我如何使用“Delphi technique”產生研究的新思路? / 如何讓我的研究小組成員舉行頭腦思考會議產生新的研究思路?: 研究生英文出版投稿日報 7/3/2014

研究生英文出版投稿日報:

*我如何使用“Delphi technique”產生研究的新思路? (PART B)

*如何讓我的研究小組成員舉行頭腦思考會議產生新的研究思路? (PART B)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (165) Biosis Search Tips

*強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (12 / 14)

*科學英文論文組織寫作 (9) : (第二部分:行動)

Academic publishing news 學術英文出版新聞

我如何使用“Delphi technique”產生研究的新思路? (PART B)

*該研究小組的領導者然後發送第二個問卷,要求受訪者根據一個或多個關鍵詞,如重要性,理論意義和可行性列出先前項目的優先性

*這個過程反覆進行直到研究者得出結論,且額外的重覆也不會改變結果。

*所有參與者得到的群體共識的最終總結。

*最後,鼓勵受訪者給予意見回饋以防萬一他們改變作為群體共識結果的觀點。Guide to Writing

Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p.6 )

如何讓我的研究小組成員舉行頭腦思考會議產生新的研究思路? (PART B)

*開始讓每一個研究組成員提出一個想法。

*強調的是,每一個想法是值得歡迎的,因為即使是“瘋狂”的想法可能會導致好的想法。

*讓人們知道把自己的想法建立在彼此的想法上是好的。

*寫下並張貼生成的每一個想法。

*產生想法的一個長清單,分別思想類別。這可以通過畫在黑板上的概念圖來完成。

*在這樣的概念圖中,圓圈是用來代表的概念或觀點的變量和箭頭用於表示因果效應或關係。

Guide to Writing Empirical Papers, Papers, Theses, and Dissertations by G. David Garson (p. 4)

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強有力的動詞 (精確英文寫作) 英文編修訓練 (12 / 14)

使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰,有些動詞則無法有力闡示一個動作,如 is、are、was、were、has、give、make、come,還有take等都屬此類。
作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。

範例一
Original
Owing to environmental protection, lead and halogen substances are gradually banned for 3C products in Europe, Japan and USA before 2007.

Revised
Environmental concerns led to the eventual banning of lead and halogen substances in 3C products across Europe, Japan and the United States before 2007.

範例二
Original
To meet the higher assembly temperature, it will be a serious costs impact of electrical components without using halogen flame retardants, or even no alternative materials for this request.

Revised
Withstanding a higher assembly temperature significantly increases costs of electrical components when not using halogen flame retardants, especially with no alternative materials currently available.

範例三
Original
The customer feedback the quality and on time delivery problem to our company from last Friday, and ask us for improvement plan by this Friday.

Revised
Feedback received last Friday from a customer on problems involving product quality and on time delivery led to a request for our company to submit a modified strategy within a week.

範例四
Original
Since the lack of an effective proposal for demand from consumer will lead to no in time responses.

Revised
The lack of an effective proposal to respond effectively to consumer demand will decrease productivity.

科技英文編修訓練手冊 柯泰德

科學英文論文組織寫作 (9) : (第二部分:行動)

以下為科學英文研究的基本科技論點:

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 : 研究的目標 ?

達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

希望的結果 : 你希望達成的結果?

領域的貢獻: 你的研究的貢獻?

(第二部分:行動)

研究目標 Based on the above, we should develop a syphilis diagnostic kit, capable of detecting in only one step the anti-treponema specific antibodies in a patient’s serum or plasma binding to the antigen.

達成目標的方法 To do so, the serum samples of syphilis patients can be analyzed. An experiment involving the syphilis diagnostic kit can then be performed with the treponema pallidum antigent TpN 15.TpN17 and TpN 47. Next, the gene recombinant method can be adopted to produce treponemal angiens (TpN 15.TpN17 and TpN 47 fusion protein). Additionally, the fusion protein can be used to achieve protein expression in the E.coli expression system. Moreover, a syphilis recombinant system can be established using recombinant technology.

希望的結果 As anticipated, analysis results can indicate that a fusion protein can be formed using TpN 15.TpN17 and TpN 47. That protein can then be used by gene recombinant technology to achieve procreation on a large scale. Hopefully, product procreation on a large scale can elevate the sensitivity of detecting syphilis disease to within an accuracy of 100%.

領域的貢獻 With a high degree of accuracy and specificity, the syphilis diagnostic kit developed herein can be applied for use in genetic engineering protein construction and reagent key technology. Moreover, the proposed diagnostic kit is highly promising for commercialization if the reagent can be developed successfully, thus reducing the diagnostic time while increasing its accuracy significantly.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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