects and mark them directly on the panel. However, current AOIs lack the ability to detect pattern defects of printed circuit boards efficiently, especially with the increasing shrinking size of circuits and errors caused in pattern inspection manually owing to the considerable amount of time involved.

範例二
Original
Via the comparison results of the peak value of von Mises stress on the BGA tin balls, we found that the optimal design of the PCB with BGA tin balls is using the under-fill glue material. This solution is really effective to strengthen the entire structure of PCB with BGA tin balls. But the side effect is that it will raise the material cost and maintenance cost for a special machine.

Revised
Comparing the results of the peak value of von Mises stress on the BGA tin balls reveals that the optimal design of the PCB with BGA tin balls uses the under-fill glue material. Despite strengthening the entire structure of PCB with BGA tin balls effectively, this solution raises material costs and maintenance costs for a customized machine.

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

醫療英文論文組織寫作 (9) : (第二部分:行動) 研究生英文出版投稿日報

以下為醫療英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a low level dose mode method, capable of accurately predicting the radiation dosage levels in the surrounding environment of a nuclear power plant that could potentially harm humans.

達成目標的方法 To do so, radiation dosage distribution and adverse health impact on neighboring residents can be estimated using the physics dose mode method with simplified calculations of the mean and standard deviation. Biological dose models can then be used to relate the location and biological effects to the controlled exposure factor levels. Next, an optimal combination of process parameters can be obtained using the estimated risk dosage method.

希望的結果 As anticipated, the proposed low level dose mode method can analyze the dosage levels of radiation among neighboring residents of a nearby nuclear power plant. Analysis results of dosage levels inform residents of the health impact of low level radiation, hopefully leading to a lower dose rate and occurrence of cancer.

領域的貢獻 Importantly, the low level dose mode method can enable medical personnel to estimate the radiation dosage distribution among neighboring residents near a nuclear power plant, providing a valuable reference for governmental authorities in establishing legislation to protect inhabitants from unsafe radiation levels.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

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有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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